Moscorpion:
Nice job, thank Silverspoon

thanks boss

Opinions please... Was Nidda wrong? Were the Peagries right to kill her? What should Addin do? What do you think will eventually happen to him?... I just want to listen to opinions, not that they'll influence the story, as the story is already complete here...

Stunt: Then, order it.
Cylin: Yeah, do. I’m in full support.
Nonk: She has told her husband about us. And we don’t know if her son is also aware.
Stunt: All of them are expendable. The fact that she is taking her son brain training makes it seems as if it’s because of us.
Nonk: Good. (he picks up his phone, and makes a call) It’s me… Assassination… A plux EX mission… Target; Nidda… Meet me for full details
O O O O O
(back)
(Addin is already crying heavily. He begins to recollect him mum’s memories, and these keep hurting his heart the more).
Mr Cylin: (looks at him angrily) We weren’t wrong to take her out. She stepped on our toes. She stepped on painful toes.
Addin: (still crying) But you… you shouldn’t… have killed her! You ruined my life with what you did.
Mr Cylin: (surprised) We shouldn’t have killed her? She wanted the money. Before we can give up the money, then we would have given up our blood. And Nidda? She wouldn’t hesitate. She didn’t hesitate when she killed Mr Sameh.
* * * * *
(outside)
(Seman is in a room, Enoph and Reas runs in).
Enoph: (shocked) What did you say you find out?
Seman: (on the system) The meeting is taking too much time, so I got suspicious. Checking, I realized that our electronic devices have been disabled, I mean the ones inside the meeting room. I tried to hack but I am not able to. I later discover that Melinone Interpol must have been installed in that room, and activated from somewhere else.
Enoph: (surprised) That’s Addin’s and Jetar’s works. Addin was the one disguising as Mr Abrah. I knew it. How was he able to fool me?
Reas: (confused. To Seman) Open the door.
Seman: I am not able to. It has been locked from the inside with an application I am not able to hack yet. It may take time before I do.
Reas: Then, we should just use C4 to break it.
Enoph: Addin is very wise. I am sure he will have Mr Cylin by the door. If we use C4, we will only harm Mr Cylin.
Reas: (realizes this) So, what do we do?
Enoph: Addin will never pass through the door, he will fly down the window using rope. We must be waiting for him.
Reas: What if he has killed Mr Cylin?
Enoph: (confused) I don’t think Addin is capable of doing such. We just have to hope that he doesn’t. If we should attack from the window, once Addin notices us, he may kill Mr Cylin immediately. So we have to wait till he is ready to escape.
Reas: Okay.
Enoph: Some men should stay by the entrance in case he tries to come out from there. And I will be waiting for him with other men, by the window if he tries to come from there. Also, I know Jetar will be around somewhere with car. Check around and find her.
* * * * *
(Addin talks through comm.)
Addin: (through comm.) It’s time to leave. Hope you are ready.
Jetar: Okay, I will be waiting.
Addin: Don’t come until the time I ask you to. And make sure you aren’t discovered.
* * * * *
(After some minutes, Addin opens the door of the entrance, and comes out. He comes out as if he has been beaten mercilessly. He is having tape covering his mouth. He is waving his hands like he wants help. The men noticing this, quickly report to Enoph before shooting him).
Enemy: (through comm., to Enoph) Sir, Addin has come out. He is having a tape covering his mouth. And he is very weak, like someone that has beaten.
Enoph: (he is downstairs, by the window with other men targeting their guns towards the window. They are waiting for Addin to come down. He realizes something) Don’t shoot. That’s not Addin, that’s Mr Cylin. Addin must have disguised Mr Cylin as himself. Addin himself will never come out easily like that. I repeat, don’t shoot. Just move back, and be careful.
Enemy: (through comm.) Okay sir. (to other men) Don’t shoot. Move back (the men retreat).
(Enoph and his men see Mr Cylin having suit on, rolling down from a rope by the window. He is holding a gun, pointing to their direction).
Enoph: (to his men) This is not Mr Cylin, it’s Addin. Shoot to death. (he and his men begin to shoot Mr Cylin without stopping. Finally he rolls down dead. Enoph checks his body and confirms that he is dead. He is happy that Addin is finally dead. He tries to remove the wax on his face to show that it is really Addin, but he finds no wax. He is confused as he begins to use knife to pierce Mr Cylin’s face. Alas! It really is Mr Cylin, and not Addin. He and his men are confused and scared that they actually shot Mr Cylin and not Addin. He quickly talks through comm.) That’s Addin with you, shoot to death.
Addin: (through comm.) Now.
(Before the men could shoot Addin, flame starts to cover the whole place. Addin quickly uses his handkerchief to cover his nose, and begins to walk past the men. They are not able to see him because of the flame. He brings out his gun, and begins to shoot any of the men he meets on his way. He climbs a stair going upstairs, and reaches the roof of the building. Then a chopper lands on the roof. Addin quickly rushes towards the chopper. Reas comes from behind and begins to shoot to Addin’s direction).
Reas: (through comm.) Jetar is here in a chopper. Addin is running towards it.
Enoph: (shocked and confused) Make sure Addin doesn’t escape. He must not.
Reas: Copied. (he runs towards Addin, as he continues to shoot towards him. Addin makes sure to avoid the shots as he keeps diving. He finally reaches the chopper and enters. Jetar flies the chopper away immediately. Reas doesn’t stop as he continues to shoot at the chopper but they escape. Reas is so hurt) They escaped. I was too late.
Enoph: (cries out loud) Ah! Addin. You escaped again. I failed again. Ah! Where did I get this all wrong?
Man: (one of the men standing beside him. He is so scared) We mistakenly killed Mr Cylin. What are we going to do?
Enoph: Who killed Mr Cylin? It wasn’t us, it was Addin. It should be broadcasted tomorrow morning. Addin killed Director of SSU.


“The next day, newspaper headline”
Addin, the bloody murderer continues on his killing spree as he assassinated the Director of State Security Unit yesterday. There is unrest among the citizens of Notis, as this murderer is becoming unpredictable in his assassinations.

HazardMan:
Finally i'm here,
i nearly gave up from the beginning cause of how the english was constructed but i couldn't and just needed to be patient,
i'm now enjoying it like never before
thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

thanks so much... more updates coming soon...

