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My vital verdict
I can't expantiate...
Opener - Guykhena
Metaphor/simile - guykhena
punchlines - jigsaw
wordplay/pun - guykhena
personals - guykhena
rhyme - jigsaw
flow - jigsaw
closer - Tie

guykhena got this. Jigsaw you are good! I love your style, you dont stretch, bars compressed, but you didn't come hard.

My vital verdict

Opener = fyh definately got this
Metaphor/simile = cushy( he has thousands of it, and qualities)
punchlines = cushy
Flow = fyh
Rhyme = cushy
Personal = tie
wordplay/pun = tie
closer = cushy!. . Magnificient closer.

Cushy had complex verse with less fillers unlike fyh, you can see errors in his lines. See;

fuckyouhard is "smokin d.ope!!' .  . .
u'll always "see kushy" in my ashtray!!/

there's notting like kushy, its kush.

i get mean and brutal when kids joist with ma guts/ that's why i have victims lyin in hospital wards/
and i promise ya all/ he'll be "e-raced" once i touch me laptop/
ckushy will "run from the screen" like "computer cords"!!/
.  . let's see what he vomits at worse!/[/quotes]
poor rhyming, Its pronunced hospitle not taal! Cords doesn't rhyme with worse.

[quote].  .my lyrics sting like scary vipers/

Snakes aint bees, they bite

if he's ever "pushin his lucks"  .  .  .then he's "draggin the door bolts!!!"//

what were you doing here Push differs from drag, lock is never a synonym of bolt.

i forgive u cos u "know less" how i wreck lame dummies/

rihanna knowles = know less? Aint the same pronunciation.

at 'mecca' they call me the "hard gee"/ while ur so 'forkin dull' . . .[/qoute] this aint a punchline!

[quote]. .fork loonat111k, am both naughty n
insane[/qoute]

cushy called you a ffag, you even admit it. Kudos to cushy.

[quote]soon i'll be runnin up his place/
in the kitchen, my be forkin up the maids/ at
the parlour, am destroyin the wall portraits!/
shreddin up the 'frames'/ and start stabbin
his "pictures" till i murder his "image"!!!!

forkin/up/the/maids/ - ...troying/the/wall/potraits - shreddin/up/the/frames/ - till i murder his image. . . Poor rhyming! This aint a polysyllabic rhyme, or you are doing 2 syllabic rhyme! This objects you of getting the closer criteria.




Y'all should read verses well, before giving your verdict. With the millions of lines fyh popped, One would think he bagged cushy.

where is Limerick! You should start!

Limerick, you're starting

then;
scarz
Iceskidd
gottoboy
teddybiyasi
ckushy
and fattbabakay.



Any questions?

ok.. I'mma list the names - who will start, the next person... @Teddybiyasi, no topic...

www.nairaland.com/1806990/nl-cypher#1806990.1

www.nairaland.com/1806990/nl-cypher follow the link pls

Ayo, Its the cypher!!! 12line cypher... If you in just tag ''check''. And I'mma arrange who gone start, who gone be next as in I'll list the names according...



Pls! pls!! pls!!! No chatting, you can chat before we kick it on sunday; we would start from sunday.
Pls cooperate with me

Remember its cypher not flow for rank... You continue from where the person before you stops. You start from the last line. You aint kids you know what I mean.

Ok, pls cooperate.
Any questions?

:

Mr cushy

teddybiyasi: hmmmmmmmm

foolishh! You just keep hmmming, you are like shot1 in this shytt.

WARRIBLOOD: dey is somethin bout you i cant just Figure Out...

simple! He likes dicc, he would drool starring at it

ELYMAXiimus: this shadyslim is a coward,, ur fellow guy challenged you to a fight nd ure ducking! After which you've dissed nd dissed... F@g!


For me, this section died when the erosion occured... And oldheads here are'nt helping matters! When someone hu's supposed to put things in order is quick to trade words!
Now you're saying you're through with the section. You should have said so all this while!