Mr Cylin: 46 years ago, Mr Sameh took the five of us to Clish for a special training. He watched us carefully before he selected us. We were under his secret watch for about five years. Actually, he watched more than five children. But out of these children, he selected just five of us. Nidda was the youngest then, 10years. He took us away secretly from our parent, more of like kidnapping. We were all orphans as at this time. He promised to take care of us, since we were orphan. We believed him, and stayed with him all along. He took really good care of us, that we were really starting to love him even more than we loved our parents. It all started one day, when he gathered us in a room.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(The five are sitting on chairs, while Mr Sameh is standing in front of them).
Mr Sameh: You are all going to Clish for a particular training. (they all look at him in amazement).
Nidda: To Clish? For a particular training? (surprised)
Mr Sameh: Yes, you will spend exactly ten year in Clish.
Stunt: What’s the training for?
Mr Sameh: This country is currently into the development of a deadly nuclear weapon. According to my calculations, they will be through with the development in 19-20 years. So, a year before they are through, I will contest for the presidential position. I have plans that will make me be voted in easily. Before then, you would have finished with your training. I, in presidential position, and you five, turned to Peagries, we are going to conquer the world.
Stunt: (confused) I seriously don’t understand all what you are saying.
Nonk: (also confused) Me too.
Mr Sameh: (before anyone else could talk) Don’t worry, Chan will explain everything to you. You will understand everything during the course of the training.
Nidda: (curious) Who is Chan?
Mr Sameh: The man that will solely train you.
Nidda: Okay.
Mr Sameh: I will only be in Clish twice. The time I will be taking you there and the time I will be taking you away from there; that’s in the next ten years.
Cylin: Is this Chan really capable of training us for good ten years?
Mr Sameh: (smiles) He is more than capable. Anyway, you will have to assassinate him the next time I will be visiting you.
Stunt: You mean in the next ten years, that we will be finishing the training?
Mr Sameh: (still smiling) Accurately.
Nidda: (curious) But why?
Mr Sameh: Because the root of the mission must only be known by the six of us.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: The picture you are holding was taken just before we went to Clish. We printed five copies of it, and we all had a copy each. Ten years later, we finished the training. As we were told, we assassinated Chan, so that the mission will be a close secret among us. Some years later, we discovered Nidda has fallen in love with a wrong person while we were in Clish. One of our principles was never to fall in love until we are through with the mission, in order not to compromise the mission. But unknown to us, while we were still training in Clish, Nidda had fallen in love with Cole.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda in a restaurant eating, Cole brings his tray and sits in front of her)
Cole: (looks at Nidda) Won’t it be too awkward if I say I love you?
Nidda: (smiles, chuckles) You are funny? Do you think I am one of those girls you talk to, take home and then to your bed?
Cole: Mere looking at you, I know you aren’t a cheap girl. I just said it exactly the way it came from my heart.
Nidda: Forget it! I don’t have time for this. (two other men are coming to their direction. They look as if they are surprised with what they are seeing, as they clap their hands as they move closer).
Dura: (still clapping his hands) I don’t believe this.
Nity: Me too! Cole talking to a girl? This is unbelievable.
Nidda: (stands up) You’ve got to excuse me.
Dura: (looks at her) Are you leaving because of us?
Nidda: No! (smiles) I just have to leave (she goes out but hides at the door, eavesdropping at what they are saying).
Nity: (to Cole) Did you really talk to that girl?
Cole: I think so.
Dura: Cole? Talked to a girl? Was it business or sort?
Cole: Love.
Nity: (shocked) You? Cole? Love? I will be happy if that really happens.
Dura: (to Nity) I don’t believe him, it’s a lie.
Cole: I also don’t believe it. I’ve never loved in my life. But once I saw that girl, it’s as if I just realize exactly what love is.
Nity: (smiles) Are you sure, Cole? Are you really sure you love a girl?
Dura: (laughs) Oh my God! This calls for celebration… (Nidda sighs and leaves the place).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: It was later, when we got back to Notis that we realized that Nidda was in secret relationship while we were in Clish. We told Nidda to stop it, but she wouldn’t listen. So, we decided to take Cole out.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda enters the room, and sees Stunt doing something on the system. As soon as Stunt realizes that Nidda is in the room, he quickly minimizes the dialogue box on the screen).
Stunt: (trembling a bit) Hey, what’s up?
Nidda: (frustrated) I was about to ask you. What did you just minimize?
Stunt: It’s nothing.
Nidda: Really? Then let me see it.
Stunt: It’s porn, bad porn. I don’t think you will want to see that.
Nidda: (got fooled) Oh, bad boy. Let me just leave you (as she is about to leave, she notices a comm. in Stunt’s ear. She quickly removes it and puts in on her ear).
Nonk: (through comm.) Report. Target in sight.
Nidda: (shocked) What? (she moves close to the system and maximizes the dialogue box. It shows Nonk on top of a building with a sniper) Who is the target?
Nonk: (shocked, through comm.) Nidda? Shit.
Stunt: (confused) Nobody, really nobody.
Nidda: (still shocked) You said it is porn, but this is a mission. (she wants to press some keys on the keyboard, but Stunt holds her hands. She twists his hands and throws him on the floor. She now presses those keys and on the screen, is Cole. Nidda is shocked as she sees Cole) Cole is the target?
Stunt: Cole is in Notis, Nidda. He just arrived today. We know he is here because of you. We can’t let him jeopardize our mission, Nidda.
Nidda: (sad) He is not here because of me. He is here to honour the ambassador’s position bestowed on him.
Nonk: (through comm.) He accepted the position, because he knows he will get to meet you again in Notis.
Nidda: (wants to cry) Please, stop this.
Nonk: I can’t, Nidda. This is a direct order from Mr Sameh.
Nidda: (sobbing) You can’t do this mission without me. (she brings out a knife from her pocket, and puts it on her own neck) Once Cole is gone, I am gone.
Stunt: You have to stop this, Nidda. We can’t leave Cole. He is going to compromise our mission.
Nidda: (still holding the knife on her neck) Maybe this is going to be last words. I love you, Cole. (she closes her eyes).
Stunt: (clicks on a filter beside the system) Nonk, abort the mission.
Nonk: Mission terminated. (sighs heavily).
Nidda: (already crying heavily as she looks at the screen, opens her eyes) Oh, my, my Cole (crying as she drops the knife).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: Any attempt made to take Cole out, Nidda always threatened us with her life. Hell was let loose when Nidda told us that she is getting married just few months to our mission.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Mr Sameh: (angrily) What? Getting married? Are you out of right senses?
Nidda: (scared) I have to. Cole got the ambassador position, and they are telling him to get married immediately to the woman he loves, or they will get him a wife in a month.
Mr Sameh: (angry) So what? Just five or six months to our mission. Are you crazy, Nidda?
Nidda: (confused) There’s nothing I can do about. I can’t loose Cole to another lady. I won’t be able to forgive myself.
Mr Sameh: (more angry) Nidda, you can’t do this! We must be operating secretly, like snakes under green grasses. If you get married, it won’t be possible for you, Nidda!
Nidda: (determined) There’s nothing I can do about it (she angrily leaves the room)
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: (smiles) Nidda got married, and we allowed her, just because we know we can’t go on with the mission without her. During the time of the mission, (chuckles) you were already in Nidda’s stomach.
Addin: (shocked) Hmmmm!
Mr Cylin: The mission… (he is being interrupted).
Addin: Don’t tell me about the mission, I already know about it.
Mr Cylin: Really? Well, Nidda had your pregnancy during the time of the mission. Going to the Eldion house, killing a lot of people, your mother had you in her stomach. Maybe that’s why you are this tough. She was a smart lady. With the way she killed and led the mission, no one could ever suspect that she was pregnant.
Addin: (sighs) Hmmm! The Eldion house, the very last room, why couldn’t you just use C4 to blow it from the outside, get in, and take the device?
Mr Cylin: (laughs bitterly) You are very funny. Why did we have to go through all those stresses of the security systems, if it is possible to use C4 from the outside?
Addin: Oh! (realizes this)
Mr Cylin: We finished the mission, and Nidda continued her marital life with Cole. Tell me, aren’t we right to kill Nidda and her husband after the mission, considering that she almost messed up our plans before?
Addin: (shocked) So, you killed her?
Mr Cylin: (shakes head in disagreement) No, we didn’t. Despite all her betrayal, we still loved her, and let her be. Ten years later, Mr Sameh called us all again. There was going to be a repetition of the mission, since we still had the nuclear weapon with us.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Nidda: (shocked, and stands up angrily) Impossible!
Mr Sameh: Pillarghton is also a very large state. We can double our wealth with the repetition of the mission. (all other four except Nidda, agrees with him).
Nidda: (looks at them in amazement) You all agree with him, right? You are all senseless. We are not going to do the mission. It is impossible.
Mr Sameh: (smiles at Nidda) We really needed you in the first mission. But now, Nidda, we can do this mission without you.
Nidda: (raises her eyebrows, angrily) Really? (she angrily leaves the room).
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: Oh! So you had to kill her?
Mr Cylin: (shakes head in disagreement) We may wanted her out of the mission but we never wanted to kill Nidda. One day, we caught Nidda reading about nuclear weapons secretly.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda quickly switches off the system, as soon as the four enters).
Cylin: (suspicious) Why did you switch off the system, Nidda?
Nidda: Nothing. Just through.
Luto: (moves close to the table and sees a book there) What’s this? (he picks it up, the other four joins him to read the content).
Cylin: (curious) About nuclear weapon?
Stunt: (confused) Why are you studying about nuclear weapon, Nidda?
Nidda: (blinks eyes) Nothing. Just studying.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: We didn’t suspect Nidda until we saw her in the room we kept the nuclear device.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Mr Sameh and the four barges in, and sees Nidda with an instrument in her hand. She laughs as she sees them).
Mr Sameh: (shocked) Nidda, what did you do?
Nidda: It is now useless. (laughs again) The nuclear device is now useless.
Stunt: (shocked) What?
Nidda: I have disarmed it, and it can never be re-armed. It is spoilt, it is gone, it is useless. (she laughs again).
Nonk: (angrily brings out his gun and points it at Nidda) Are you fucking out of your mind? (really angry).
Nidda: (look at him) Pull! Pull! Pull the trigger! Pull the fucking trigger, you motherfucker! Pull it.
Nonk: (cocks his gun) Do you think I can’t? (he wants to shoot her, but he controls himself, and doesn’t shoot).
Nidda: (hisses at him, and faces Mr Sameh) No more mission! (she laughs out of the room).
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: Oh! She betrayed you, so you had to kill her?
Mr Cylin: (angrily, and shouts out) Noooo! We forgave her! We still forgave Nidda. (tears start to form in his eyes). We so much loved Nidda and still forgave her until she pushed us to the wall. One day, Nidda travelled to the out-of-luck Luckfort, the sate we based our first mission on, five years later after she disarmed the device.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda is walking on the very rough road, then suddenly some men, three in number, attacks her. They are putting on very tattered clothes. As the first one wants to slap her, she grabs his hand and throws him away. She gives another one a slap on his chest, and pushes the last to the floor. They realize they can’t take her, and quickly run away. A lady also in tattered cloth, who have been watching the whole scene runs to Nidda).
Cudy: (smiles) You must be from another state.
Nidda: (they both start to walk down the road together) Yeah!
Cudy: Oh! I see.
Nidda: Is that how men disturb you in this state?
Cudy: (smiles) No! They didn’t attack you for money, or to rape you. They wanted to collect your clothes from you.
Nidda: (surprised) Clothes? A lady’s cloth?
Cudy: (smiles again) Yeah! Their clothes are tattered. They just need something better to cover their body.
Nidda: Is this state that bad?
Cudy: (stops walking and faces Nidda, she talks emotionally) Ever since the time of the cold black war, we’ve been suffering. The government sold our state and embezzled the money. They left us in the crisis, without helping us. Other states won’t let us into their territories. We are really suffering. (she continues walking and Nidda follows her). Down there is my house, would you like to see?
Nidda: (nods her head) Yeah! (they get to the lady’s house. Nidda sees some people fetching water from a well beside the house. Efes, Cudy’s daughter wants to take in a pot she had just fetched water into. But to Nidda’s amazement, flood concentrated of much sand is in the pot). Flood?
Cudy: (smiles) Don’t be surprised. That’s what we drink. We don’t have any other choice.
Nidda: (still surprised) Than to drink flood?
Cudy: Our plants aren’t even growing foods. We eat weeds.
Nidda: (shocked) Weed?
Cudy: Yeah, we are used to it. We’ve been eating weed and drinking flood for a very long time, and we didn’t die.
Nidda: (still surprised, faces Efes) I have some buns here with me, wouldn’t you mind to eat?
Efes: (happily) Heh! Buns? I wouldn’t.
Nidda: Yeah! (she brings out a nylon full of buns from her bag. As soon as she brings the nylon out, all the hungry children in the neighbourhood surrounds her).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: She was heartbroken that she was one of those responsible for the situation, suffering, in Luckfort. She then brought up an impossible idea. That we should return the money back to Luckfort.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Mr Sameh: (shocked) Return what?
Nidda: (looks sober) You can’t just imagine the suffering these people are in. They drink wrong water, eat wrong food, they are into wrong life. We have to return their money back.
Nonk: Nidda, are you crazy? (shocked).
Mr Sameh: (still shocked) What the hell is our concern with them?
Nidda: (still sober) Don’t you people have human feelings?
Luto: (shocked) You are married, you now have a child, so you now know about human feelings? Right?
Nidda: (sober) You people have to understand what I… (she is being interrupted).
Cylin: (angrily) Nidda, is it only you? Are you the only one in this group? Why must you always want wrong things? (Nidda looks at him, feeling confused and leaves the room angrily).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: Later, Mr Sameh and we four excluding Nidda brought up an idea. We were scared to tell Nidda, because she might oppose it. Anyway, we called her and told her.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Nidda: (shocked) What? A terrorist organization? With the weapon we got from Luckfort? You people must be joking.
Mr Sameh: These weapons are just idle. Your skills are going down. We have to do something fast. We have to start using these weapons and technologies for our own good. We have to start making huge profit with them.
Nidda: (smiles) Please, whisper to my ears that you are joking.
Mr Sameh: (moves closer to Nidda, and whispers to her ear) We aren’t joking.
Nidda: (angrily) You bastard. (she brings out his gun, and shoots Mr Sameh dead instantly) You bastard. (the other four are surprised. They quickly run to Mr Sameh but he is already dead).
Nonk: (angry) Nidda, what did you just do? (holding the dead body of Mr Sameh).
Cylin: (angry) Nidda, you are really going beyond your boundary.
Stunt: Is it only you? Why must you be giving us problem all the time?
Luto: Do you have a death wish? (he wants to slap Nidda, but she dodges his attacks and pushes him away).
Nidda: (angrily) You had better don’t get yourself killed. (she angrily leaves the room).
- - - - -
(still in flashback)
(Nidda and Cole are in a room. Cole is holding The Peagries’ clothes he found in Nidda’s bag. He really needs an explanation).
Cole: (so surprised) Just as you do lie anytime you are always with the Peagries, why aren’t you lying about the cloth? That it was just an exhibit of a crime you are investigating, any lie. Why are you telling me the whole truth now?
Nidda: Because I really am ready to return the money back to the state. Because now, I really regret my deeds.
Cole: Then why haven’t you returned the money?
Nidda: Sweetheart, it’s not easy. These guys, they are not easy to break.
Cole: (wants to leave the room angrily, dropping the uniform on the bed) You either take those guys, or your marriage.
Nidda: (quickly holds him) My marriage. I am solely going to collect the money and return it. Solely, I am going to, I promise. My new dream is to return the money and rename the state.
- - - - -
(still in flashback)
(all the four in a room, they are in deep thoughts)
Stunt: (scared) I confirmed the recording, she really promised Cole to attack us, take the money and return it.
Nonk: (angry) How dare she?
Cylin: (scared) How dare she betray us like this?
Luto: (scared) But let’s talk fact. Solely, Nidda can really attack us and collect the money.
Stunt: That’s what I am also scared of. If Nidda should turn her back on us, hmmmm. (sighs heavily).
Cylin: We maybe four, and she’s just one, but that doesn’t stop her from taking us all out. Nidda is dangerous. She is a witch, snake-like witch.
Luto: (to Nonk) We have to do something.
Nonk: Should we…? (gives a deadly-eye signal).
Luto: Do you think it will be possible? (curious).
Nonk: Yeah, it will just be clinical.

Addin: (looks at him daring) Have you ever seen a lion fight? (he gathers his strength, and faces Mr Cylin seriously. He skillfully makes some moves towards Mr Cylin. Scared of these moves, Mr Cylin moves backward. Also taking this advantage, Addin gives him a skillful heavy punch that makes Mr Cylin to fall down immediately. He skillfully does some stunts to get up and faces Addin. Like he did earlier, he wants to rush Addin with blows. Just like earlier, Addin is able to dodge them. It gets to the very last blow, that Addin is supposed not to be able to dodge. But to Mr Cylin’s surprise, he dodges it and uses the counter-attack to deal with Mr Cylin. From the counter-attack, Mr Cylin receives a heavy blow on his mouth. Even before he could feel the pain, there is another blow on his forehead. Just after that one, there’s another on his stomach. He does not even know where the pains are coming from, all he knows is that he is not alright. Addin does not even allow him to settle as he rushes blows to all over his body. Addin stops when he realizes Mr Cylin is already feeling like he’s going to faint. His eyeballs are turning up and down, left and right. Just as he is out of the dizziness, Addin was already waiting for him, as he gives him an extremely heavy blow on his face. In so much agony, he falls down immediately. Shaking, he tries to get up as he doesn’t want to give up. Addin laughs at him, as he has reasons for letting him get up. Without even able to see Addin, he stretches his hands to fight Addin. His plans working, Addin grabs his right hand and twists it until several bones break. Mr Cylin shouts very loud, as he is in much pain. His right hand is no more okay. He feels a lot of pain in even lifting it. Addin smiles, and gets to his left hand. He does the same thing, that now, Mr Cylin is weak on both hands. He cries out loud, but his noise can’t be heard outside the room. Addin brings up another rope and ties him to the chair again. He then pours tea in a tea cup on the table on his face).
Mr Cylin: (in much pain) Ouuccchhh!!!
Addin: (using a handkerchief to wipe off the blood on his face) Tear the rope now.
Mr Cylin: (wants to tear the rope with his hand, but as he tries to lift the hands, he feels much pain that he quickly stops) Ooooh, ooooh… (in great pain)
Addin: (brings out the picture) Who are the people in this picture? I am sure, that you were the one standing last on the right, Mr Cylin. And also, my mother was at the middle. But who is Stunt? Who is Nonk? And who is Luto?
Mr Cylin: (shocked as he sees the picture) Where did you see this picture? (looks desperate) I am sorry, but you can’t get any information from me.
Addin: (smiles) Is it because of the bullet-proof you are putting on? (Mr Cylin is shocked to hear this. Addin unties him, and then undresses him. He leaves only panties on his body, and then ties him back).
Mr Cylin: (still adamant) Kill me! Kill me now! You won’t be able to get any information from me.
Addin: Really? (he cocks his gun and points it to Mr Cylin. Mr Cylin looks at him somehow scared, not sure, if he is really going to shoot him. Addin then shoots him on his right leg).
Mr Cylin: (in much pain) Yeee! Yeeeeeh! My leg! Yeee! Please, stop… stop… stop this (his leg really hurts).
Addin: Are you ready to talk?
Mr Cylin: (still in much pain) Nooo! I am… not saying anything.
Addin: Really? Then your left leg is next. (he cocks his gun and points it to Mr Cylin’s left leg).
Mr Cylin: (very scared) Mr, the director of CIS. Mr Nonk, and Mr Stunt, the Minister and Deputy Minister of Security Affairs respectively.
Addin: (shocked) Minister, Deputy-Minister of Security Affairs, and the director of CIS? And you, director of SSU. Four of you, The Peagries?
Mr Cylin: (in pain) Yes, yes!
Addin: (still shocked) What’s your relationship with the former president, Mr Sameh? And also, the former Vice-director of SSU, Mr Cummings?
Mr Cylin: Mr Sameh was our leader. We just framed Mr Cummings so that we won’t be discovered nor investigated.
Addin: (surprised) So, Mr Sameh put you all in these high positions so that you will be able to control any investigation about the case.
Mr Cylin: No! That was just aimed to confuse anybody that wanted to investigate secretly. Mr Sameh only helped us to be ordinary security agents back then. You should know, your mum was one of us, and she was just an ordinary security agent then. Anybody that’s investigating would only suspect those that got high positions, and will find nothing.
Addin: But what’s up with your high positions now?
Mr Cylin: We were just ordinary agents then. Anybody that was investigating would be targeting people with high ranks. They investigated them secretly, found nothing and dropped the case. When we were sure nobody is investigating, then we played our trick. The trick is rapid promotion.
Addin: (shocked) Oh! Instead of going to high positions straight, and be suspected, you got low ranks and used rapid promotions to get to high ranks which are your main aims. With this method, nobody will ever suspect you. (he shakes his head).
Mr Cylin: (he is still in pain, but a little bit relieved) Yeah, you got it. Ah! You shouldn’t have shot me. We could have solved matter without making me suffer.
Addin: I want the truth. And the truth can only be gotten when person saying it needs to say it in order to end his suffering.
Mr Cylin: Huh! You are son of a bitch, you know?
Addin: Then, why did you kill the girl in the middle? (tears are forming in his eyes) And also, why were you trying to kill her son?
Mr Cylin: Even if you should shoot my left leg, I am not talking about you and your mother.
Addin: It seems you are now somehow relieved from the right leg pain, and you’ve forgotten the pain you got initially.
Mr Cylin: I trained for ten years, do you think I have not witnessed these kind of pain before?
Addin: You trained for ten years for a particular mission, not for a particular torture.
Mr Cylin: (spits on his face) Whatever.
Addin: (cleans up the spit on his face) Okay! (he cocks his gun and shoots Mr Cylin on his left leg).
Mr Cylin: (in great pain, as he shouts out loud) Yeeeeh! Yeeeeh!! Yeeeeeh!!!
Addin: Spit on my face again, if you really won’t talk.
Mr Cylin: (still in much pain) Aaaah! Yeeeh! (with great force, he spits on Addin’s face) Aaaah!
Addin: I never expected to break you with a gun (he cleans the spit. He brings a bottle filled with a particular liquid and also a syringe. He fills the syringe with the liquid in the bottle and then faces Mr Cylin). 10CC’s of Xyalonine induces the same amount of pain a pregnant woman experiences during labour. Why did you kill my mother?
Mr Cylin: (angrily) You son of a bitch.
Addin: Really? (he injects the needle into Mr Cylin’s body, and releases the liquid content. Immediately the liquid gets into Mr Cylin’s body systems, he begins to feel a greater pain. he has never experienced that kind of pain in his life. All part of his body hurts. His eyes become red, and his body is not alright. He feels like he is dying).
Mr Cylin: Aaaaaaah! Just kill… kill… me! Kill me.
Addin: Why did you kill my mother?
Mr Cylin: Kill me… instead (he spits on his face).
Addin: You are truly strong. (he cleans the spit and brings out another bottle. He fills the syringe with the content and faces Mr Cylin) I think 90CC’s will end your life, your pitiful life.
Mr Cylin: Yeah, just kill me.
Addin: Oh, I am sorry. I was just kidding you. Xyalonine doesn’t kill, it only induces pain. 90CC’s will induce 9 times the pain you had just now.
Mr Cylin: (raises his eyebrows surprised) 9…9…9 times… the pain… I am already…in?
Addin: (dusts the needle of the syringe) I’m afraid yes. (he moves closer to Mr Cylin to inject the needle into him, but then Mr Cylin interrupts him).
Mr Cylin: (interrupts him) Stop! Stop! I will talk.
Addin: Really? (he stops)
Mr Cylin: Yeah! (still in pain).
Addin: Only the truth, please. Once I discover any element of lie in what you want to say, I won’t hesitate to stick this into your skull.
Mr Cylin: Yeah! The truth, and the truth only. We had to kill Nidda because she betrayed us. I am ready to tell you everything, just don’t inject me with that thin, please. (still in pain).
Addin: (looks at him concentrated) Just go on.