There's only one person good enough to take over from mikuz,,,,



guesss hu


















ME!


Vote for me
i promise to make life easier for you here
i'll make sure this section is the best
i'll make you vets
***(campaigning)***

what fight??

mikuz: Someone else should take up the mantle. I've done my bit. I'm through with NL's rap section.

puC

cooger ended your career

iamaromolaeran: I MADE A MISTAKE POSTING HERE IN THE FIRST PLACE....THIS PLACE IS FULL OF HATERS...../// WELL YOU WOULDNT KNOW HOW GOOD A FREESTYLE RAPPER I AM .____U DON KNW HOW MANY BIRTHDAY RAP BATTLES VE WON AND OTHERS.....IF I HAD SAT DOWN TO COMPOSE AND TAKEN TIME I LL' RIP ALL THOSE CHICKENS HERE..THOSE WERE BABY BARS...ANYWAY.THIS IS THE LAST U LL" SEE OF ME.!!)BYE BYE ...CONTINUE TO HATE NIGERIANS AND THEIR ATTITUDE OF NOT LIKING TO SEEING OTHER PPLE PROGRESS

a silly fella would type in cap...

funny shytt. 25 mins.. like You were timing yourself.

iamaromolaeran: I DID THAT IN 25 MINS DUDE.I FIRST WROTE WITH A PEN ..BUT TOOK MORE THAN 25 TYPING IT ..- I WAS EVEN TENSED .JUST CAME BACK FROM WORK..A LOT OF MCEES HERE ARE WACK....IBIME IS ONE OF THE DOPE MCEES THOUGH..I BATTLE MAINLY ON FB AND YOUTUBE..THAT DUDE CALLED SLIM SHADY OR WHATEVER U CAL URSELF .STOP HATING...AM BETTER THAN YOU..OKAY?..U CAN NEVR BE DOPER THAN I AM....

2/10

Its time

sosiqdude: i ain't like doing this shi.t...but you guyz push me to do such thing

you are intimidated to do this?? Lmao

sosiqdude: this man you no go go read your books and take kare of your beging family....u no even fit rap or text xometin but u dey ask for tourney.....
I hate that

why the insult na?

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ELYMAXiimus: naso dem dey do!

I've seen some verses like that here, that would have taken brainstorming to deliver.. Yet they'll say "quick freez"....

Everybody dey form superman

sdfu!!!

@ iam....2/10

Mikuz!! I'm calling you out, Tag my nick if you accept... Dont be a puC just accept.

ELYMAXiimus: this dude is ckushy,,,,

lwkm @ suicide mission

You mean I'm cushy??
You are mad! A lunatic said I'm cooger, now you are calling me cushy

teddybiyasi: suicide mission

who gone die?

ELYMAXiimus: oga, just know that i won't be there to feed you during your exams. . . Since you don't want to learn by yourself,,,, here:
cutting, cumm1ng, coming, cunning, etc and all this rhyme slantly with ran-in, back-in, lacking, rapping etc
mustard rhymes with bastard(though not a hundred percent, but almost!)

if every rapper were to rhyme a hundred percent correct,, the land will covered with the "gloom of wackness"!

are you blind? He typed; Its easy, I brushed him.

A wise person would know he was being sarcastic like he was whinning cooger you are drooling while starring at cooger's dicc

cushy vs coogar

well well well

teddybiyasi: so he knows not how to w/p with metas demn

what are you typing

teddybiyasi: if you need ATTENTION just go to a nearby BARRACK 'n'
if your tot is (I can gain fame with this CHICK) boy u better go to a POETRY cause trying that with me is more like mission impossible
go n ask tom cruise

This bytch is local, as in she doesnt understand english..

Poetry/poultry??

Lmao, stop the forming!! Your english is pour/poor!! Hohohohohohohoho

teddybiyasi: if you need ATTENTION just go to a nearby BARRACK 'n'
if your tot is (I can gain fame with this CHICK) boy u better go to a POETRY cause trying that with me is more like mission impossible
go n ask tom cruise

stop the forming!