ACT ONE SCENE FOUR
(Enoph, Reas, and Mr Cylin in a room).
Enoph: (to Mr Cylin) But I think you said The Peagries have suspended missions till later.
Mr Cylin: Yeah, we have suspended carrying out of mission. But we still receive missions, and we will operate them once Nidda’s son is out.
Enoph: (to Reas) Okay. Who is he?
Reas: Mr Abrah.
Enoph: (to Mr Cylin) Why do you want us to secure your meeting with him?
Mr Cylin: (chuckles) He is a new customer. And I don’t see any reason why someone like Mr Muser would be targeted.
Enoph: (curious) So that Mr Abrah, wants Mr Muser dead. Mr Muser, I think that’s the Commissioner of Education.
Mr Cylin: Yes, he is. Also, the amount Mr Abrah is paying for Mr Muser’s life is just too high for one man.
Enoph: And today is your meeting day. Why did you choose today? It’s too soon.
Mr Cylin: I have chosen today, you just have to secure the meeting, that’s all.
Enoph: (anxious) I am suspecting that it may be Addin, trying to disguise himself. (both Mr Cylin and Reas are shocked).
Mr Cylin: You have a point. (surprised).
Reas: (shocked) That’s truly possible. (he picks up the intercom) Come in, with a system (after some seconds, Seman enters the room).
Seman: Here I am, sir!
Reas: Find out about Mr Abrah we are meeting today.
Seman: Okay, a minute please (he presses some keys) He is a notorious drug dealer. He deals drugs with numerous foreign countries. He is… (he is being interrupted).
Enoph: (interrupts him) Addin can easily make up those information. He would know we would search about Mr Abrah.
Mr Cylin: (curious) So, what do we do?
Enoph: We will have to meet him, as planned.
Mr Cylin: (scared) Me? I can’t meet with him.
Enoph: Addin is not someone that kills like that. But since you will be the only one in the meeting room, you will be putting on a body hub, in case he shoots you.
Mr Cylin: (a little bit relieved) Good. But what if he doesn’t use gun? And uses other weapons?
Enoph: That’s the trap. Immediately you notice any suspicious thing, you just have to press the red button. Do you understand?
Cylin: Yeah, I do.
Enoph: To Reas. If it is truly Addin, we will barge in immediately we hear the alert of the red key. And also, in such a mission, I know one more thing, that would help us take Addin.
Reas: (curious) What’s that?
Enoph: If Addin wants to embark on such a mission, his escape plan will be through a rope. He knows how to fly with a rope perfectly. That will surely be his plan to escape.
Reas: (realizing this) Hmmm.
Enoph: There will be two teams. First team will barge in, and the other will be waiting for him even if he has to use rope.
* * * * *
(The same day)
(Addin disguises himself like a serious businessman. He puts foams on his body to make him look fat. He puts a wax on his face that makes him to look like an entirely different person. He looks just like the person in the picture on The Peagries’ system. He is putting on a wig, and fake mustache on his cheek. He is holding a briefcase.
Reas searches his body for weapons, but he has none. Enoph is just beside Reas, looking at Addin suspiciously, as if he is suspecting something).
Enoph: Check his briefcase.
Addin: (using a different, computer-induced voice) There’s nothing spectacular there.
Enoph: (to Reas) Check it.
Reas: Yes, sir! (he collects the briefcase, but he is not able to open it, as it is asking for code) What’s the code?
Addin: (sighs, and clears throat) 44787.
Reas: 44787 (pronounces out as he sets it. The briefcase opens immediately. There are dollars neatly packed in the briefcase. They are well preserved that one couldn’t easily tell that they are fake) It is money, sir! (to Enoph).
Enoph: (sighs) Check the beneath, weapons may have been kept underneath the dollars.
Reas: Okay, sir. (he begins to check under the dollars. Suddenly, he sees a nylon that has been sealed. He brings it out, surprised) What’s this?
Enoph: (surprised) What’s this? Tear the nylon.
Reas: Yes sir! (he uses a knife to tear the nylon, but only some papers are inside).
Addin: (smiles) Those are the operation documents.
Reas: (checking the papers) It’s true, sir. They are operation documents. (to Enoph).
Enoph: (disappointed) We are sorry, sir.
Addin: (still smiling) No problem.
Enoph: (to Reas) Pack them back into the briefcase, and pass him.
Reas: Yes, sir! (he packs the money and documents back into the briefcase, closes the briefcase, and gives it back to Addin) Let’s go, sir.
Addin: (collects his briefcase) Yeah. (he follows Reas to the door of a room).
Reas: You can enter, he is in there.
Addin: Thanks (he enters the room, and locks the door from inside. Mr Cylin is sitting on a chair, also in complete suit).
Jetar: (somewhere else, through comm.) Done. All their electronic devices in the room won’t be able to work, except ours. Also, the soundproof is on. And you, have you locked the door with the device?
Addin: (through comm.) Yeah, just complete the lockdown. They have just one entrance to her, so they can’t enter through another place. Just make sure you lock that completely, so they aren’t able to open it from outside.
Mr Cylin: (surprised) Who are you talking to? (he secretly uses his leg step on the red key).
Addin: (to Mr Cylin) I am not yet ready for you. (he puts his briefcase on the table. Instead of the password he gave to Reas, he uses another password to open the briefcase. The briefcase has different segments. Different passwords open different segments. The segment he just opens consists of weapons. He brings out a rope from the segment, and uses it to tie Mr Cylin tightly to his chair)
Mr Cylin: (shocked) What’s the meaning of this?
Addin: (through comm.) Aren’t you through?
Jetar: (after some seconds) Done! They won’t be able to open the door from outside.
Addin: (through comm.) You shouldn’t come into the building. It’s as if they were waiting for me, there are just more than enough men. You should wait for me outside.
Jetar: Copy that.
Mr Cylin: (shocked) So, you are Addin.
Addin: (he removes the wig, moustache and the wax that now reveals that he is Addin. Mr Cylins is surprised and scared. He also removes all the foams on his body) These were making me uncomfortable.
Mr Cylin: It is better you don’t do anything stupid. This is The Peagries. They will come in anytime from now, you should know that.
Addin: (smiles) Do you think I don’t know what I’m doing when I said there must be no camera in the room?
Mr Cylin: (surprised) Even if there is no camera in the room, they will know something is not right, and come in.
Addin: (moves closer to him, bends down, and holds his right leg up which shows the red key. Mr Cylin is surprised) Is it because of this? None of your electronic device in this room is working. The door has been locked, and it can’t be opened from outside. Also, I have made this room soundproof. So if you should cry out like a new born baby, your voice won’t be heard outside.
Mr Cylin: (shocked) You, are really a true son of your mother.
Addin: (shocked, as he hears this) Anyway, let’s get to business.
Mr Cylin: (smiles) I don’t think you know who I am (he twists his hands in a particular way, that tear the rope immediately. He stands up and skillfully gives Addin a strong blow on his face. Addin goes down, and his face already turned red. Before he could get up, he has been given some more heavy kicks in his stomach. Mr Cylin brings out a gun, and points it at him. Just as he is about to shoot, Addin uses his leg to kick him on his legs. He also falls down and his gun falls from his hand. He and Addin get up and face each other, both ready for hand-to-hand combat. It wasn’t as Addin as thought, as Mr Cylin is really a skillful fighter.
He rushes several blows to Addin’s direction, but Addin is able to dodge them. It was just the last that meets him on his arm. Taking this advantage, Mr Cylin gives him a heavier blow on the other arm. Wanting to finish the duel quickly, he gives Addin tonnes of blows on his face. In less than a minute, Addin is already bleeding from his nose and mouth, and also his face is now totally red. He is now in much pain, as he can’t see very well again).
O O O O O
(flashback)
Masit: But will you tell me about the only one person that you desperately need to find. The one that makes you very determined in learning how to use a gun.
Addin: (tears start to drop from his eyes) Do you know what? If I ever get tired, or not willing to work in training, immediately the only one person comes into my mind that I am actually doing all these to find him or her, I will have much more strength in me like that of a lion.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: (smiles) With the way you give us problems, I didn’t know you are so weak like this.
Addin: (looks at him daring) Have you ever seen a lion fight?

4 to go

ACT ONE SCENE THREE
(Addin and Jetar are on the system, just as the video chat request comes on).
Addin: (accepts the request) Mary.
Mary: (angrily) What did you do? Why did you have to run away from the prison? Don’t you know you will be on the wanted list?
Addin: (smiles) Even The Peagries can’t track me, how will mere policemen be able to track me?
Mary: Nonetheless, you shouldn’t have run away. Just as you planned earlier, the autopsy on my dad, the direction of the bullet, the bullet not matching those from your gun etc, these are the things that will make them realize you didn’t shoot my father. And you will be released peacefully.
Addin: That was our plan initially but The Peagries assassinated Tunis. I luckily escaped the assassination attempt.
Mary: (shocked) Tunis is dead?
Addin: Yeah! If I should stay, I may be framed of his murder, so I have to leave that very night.
Mary: (sad) Oh! I understand.
Addin: Tunis, before he died, told me that there are more mysteries about… (he is being interrupted).
Mary: (interrupts him) Please, Addin. To be truthful, my father didn’t tell me about the mysteries. But I think Tunis should have told you what I told him.
Addin: (sighs) Yeah.
Mary: Thanks (she cuts the video chat).
Jetar: (hands over a book to Addin) This is the book.
Addin: Yeah! (he collects the book, his mother’s past works, and begins to open through it. After some minutes of searching, he sees the exact picture just as he had said earlier. Happily, he brings out the picture) Oh, this it.
Jetar: (happy and anxious) Oh, that’s good.
Addin: (reads out the names beneath each individual in the picture) Nonk, Stunt, Nidda, Luto, Cylin.
Jetar: (surprised) Nidda?
Addin: (confused) Nidda, that’s my mother.
Jetar: (confused) But how come?
Addin: Was my mother a part of the Five Peagries? The deadly Peagries, was my mother one of them?
Jetar: It’s not possible, Addin.
Addin: (tears start to roll out of his eyes) With this, she must had been really one of them.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Mrs Cole: (struggles to get near the car. She takes her phone and uses to dial Majh’s phone. Majh picks up from inside the car) Majh… Majh, please drive off! They will come after you.
Majh: (crying very loudly) Who are they? The police officers?
Mrs Cole: No, not the police officers, but the people responsible for all these. I know what they are after. They will surely kill me, and I am pretty sure you will be part of their plan. Please, I’ve already taught you how to drive a car. Just drive away before… (that same police officer that shot her earlier shoots her again, but this time, at her back) Yeh!!! (she shouts louder this time around as she goes down totally).
Majh: (also cries louder) Mum! Mum!! Mum!!!
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: (tears already flowing out of his eyes) She knew them. She knew what they were after! She really was one of them.
Jetar: (sad) Addin, please stop this. We still don’t know why they killed her.
Addin: (clears his tears) It’s high time we found the other four. (desperately).
Jetar: But how?
Addin: The Peagries is a top assassination organization. Use the best search engine to search for top assassination cases.
Jetar: (nods her head affirmatively) Yeah! (she gets to the system, and opens the best search engine that’s on their system) Top assassination cases. (she types as she pronounces. She now clicks on “Search” link. The screen brings a list and she clicks on a particular link. She then presses some keys) This list has 3 assassination ways that had ever happened in history. (reads out the content out loud) First, is the assassination of Carrero Blanco. Two commandos were assigned to take him out. They had to pose as students of Sculpture in order to rent a basement apartment on a street Carrero Blanco regularly travelled on his way to Mass. Within a week or two to the assassination, they started digging a tunnel under the road. They started to use props which helped them t stop the roof falls of the tunnel, but did little about the smelly sewage and noxious gas of the tunnel which really disturbed their health pretty big time. Yet the men persevered, and one day the tunnel was finally complete; filled with explosives. The job was done on the day the target’s car drove over the tunnel they had filled to the brim with explosives. Their giant tunnel-bomb was a success beyond belief when detonated immediately his car stepped on it. It hurled Carrero Blanco’s car five storeys into the air. It just flat out flew over a church and to the other side, where it landed on a second storey terrace.
Addin: Next?
Jetar: Second, is the assassination of Tallah Fam. He was assassinated by a fuel station worker. Through the fuel dispenser, he dispensed both fuel and astrolite explosives in form of liquid into his fuel tank. Astrolite was invented by Chemist Gerald Hurst in 1960s during his employment with Atlas Powder Company. The astrolite family consists of two compounds, Astolite G and Astrolite A. Both are two-part liquid-state high explosives mixtures, composed of ammonium nitrate oxidizer and hydroizine rocket fuel. The astrolite got detonated few hours after it has been planted in the fuel tank. The car got blasted and the target is assassinated.
Addin: Hmmm, the last?
Jetar: The third is the assassination of Don Chick. He was assassinated by a letter bomb. On the day of his misery, the mail was delivered to his house by an up-till-date unidentified mail-man. His security who got the mail gave it to him, at his compound, and left the scene. On opening, the letter bomb got detonated, killed him and seriously injured his driver that was supposed to take him on an outing, within the radius.
Addin: (surprised) Take him on which outing?
Jetar: (presses some keys) That day was his party’s primary election, and he was one of the contestants.
Addin: (racks his brain) Who were his contestants?
Jetar: Port Rent, Takitaki, and Ledge Vest. Why are you interested in this very assassination?
Addin: The first involved digging up of a tunnel. During the digging or planting, they might have been discovered and their cover would be blown. This is not perfect enough for an organization like The Peagries. The second, it is easy to trace the petrol station, and uncover the assassin. Top organization like The Peagries won’t involve themselves in such an operation. But the third, it’s impossible to get the sender of the mail, if the mail-man is still up-till-date not identified. This assassination was really done by The Peagries.
Jetar: (realizing this) Yeah, you’re right. And with the fact that it was sent to him on his party’s primary election day, one of the other contestants must had been responsible for the deed.
Addin: (closes his eyes) Don’t you think that if any of the other contestants was responsible, the person wouldn’t have chosen the election day as the d-day to avoid suspicion? I think someone wanted to direct the case in a wrong way. So the person chose the election day, so that people would think it was the other contestants that were responsible for the assassination.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Majh: Though a rope is being wound on the old man’s neck, but I checked the images several times, the neck doesn’t seem strangled.
Mrs Cole: (excited) Hmmm, hmmm!! So what?
Majh: So someone must be thinking of framing the gate man of the murder because that specific rope is actually from his quarters.
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: I miss my mum. She really taught me a lot, so this kind of case can’t fool me again.
Jetar: (looks somehow convinced) You may really be right (nodding her head affirmatively). But who could have done it?
Addin: (opens his eyes) The person responsible is the person that would benefit most from his death. Check how his properties were distributed.
Jetar: (presses some keys) At the time, he was just 40. He had never thought he would die so soon, he didn’t create a will. All his properties and belongings are now being owned by his legal wife, Tara Chic.
Addin: (he smiles) Wait! Open the full story on how he was assassinated.
Jetar: I think I have summarized that before. What do you need the full story for?
Addin: Just do it.
Jetar: (opens it, and reads it to a part) …On getting out, he and his wife were still holding hands, walking together to the car. Before getting to the car, his wife’s phone rang which she had to pick. She stayed behind answering the phone, while her husband went ahead to the car. Before Don enters the car, a security gave him the letter… (she is being interrupted).
Addin: (interrupts her) His wife was responsible.
Jetar: (a little bit confused) Do you think that with these mere facts, we can conclude she was responsible?
Addin: I am not so sure, but we have to hope she was.
Jetar: So, what’s our next step?
Addin: We have to visit her. Find out everything we will need about her. We are going to her place today.
Jetar: (surprised) Today?
* * * * *
(Tara’s house. Both Addin and Jetar are with her).
Tara: (shocked) Do you know whom Don Chic was? Do you know what he was to me? I was his legal wife.
Addin: (standing while Jetar is sitting opposite Tara) We know.
Tara: And you are saying I was responsible for his assassination.
Addin: We are very sure of it.
Tara: (shocked) I think I need to call the police. (she picks her phone and dials a number).
Jetar: We know you used The Peagries service to execute him.
Tara: (shocked as she drops her phone) The Peagries?
Addin: Yes, The Peagries.
Tara: (surprised) But… but (she stammers).
Addin: (realizes they’ve got her, so he quickly plays up) We have secret evidence, which shows that you hired The Peagries to assassinate your husband.
Tara: (scared) Please, we can easily resolve this among ourselves. We don’t need to involve the policemen.
Addin: If we want to get you arrested, you won’t see us two here. This place would have already been full of policemen. We just ne a little help from you.
Tara: (scared, as she trembles) As long as you don’t reveal my secret, I am fully ready to help you.
Addin: We just need you to tell us how to contact The Peagries, and we won’t expose you.
Tara: (shocked) Ha! You are CIDs. You want to use me to arrest The Peagries, and then come back for me (becomes more scared).
Jetar: (smiles) Do you watch news?
Tara: (still trembling) Yes, very well.
Jetar: Don’t you recognize him? The prime suspect behind Mr Dart’s death, who escaped prison while assassinating a policeman and a prisoner.
Addin: (faces her very well) Yes, that’s me.
Tara: (shocked) The murderer that was broadcasted on news even just this morning?
Addin: Yes, that’s me (smiles).
Tara: (still surprised) Addin, the bloody murderer? In my house? Please, what do you really want?
Addin: You should know now that I am not a policeman. And also, (talking with loud voice to scare Tara) You should know that it’s just too easy for me to kill anybody.
Tara: (scared, trembling) Oh, how to contact… to contact… contact… The Peagries? (she quickly brings out a small paper from a drawer) You just have to send a message to the email in this paper. Who you are, the target, the payment method, etc, are what are supposed to be in the message. They will reply you back on how to meet, where to meet, etc.
Addin: (glad) Are you sure? (still shouting fiercely).
Tara: (scared and trembling) Yes, very sure. Please, don’t kill me.
Addin: (to Jetar) Put yourself in this woman’s shoes, what would you do once I leave?
Jetar: I? So simple. I will just alert The Peagries that the famous murderer, Addin came to me and asked me how to contact them, which I told him in order to keep my life safe.
Tara: (shocked and very scared) Please, I will not do such a thing. Please, I beg you, don’t kill me.
Addin: (fiercely) I won’t kill you. But take this ring (he brings out a ring from his pocket). Put it on your finger, any. It has a tracking device. With it, I will be able to see you, and hear everything you say anywhere. So I will be sure, that you won’t contact the Peagries.
Tara: (collects it anxiously, and puts it on a particular finger on her right hand, still trembling) Oh, I will keep it just like my wedding ring.
Addin: Once you remove the ring, oh my God, you should know you are dead.

dejiolaniyan:
Fantastic story,i got blown by the unending suspense....just have to come out from being a ghost reader to a commenter since i really nned to finish with this thriller.

thanks for that... one update just for that...

oseriki9:

Its mostly typos. The Nigerian english is showing small small

lol... i understand... don't worry about that as long as you enjoy the story... I'll make necessary corrections on the soft copy with me when i have the time... I'm very busy now, and just squeezing my time to type and upload... thanks anyway...

lol, it's still 5 to go oooo... and I'm sorry i won't update before getting them... if the story is truly interesting, i know I'll get even more than that... if not, gbam...

hand iz itching me to update, but i don't want to until i get my comments complete... 5 to go...

oseriki9:
Nice story but there are room for improvements.

please note them... if it's typo and grammatical errors, then don't worry... i know myself... i just type without checking properly... i just want people to enjoy the storyline... when I'm done typing, that's when I'm gonna sit down and make necessary corrections in all my stories...

but if it's other areas, kindly note them...

will continue when my comments are complete jawe... till then

Favyo:
Oh, goodday silverspoon. How has it been and ur promise of "deadly mission"? Nice one with this but I didn't forget ur promise though...

something that I've started, and mentioned you right from the start... you even got my first mention...

ACT ONE SCENE TWO
(Addin and Mary can be seen in bed, romancing each other sexily. They are having so much of their fun for almost about half an hour. Suddenly, Jetar opens the door with force and is shocked with what she sees).
Jetar: (shocked) What the Bleep! (she angrily brings out her gun and shoots Addin. Addin dies immediately. She shoots Mary too, and then herself. She also dies immediately. Mary is also about to die as she shouts out of her bad nightmare).
Mary: (shouts out of her nightmare) Yeh! (her assistant, Fisher runs in).
Fisher: (to Mary) You had that nightmare again, right?
Mary: (sighs) Yeah, tonight’s is even worse.
Fisher: Do you still want to keep this secret?
Mary: I may be on the loosing side if I should reveal the secret to Addin now. Just let me wait for the right time.
Fisher: Okay, then!
Mary: Make sure you continue the investigation tomorrow.
Fisher: Yes, ma!


“The next day, newspaper headline”
The prime suspect of Mr Dart’s murder, killed a policeman and a prisoner yesterday, before escaping the prison during the ruckus. The Policeman has been recognized as Mr Verre, while the prisoner is in the person of Mr Cummings Tunis. Policemen are on the lookout for this bloody murderer.

Favyo:
Awwwnn... Lord not now Tunis, pls, just come back!

lol... everyone is expendable in this mission... the story is complete here with me... and i can tell you that I'm not so sure even Addin survived till the end... his survival:death is at 50:50... there are still so many things involved in the story that are beyond Addin himself... read on and enjoy...

Addin: (chuckles sadly) But how did you get into prison, since that time?
Tunis: (smiles) Because of this drawing (as he brings out a drawing. In the drawing is The Peagries’ logo).
Addin: (surprised) The Peagries’ logo?
Tunis: Yes. I was able to see this logo on the head-band of the woman that saved me. I was so young but I was good at drawing. My mother used to supply me with drawing and painting materials then as toys to play with. I took drawing as play, and it becomes a part of me. With my knowledge in drawing, I was able to draw this logo. I gave the logo drawing to Lawyer Nair, telling him that the bearer saved me, when he asked me how I was saved. But some things led to others, and I found myself in prison since then.
Addin: (sad) But what about the Peagries’ organization?
Tunis: In my investigations, I discovered that Mr Sameh, the president then, appointed about 50-60 individuals to some high positions in Notis. The five peagries were secretly among these people. He secretly appointed the very much people, to hide these five, and so that people won’t suspect him. His main aim is to put the Peagries in control of Notis, so that there won’t be any further investigation on the case. If the case wants to be investigated further, these unidentified people will just obstruct it. The arms and ammunitions that were gotten from Luckfort then, are now being used by the organization. After the mission, the five peagries created a top assassination organization and named it after them. The Peagries’ Organization is the best assassination organization in Notis. Their operations are always done secretly and perfectly. They have never failed before. Outsiders that know about the Peagries in this world are not up to five. Once you know anything about The Peagries, you will immediately be on their death list.
Addin: (sighs) Hmmm!
Tunis: But I was surprised when Mary told me that you are always able to escape The Peagries’ attacks. It mustn’t have been easy, so you must really be an expert. Not even just an expert, an intelligent expert at that.
Addin: (surprised) How do you know about Mary?
Tunis: (smiles) Don’t you know? We were three investigating the Peagries, - I, Mr Lever and Mr Dart.
Addin: But both Mr Dart and Mary have never mentioned anything about you.
Tunis: (smiles) Yeah! They can’t. As for Mr Dart, he claimed on TV back then, that he knew about all the mysteries behind your parents’ death.
Addin: He used that as bait for the Peagries to attack him, so that I will be able to investigate it.
Tunis: (smiles again) It seems you don’t know much. Let me open up some more secrets to you. Even before he sacrificed his life, he had already known about The Peagries. (Addin is surprised). Then, we three didn’t have much clues about the Peagries. Just as he claimed, Mr Dart really knows about your parent’s death.
Addin: (surprised) Isn’t it by the Peagries?
Tunis: It was by the Peagries. But even more than the Peagries, there are still some unknown mysteries in your parent’s death.
Addin: (confused) What’s that?
Tunis: (nods head in disagreement) That, I don’t know. Mr Dart took what he knew into his grave. He just told me that there are still mysteries behind your parent’s death, but he didn’t tell me the mysteries. He told me that by his death, he will be able to atone for not telling you the mysteries because he couldn’t. He wanted us to use his death to reveal The Peagries’ identity and bring them down.
Addin: (confused) I am really confused right now.
Tunis: Don’t be. And as for Mary, before Mr Dart’s death, he told me his work in the investigation will be continued by Mary.
Addin: (still confused) But why didn’t Mary tell me about these?
Tunis: Mary said she is in another deep investigation apart from The Peagries’ investigation. She doesn’t want to investigate about the Peagries with you people, but I don’t know the reason. Also, take note of this. Don’t ever talk about The Peagries to Mary at all.
Addin: Why?
Tunis: That’s what she requested of me. She said I should tell you not to talk about The Peagries with her, because it may obstruct her secret organization.
* * * * *
(somewhere else)
(Enoph barges in angrily)
Enoph: What did you say? (angrily)
Seman: The cameras in the cell have been destroyed beforehand. The close circuits were hacked and blocked. A repetition video was just played since morning, that I thought there had been no activity inside the jail, and no action from Addin. But I am now able to hack the circuits back just now. A policeman entered the cell some minutes ago.
Enoph: (surprised) Oh! That’s Addin. (to Reas) Call Mr Verre immediately.
Reas: Okay. (he makes a call through his phone) Start immediately!
* * * * *
(back in the cell)
Tunis: And lastly, take this (he hands over a picture to Addin. In the picture, there are five children holding one another. There is a girl of about 10years old in the middle. Their mean age is around 12years old) That’s the only lead I have on the Peagries. This picture was taken 46 years ago. Those are the five peagries, when they were still young.
Addin: (shocked, as he stares at the picture) My mother has exactly this picture in the record of her past works.
Tunis: (surprised) Maybe you are mistaken.
Addin: (confused) No, I am not.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Addin: …maybe my mother didn’t leave the original book. (as he wants to close the book, he sees the exact picture in a glance. He then closes the book and puts it in a bag).
O O O O O
(back)
Tunis: (confused) Are you sure?
Addin: Yeah! And also, names were written at the bottom of each of those in the picture.
Tunis: (shocked) What are the names?
Addin: (confused) It was just a glance, so I wasn’t able to read the names. But once I get home, I will look for it, and check the names.
Tunis: (confused) I am surprised at what you are saying as I still can’t believe it. But if you check the picture, and you confirm that it’s the same, kindly get back to me and tell me those names.
Addin: Yeah, I will.
Tunis: Read out what was written at the back of the picture.
Addin: (turns the picture around) Off to Clise, Clish? Off to Clish.
Tunis: Yeah! Off to Clish! It seems these five were selected by Mr Sameh to go to Clish then, and then come back later.
Addin: So, they must had gone to Clish for some special training or sort.
Tunis: Exactly.
Addin: Yeah! (he keeps the picture in his pocket).
Tunis: I lied to you earlier. The mysteries that I said Mr Dart didn’t tell me, he actually told me but he said I shouldn’t tell anyone.
Addin: (curious) Please, tell me.
Tunis: I shouldn’t tell you but I will, so it will ease your own investigations. Mr Dart was the one that… (a gas is being sprayed into the cell. The gas gets to Addin and Tunis. Since Addin has a handkerchief covering his nose and mouth, the gas doesn’t enter his nose. He quickly covers Tunis’s nose, but he is too late. Tunis has already inhaled the gas. Addin realizes this when Tunis starts to foam out from his mouth. Addin is somehow shocked, sad and confused).
Addin: (shocked) You can’t die, you can’t. (he knows that he is supposed to remove his handkerchief, to know the particular gas being sprayed, and how to treat it. But there are still remnants of the gas everywhere. With Tunis foaming immediately, the poisonous gas must be highly concentrated. He quickly runs out of the cell to alert other policemen about the gas in the cell but it is too late. Before he is discovered, he quickly leaves the prison during the pandemonium. A car is already waiting for him outside the gate. He takes it and leaves the national prison).

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Mr Cummings: (surprised) Me? Their leader? I can’t ever be involved in something of such.
Nair: I know. But they are even saying you were the one that asked assassins to attack you and your family, in order to cover up your deeds.
Mr Cummings: (shocked) How will I ask assassins to kill my family?
Nair: They think you can do such, considering the amount of money involved. They think you know the whereabout of the money, and will want you to find it for them. There’s no other clue about the money, except your involvement.
Mr Cummings: (scared) But what do we do?
Nair: (points to Mr Bile) He is ready to stand for you in court.
Mr Bile: I have perfect records about you. You’ve never embezzled nor laundered money before. You were always content with your salary. You always refuse bonuses to avoid corruption. There are also numerous good deeds of yours in documents. How can someone like that do such a thing? I will make sure I let them investigate the matter further.
Nair: And also the doctor. (he presses a button beside him, and the medical doctor, Mr Driven enters after some seconds).
Mr Driven: You had a typical kind of shock during the period of the execution of your family. With my knowledge, this shock only occurs if something unexpected happens to the victim. If you actually sent the assassin, you wouldn’t be so surprised, and you shouldn’t have had such a shock. (holding some medical documents of his claims) Also, I have some other proofs that will help you in court.
- - - - -
(still in flashback)
(somewhere else)
Judge: (on call) I won’t be able to make those judgments without necessary proofs.
Caller: (face not shown) Don’t worry, there will be.
- - - - -
(In court. The judge in front, the lawyers and bailiff are in their normal position. Mr Cummings who hasn’t fully recovered, in the four-corner, half-human size box and people are sitting at the usual position. They have already started the case).
Lawyer Nair: I will like to call out my first witness in person of Mr Bile.
Bailiff: Mr Bile should please, step up. (Mr Bile moves the second box beside the one Mr Cummings is).
Lawyer Nair: Mr Bile, what do you have to say about the case at hand?
Mr Bile: For me, Mr Cummings is not a kind of person that can do such a thing… (he is being interrupted).
Lawyer Rime: (the opposing lawyer, interrupts him) Objection, My Lord.
Judge: Objection overruled. (Lawyer Rime sits down).
Mr Bile: As I was saying, Mr Cummings is not a kind of person that can do such a thing, but it seems he is responsible for this.
Mr Cummings: (shocked) What? (looks at Mr Bile surprisingly).
Mr Bile: I and Mr Cummings are best of friends. We were at a club having that day when he told me that something big is going to happen. He told me he may loose his family but the sacrifice will be worth it. I thought he was joking, but I decided to wiretap his phone because I begin to suspect him for what he said. I later discovered that he calls an untappable unknown number at nights only. Their conversations are always frustrating and I don’t usually understand them as they talk in code languages. What he said last in the conversation was “Attack from arrears, S3514773331, C4, W1”. But I don’t understand the code. This is the file of all their conversations. (brings out a file).
Lawyer Rime: (he collects the file) The code may hold an important message. The first of all the three may mean something, and the figures may mean the numbers of the thing. S, S, S, may mean security and the sum of the numbers here on S is 37. C may mean, maybe children which is 4 here. W may mean wife, which is 1 here. (to Mr Cummings) Do you have 37 security men, 4 children, and 1 wife?
Mr Cummings: (confused) I don’t even know about the conversation. I don’t know about everything he’s saying. They are all lies.
Lawyer Rime: Just answer the question. Do you have 37 security men, 4 children, and a wife?
Mr Cummings: Yes! (all the people in the court are surprised and they begin to murmur).
Lawyer Rime: (smiles. Mr Bile) You can go and have your seat. (to Lawyer Nair) Do you have any other witness?
Lawyer Nair: (so confused) Yes! Doctor Driven. (to the already seated Mr Bile) But this wasn’t what you told me earlier.
Mr Bile: I am just saying the truth.
Bailiff: Doctor Driven, should please, step up. (Doctor Driven enters the box).
Lawyer Nair: (to Doctor Driven) What do you have to say on this case?
Doctor Driven: I don’t think I have much to day. Firstly, the strangest thing there is just that an entirely different bullet was used in shooting Mr Cummings’ personal assistant, Lawn. The bullet matches those from Mr Cummings’ personal gun. Fingerprints test made on the gun, but only Mr Cumming’s fingerprints were found on it (all the people in the court raises the loudness of the murmurs) Also, the knife that was used in cutting off Mr Cummings’ thumb was discovered at the scene. The knife only has Mr Cummings’ fingerprints. I am not sure, but I think Mr Cummings cut off his own thumb, maybe to cover his deeds.(all the people are even more surprised).
Lawyer Nair: (shocked) What of the shock you mentioned before?
Doctor Driven: (acting surprised) Shock? I have mentioned about any shock to you.
Lawyer Nair: (shocked) But this wasn’t what you told me earlier.
Doctor Driven: I don’t know what you are talking about, I am only saying what I confirmed.
(after some minutes)
Judge: This is my judgment. Mr Cummings should be tortured until he confesses about The Peagries, the nuclear device, and the huge amount of money in sum of $949 billion. Since it is glaring that he knows about all these things but he is trying to cover them up, the tortures should be so hard that will make him confess forcefully.
O O O O O
(back)
Tunis: That was how my father died from the torturing. I think the judgment was even decided on purpose to get my father eliminated.

O O O O O
(flashback)
(From the rears, The five peagries enter Mr Cummings apartment silently. They are in total black covering their faces, using headbands with their logo on it. Their logo is a skeleton with Letter ‘P’ beneath it. Nidda uses her hand to make some signals to others without talking. Understanding the order, they all split into different directions. Using silencer on a pistol, Nidda is able to take out three securities simultaneously. She begins to shoot all the securities coming her way).
Head of Security: (in a very loud voice) W are under attack. Be at… (he is being shot down by Nonk. Nonk continues to shoot at all the securities beside them.
Stunt and Cylin are on the same side. They aren’t even wasting time in taking out the securities at all. They know they must not waste any time.
Luto sits down somewhere putting laptop on his lap and talking through comm.)
Luto: P2 on east, west is covered. P3 on north, and P5 should be in south. P1, clear the way, three enemies and continue with operation.
The Peagries: Copied! (all the other three split into their respective points. Nidda shoots down the three enemies on her way, to a staircase. She throws away her gun, and continues to move up. A security comes to her. She gives him a blow on his nose, and he dies instantly. She continues to move up, as two enemies come to her. With her respective hands, she gives them a blow each, in their stomach and throws them down the staircase. A security is coming to her with great force. As he gets to her, she slightly steps away from where she is, and uses her leg to kick the security’s leg. He falls down the step immediately. She gives another security and elbow attack and he dies instantly).
Nonk: Done!
Stunt: Done!
Cylin: Done!
Nidda: Cleared. First floor (almost all the securities have been cleared. All other Peagries meet Nidda at the first floor. They continue to move inside, beating off all the remaining securities, coming their way. They all get into a flat in the building. In the sitting room, there are Mr Cummings’ wife and children hiding behind chairs. Nonk shoots down the wife, while Cylin shoots a child down. Nidda enters a room and comes out seconds later with a parcel in her hand. She wants to take the parcel outside when Cylin asks her to stop).
Cylin: (to Nidda) Stop!
Nidda: (stops immediately) What’s the problem?
Cylin: What’s in there?
Nidda: C4.
Cylin: Okay! (he continues to look for the remaining children while Nidda quickly leaves the room. They are able to kill two more children, and are looking for the fourth, but not able to find him. Later, Nidda joins them).
Nidda: Let’s go to the room, we have things to do. (Stunt quickly walks to where Nidda is).
Stunt: I think one of the children is not in there.
Nidda: (chuckles) So, why are you telling me?
Stunt: I just think you may have something to do with it. (Cylin walks up to the place).
Cylin: (to Nidda) What were you taking away the other time?
Nidda: (blinks eyes) It’s nothing.
Cylin: Are you sure?
Nidda: Yes!
Cylin: Oh! But you said it was C4.
Nidda: Aarrghh! Yeah, it’s C4. I used it in breaking a door where some securities were hiding.
Stunt: (not convinced) I don’t think I believe you.
Nidda: (chuckles) Let’s continue with the mission. That’s an order. (they continue to walk, until they reach a room).
Lawn: (to Mr Cummings) Sir, what do we do?
Mr Cummings: Go and find a … (he stops talking when Nidda grabs Lawn on his neck, and throws him on the floor. He is still alive though. Nidda points her gun to Mr Cummings).
Nidda: Cooperate with us, and there won’t be any problem.
Mr Cummings: (he is not even trembling. He sums up his courage to talk with them) What do you people want?
Nidda: (smiles) I like people like you. (she shoots Lawn and he dies instantly. This makes Mr Cummings a little bit scared. She brings out a laptop and presses some keys on it. A dialogue box is being shown, asking for accessing thumbprint. The laptop is a screen-touch device) Just your thumbprint.
Mr Cummings: (reads the content of the file inwardly, and becomes extremely scared) You want me to wire all the money from the cold black war to another account, please tell me you are joking.
Nidda: (cocks her gun and points it to his head) Maybe I am not joking.
Mr Cummings: (smiles bitterly with no fear in his voice) You will have to cut off my thumb before you can do the thumbprint.
Nidda: (smiles) Oh! What an advice! (she brings out a very sharp knife from her pocket. Once, she cuts out Mr Cummings thumb down. Mr Cummings groan in much pain).
Mr Cummings: (in great pain) What… have you done?
Nidda: I cut off your thumb just as you advised me. (she takes the thumb and uses it to do the thumbprint. The access is granted. She smiles) Mission complete and successful.
Peagries: Good job. (they all smile happily. They tie Mr Cummings to his chair tightly and leave).
O O O O O
(back)
Tunis: A lady out of those people kept me in a box and put me in a safe place. But my mother and siblings were all killed.
Addin: But you and your father were not killed. Why?
Tunis: I don’t know why I wasn’t. Maybe it’s because I was the youngest, I was just 6 then. But for my father, they wanted to frame him of the crimes, so that the case wouldn’t be investigated further. The Peagries released the recording of them stealing the nuclear device just after the attack on us.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Lawyer Nair and another person go to visit Mr Cummings at the hospital).
Mr Cummings: (shocked) They are accusing me? Of what?
Nair: Following the President’s order, some computer experts have been able to retrieve the CCTV data of how Eldion house was infiltrated. The culprits mentioned your name as being their leader.

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I've mentioned you right from the start now, but you no turn up till now...
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O O O O O
(flashback)
Jeon: (pointing to the room) He is in there.
Mr Cummings: Okay. (he enters the room and sees the President) Your man said you need to talk to me secretly. What’s that about, sir?
Mr Sameh: Have your seat.
Mr Cummings: Yes, sir! (he sits down)
Mr Sameh: I have to discuss something very important with you.
Mr Cummings: (curious) What’s that, sir?
Mr Sameh: Based on the nuclear device crisis, what do you think we should do?
Mr Cummings: (confused) I really don’t know, sir.
Mr Sameh: (takes a sip of his drink) I think we should introduce the cold black war.
Mr Cummings: (shocked, as he coughs out) Cold black war?
Mr Sameh: Yes, that’s the only thing we can do for now.
Mr Cummings: (confused) But why don’t you just bring up the idea yourself at the conference meeting tomorrow?
Mr Sameh: (smiles) Before you became the Vice director of SSU, I promised you that you will always have my support. This is one of my promises to you. If you introduce the cold black war idea, and succeeded in carrying out, don’t you know that you will be highly respected? You may even be voted as the new Luckfort’s governor.
Mr Cummings: (convinced, nodding his head affirmatively) Maybe you are right. Maybe the cold black war is the necessary call to our crisis.
Mr Sameh: (happily) But there’s one more thing. You must not tell anybody about know that I gave you the idea.
Mr Cummings: Why?
Mr Sameh: They will believe I am giving you preferential treatment by giving you such an idea.
- - - - -
(still in flashback)
(The conference meeting. All the important figures are inside the room. The meeting has already started, and it is Mr Cummings’ turn to bring up an idea).
Dunlop: Mr Cummings, sir, do you have any idea?
Mr Cummings: (sighs heavily) I think the cold black war is what we have to implement. (all the people in the room are shocked to hear this, as they look at him with amazement).
Mr Bile: (surprised) Which cold black war are you talking about?
Mr Cummings: The cold black war as jokingly written by Author Mr Green in his book, “New Universe Revolution”.
Mr Rock: (still surprised) In the book, Mr Green joked that cold black war means selling a state or country, in time of crisis, to purchase a better state or country.
Mr Cummings: Exactly. This Peagries just claimed that they will detonate the nuclear device in few months. I think the cold black war is what we have to implement. If the nuclear device should be detonated in Luckfort, the state will just be gone. Since it is not the middle of the country, but just the biggest in the country, the nuclear device will take out only the state and some small nearby states like Fimey, Shelley and Mondalon. We have to sell these states, so if the bomb should be detonated, we won’t loose anything. Once the bomb is used once, it is gone. With the large amount of money we would realize from selling the states, we can create or buy another greater state.
Mr Weel: (sighs) But how do we sell a state?
Mr Cummings: (smiles) What are you talking about again? Luckfort has numerous source of income. Many refineries, big and expensive machines, best and most expensive arms and ammunitions, most revised technologies and so on. If everything sellable in Luckfort and those small states are sold, we will be making upto $600 billion by calculations. We will also request another large amount of money from the federal government. With this amount of money, we can renovate the bombed Luckfort to make a better state. What do you people think?
Mr Lever: (stands up angrily) This has never been done anywhere before. Why do we have to do something that’s never been done before, and moreover, very dangerous. We have to overrule this idea.
Mr Cummings: And do you have any other idea?
Mr Lever: We have to think of a better idea, and dump this meaningless one.
Mr Cummings: (teases him) Are you scared that I will be above you, if this plan succeeds?
Mr Lever: (sits down angrily) What? Of course, I am scared. But not because of you getting above me, but because of the fate of the state if your idea should fail.
Mr Dimen: (interrupts) I am also in support of Mr Lever. Cold black war is not something that should be implemented. It was even just joked by Mr Green. I don’t think the idea makes any sense.
Mr Cade: I think I am going to support Mr Cummings. If what he said is true, we can sell Luckfort secretly without the Peagries knowing about it. If they blow the state as they promised, we can create a new and better state.
Mr Bile: I also accept the idea. I think Mr Lever opposes the idea because he envies Mr Cummings. But truly, I think we should be the first country to start the cold black war. It just has to start from somewhere, and it won’t be bad thing if we are a model.
Mr Weel: I am also in support of the idea. It may be risky, so we have to carry it out with all our might.
Mr Sameh: (looks at Mr Cummings) This idea, did you just think of it yourself, or did someone told you about it?
Mr Cummings: (shocked as he looks at him) I thought about it myself, sir.
Mr Sameh: Okay. This is my order. We will go with your idea. But you are going to be the one to head the mission – the cold black war. And you, Mr Lever, you have to be the one to help all Luckfortians evacuate the state safely. Other should help Mr Cummings in this mission.
Everybody: Yes, Mr President.
O O O O O
(back)
Tunis: Later, the President secretly found a buyer of arms and ammunitions for my father. He told him the buyer is a private buyer from Clish.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Mr Cummings is sitting, while Nidda is just sitting opposite him, with a table behind them. They are in suits, so also are the two bodyguards standing behind each).
Nidda: How much are you putting up the commodities for sale?
Mr Cummings: (after some seconds) We have the best arms and ammunitions, both in term of quantities and qualities. $250 billion will be okay for that. And for the technologies that you just need to develop, we will be talking about $150 billion here.
Nidda: (smiles at him) I will be paying you $200 billion for all plus a benefit.
Mr Cummings: (surprised) That’s too small for both, and moreover what’s the benefit you are talking about?
Nidda: I heard that you are selling these things on a cold black war (Mr Cummings is a little bit surprised) The benefit is that once you are ready to acquire another sets of these things, you will pay a little more amount of money, and I will return them to you.
Mr Cummings: (shocked) Are you being sincere?
Nidda: Yeah! You will pay $250 billion, and you will have them back. I am doing this on business.
Mr Cummings: (smiles happily) This is really wonderful. (frowns a little bit) But I heard you are from Clish. Is it that Clish wants to use these to instigate a war on us?
Nidda: (smiles) Your men have checked my business licenses. I am just a private buyer. That will never happen.
Mr Cummings: (smiles) That’s good (he brings out a document) This is the deal document. Signature is what…
O O O O O
(back)
Tunis: But in my investigations, I realized that this woman was even a member of The Peagries. And the money used in paying for the deal was stolen from the government’s account secretly. Later, everything was set. $949.11 billion was made from the selling of Luckfort. Actually $549.11 billion was made, but the government also added $400 billion from its account. Everybody was waiting for The Peagries to detonate the bomb. But something unexpected happened. The Peagries attacked our house instead.

for you guys...

lol... thanks... I'll start woes of the dark night season two immediately i finish this... 6 to go...

lol... still 8 to go to continue...

Stunt: Floor sensible to touch. Mini sky-diver to be used.
Nidda: Copied (she bends down, while opening her bag. She begins to couple together some things. She makes the two of the material. She inserts one to the heel of her shoe, and the other one to the hell of the second shoe. She puts her bag to her back) Coupled and Inserted. Activate.
Stunt: Stand firmly.
Nidda: Yeah! (she stands firmly as she is ready to fly).
Stunt: 1, 2, 3, go (he activates the devices. The devices begin to make Nidda flies, towards the other end. While flying, a gun falls down from Nidda’s pocket. On getting to the floor, the gun gets burnt immediately with flames still emanating from the residue. Nidda gets somehow scared, while flying gently as that will be her fate if she mistakenly falls down).
Nidda: Oh my God! (she sighs heavily. She later gets to the other end but she is still in the air. Still in the air, she inserts the keycard into the slot) SP-10CE.
Stunt: Good! (presses some keys) SP-ORWK-50497. PtE TBR.
Nidda: Okay! (she quickly enters the keycode. The door opens but she doesn’t enter, so she is still in the air. The mini sky divers can only be used once. It is a specialized dive used only for important missions. So once they are used, they can’t be reused) Be quick, I have less than 30 seconds for the divers to be deactivated automatically.
Stunt: Room installed with weight detector. Licate nylon to be used.
Nidda: Copied (still in the air, she gently brings out a nylon neatly packed from her bag. She puts her bag on her back, and then uses the nylon to cover all of her body including the bag. The function of the Licate nylon is to make anything it is covering to be weightless. One could imagine that what of the weight of the nylon itself. Anyway, the nylon is made in such a way that its weight is apparently negligible, so the detector won’t be able to detect it. With the Licate nylon, Nidda is able to get to the other end. It wasn’t easy for her as she knows that the nylon is not 100% efficient. Should it fail, then that’s her end). Done (sighs heavily).
Stunt: (smiles) Good job. (pressing some keys) This is the last room before you get to the room where the nuclear device is. Serial number.
Nidda: (sighs again) SP-5136.
Stunt: (presses some keys) SP-641-33274, PtE to be requested.
Nidda: (she inserts her keycard, and enters the keycode. The door opens, while she is still staying outside) Done.
Stunt: To be frank, I don’t know how you will be able to pass through this room. It has a motion detector which I am not able to hack down. Also the locking system is difficult, it is a CE software.
Nidda: (racks her brain) But we can’t back down now, we must find a way.
Stunt: You are the only one that can do this, that’s why you are the only one in this mission.
Nidda: (still racking her brain) Tell me the components of the motion detector.
Stunt: Okay (presses some keys) They are Cable locker, cable disorder, wave detector, IIM system, engine former, sound intersect, etc.
Nidda: The wave detector, we should be able to disarm it.
Stunt: (confused) But how?
Nidda: You have to stop it from working.
Stunt: (smiles) How? Wave detector can’t be disarmed while working.
Nidda: A wave detector can only be working when there is air. You have to get rid of the air in the room (she brings out an oxygen cylinder and puts it on her nose).
Stunt: Well! (he presses some keys) Done, so what else?
Nidda: Destroy the Energy valve of the wave detector.
Stunt: What? (surprised) Energy valve? That’s the device used in supporting the Momentum Ticker. It doesn’t have any other meaningful function apart from supporting the Ticker. So what’s the significance if I destroy it?
Nidda: As small as the Energy valve is, the Momentum Ticker can’t work without its support. If the momentum ticker doesn’t work, the wave detector will never function. And the wave detector is the main part of the Motion detector. If it doesn’t function, the motion detector will also not function.
Stunt: Are you so sure of all these?
Nidda: (sighs) Yeah. Just do it.
Stunt: Okay! (he presses some keys. All the air in the room are gotten rid of. Nidda, anyway is able to breath with the help of the oxygen she is using. Stunt destroys the Energy Valve of the Wave detector) Done.
Nidda: Are you really sure this is going to work, before you go in? If not, your life is on the line, hope you know.
Nidda: (scared) I am not really sure, but I just hope.
Stunt: Will you terminate?
Nidda: No. Moving in already (she sighs for the last time, and enters the room. Immediately she enters, the door closes immediately and Alas! A time bomb begins to count down from 5 seconds. She can’t leave the room again) Oh! It doesn’t work. Find a way to get me out (shouting and scared).
Stunt: (very scared) Ah! There’s no way I can get you out.
Nidda: Oh! (really scared) Please, do something. (shouting. 04, 03, the time is counting down, 02, still counting down, 01, oh, and the bomb stops there. Nidda is already sweating profusely, as she sees the bomb stops counting. The explosion is off. The closes her eyes happily as she is able to escape death).
Stunt: Are… are you okay? (curious).
Nidda: (after some seconds) Yeah! (panting) What happened?
Stunt: I am sorry. I forgot to press “Enter” key to finish destroying the Energy Valve. It was when I remembered to press it, that the bomb stopped.
Nidda: It’s okay. (she moves gently towards the locking system) CE3369.
Stunt: It can’t be hacked that way. I don’t even think ORF will be able to destroy the lock, but try it.
Nidda: Okay. (she brings out a device that resembles the locking system, that’s the ORF device. She breaks the original locking system, to reveal some cables. She joins some particular cables of the locking system to like-cables on the ORF device) They are in binary forms. The row is 101, and column is 111.
Stunt: Okay (he presses some keys) The three possible keycodes are 111100, 100011, and 101010. Only one of them is the actual keycode. If any of the wrong two should be entered, the whole place will be on fire. You know what that means.
Nidda: But how do we know the right keycode?
Stunt: (confused) I also don’t know.
Nidda: (racks her brain) Find the dot of the two binary number and tell me.
Stunt: Okay. (he presses some keys) It’s 100011. That’s one of the three possible keycodes, are you really going to use that?
Nidda: We have to hope it’s the right one.
Stunt: (scared) Just be careful, please.
Nidda: Yeah. (she makes up her mind and enters the keycode -100011. The door opens instantly. Right in front of her is the nuclear device) Nuclear device in sight.
Stunt: (all of them in the helicopter are happy) Go and meet her. (to the three, now to Nidda) You have just completed the most deadly mission of all time. To enter is the problem, but to get out is easy. C4 can be used from inside but can’t be used from outside. Make sure you don’t touch the device, other P’s are coming in.
Nidda: (sighs heavily) Yeah. (without contacting with the nuclear device, she moves to the other end. She brings out C4, plants it, and uses it to break the wall. Immediately the wall is broken, Nonk, Luto and Cylin rushes in. Nonk and Luto are in explosive-experts’ uniforms while Cylin is in normal uniform. Cylin helps Nidda to move to where the helicopter’s step is. He helps her climb the steps easily. She enters the copter, and relaxes. Nonk and Luto disarm the electric features of the nuclear device and carry it to where the step-to-copter is. A net is being thrown down. Nonk and Luto puts the heavy nuclear device in the net, which carries it into the copter.
Nonk: (through comm.) We have to let Mr Cummings know that we’ve succeeded in the operation.
Others: Yeah!
O O O O O
(back)
Tunis: It was later during my secret investigations, that I discovered that it was the former president, Mr Sameh that gave The Peagries a helping hand in finding the nuclear device, and infiltrating the Eldion house.
Addin: But it seems it was your father that helped them. You said they said that they had to let Mr Cummings, your father, know that they had succeeded.
Tunis: You know what? What I just told you was from an audio-visual camera used in recording their acts. When the nuclear device was reported to have been stolen, all the cameras of the place were checked to know the culprits but to no avail. The culprits had switched off the cameras, even destroyed them before they started their operation. Just after the cold black war, the president started to take the investigations further. It was then that this recording was gotten. But during my secret investigations, I discovered that it was the president himself that ordered The Peagries to release the recording, to frame my father.
Addin: (confused) I am getting so confused.
Tunis: Okay, let me continue step by step. After the nuclear device was stolen by the Peagries, something bigger happened. The Peagries threatened to detonate the bomb in Luckfort. Luckfort was a state in Notis. It was the biggest state, the most developed in the Notis then. It was the dream state of all, then. If Luckfort should be blown, it would really be a blow to the Notis. All the important figures of Notis decided to hold a conference meeting, to know what step they have to take. Just a day before the meeting, the President secretly talked to my father.

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DEADLY MISSIONS
PART THREE
ACT ONE SCENE ONE
(Addin can be seen sitting down on the floor, in a particular jail. It’s in the middle of the night. There are also other prisoners in the room. He stands up, and checks to make sure all other prisoners are fast asleep. He then opens his mouth, and brings out a small comm. he kept there. Tied properly with the comm., is a key. He switches on the comm. and places it on his ear. He has already removed the key).
Addin: Are you there? (no response) Are you there?
Jetar: (yawning) I have almost slept. Why did you keep waiting for so long? (on comm.)
Addin: I am sorry. These people didn’t want to sleep on time.
Jetar: Okay! Are you ready now?
Addin: Yeah! Mission starts.
Jetar: Copy that! (she begins to press some keys on the system). Start.
Addin: Okay. (he moves gently towards the door. He uses the key he holds to unlock the door, and then goes outside. He moves gently making sure his footsteps are soundless).
Jetar: Your left, two. Your right, one.
Addin: Copied! (he moves towards his right position. He quickly gives a policeman that’s there wandering around a faint blow on his neck. Before he could shout in pain, Addin quickly grabs him ad covers his mouth with his hand. The policeman faints instantly. Addin drags him to a particular side. He removes his uniform and quickly puts it on. He removes an handkerchief from the pocket and uses it to cover his nose, face and mouth, and only his eyes aren’t covered. He did this so he won’t be recognized. He keeps the fainted policeman in such a way that he won’t be noticed easily) Done!
Jetar: Yeah, you are good to go.
Addin: Yeah! (he walks majestically through all the policemen he meets on the way, since he is having the same uniform with theirs. He walks straight to Jail no 107 where Tunis is. He uses one of the bunch of keys he met in the policeman’s pocket to open the door. He moves into the cell, and just in front of him is a man sitting down) I’m in. Where? (on comm.)
Jetar: On your 9 o’clock (on comm.)
Addin: Copied! (he sees a bench, and picks it up. He puts it to a particular point inside the jail, climbs it, and removes a minicamera that is kept on the roof. He then destroys it)
Jetar: 1200.
Addin: Copied (he gets down, takes the bench and put it to another particular point. He climbs it and removes another mini-camera that’s there. He destroys that too) Anymore?
Jetar: No!
* * * * *
(somewhere else)
(Enoph enters the room)
Enoph: (to Seman) Is everything alright in the jail?
Seman: Yes, sir! There has been no action from Addin. Tunis is still the only one in the cell.
Enoph: Good. (to Reas) I am sure Addin will go there this midnight. He may disguise himself as a policeman or as a warder, or even as chief warder. But I am sure he will go there. So immediately anybody, I said anybody enters that jail, tell Mr Verre to proceed.
Reas: (sighs) I understand, sir!
Enoph: Okay! (he leaves the room)
* * * * *
(Back inside the cell)
Tunis: (looks at Addin terribly) Who are you?
Addin: (kneels down beside him) I am Addin. I am here for… (he is being interrupted).
Tunis: (interrupts him) I know what you are here for. Follow me (he takes Addin to a corner where they can’t be seen from outside) Has he explained anything to you before or not?
Addin: You mean, Mr Lever? A little, but I will want you to start right from the beginning, because it was confusing.
Tunis: Okay. Listen attentively. In 1993, Notis reached a notable point in the development of their nuclear device. In that same year, the country did their nuclear testing.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Mr Sameh, Mr Lever, Mr Cummings and other notable figures that are related to security affairs of the country are all present in the same room for a conference meeting. The nuclear device has just been tested in an area somewhere. A screen-touch wall screen is in the room with a moderator at its side. He is making the review of the nuclear testing).
Dunlop: (being the moderator, continues speaking) The just-tested nuclear device has about 15 kilotons of TNT. While few chemicals find use as military explosives, this was combined with plasticizers and other materials to create a plethora of formulations. The devastating shock wave that accompanies the detonation of this high explosive (HE), results in widespread damage and loss of lives. This HE consists of an intimate mixture of oxidant and reductant, which is within a single molecule, of nitroglycerin, pentaerythritol tetranitrate (PETN), trionotrotoline (TNT) and triacetone triperoxide (TATP). It was being tested with an F-15E Strike Eagle, which release 15,000lb (2,300ka) GBU-28 “Bunker Buster” explosive (he strolls to the next page which shows a chart) This is the breakdown of the A-bomb Energy in percentage. If this bomb is to be detonated, then we have 35% ray, 5% initial radiation, 10% residual radiation, and 50% blast.
Mr Sameh: What’s the number of casualties this can cause?
Dunlop: (sighs heavily) If this should be detonated in the middle of a country, about 10-13 million lives will be gone just from the blast. From the heat ray, we will be having about 7 – 7.5 million lives. You can continue the calculations.
O O O O O
(back)
Tunis: A month later, the then president created the safest place where nobody can infiltrate. The place has numerous deadly security systems which made the place not vulnerable to anybody, even experts. This place was the place that the nuclear device was kept. Later the same year, all the scientists and technologists that were involved in the development of the nuclear device and the security systems were assassinated secretly. My investigation later, revealed that the order was given by the former president.
Addin: You investigated the former president too. What made you suspect him?
Tunis: (smiles) I said the scientists and technologists were all assassinated, yeah. Can you believe that the Eldion house that I said was the safest was infiltrated?
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda on an impossible mission. She flies to the front of the Eldion house. She is in total black, and also having a black bag on her back. She puts on the comm., in her ear)
Nidda: (through comm.) P1 in location. Permission to proceed?
Stunt: (on the system. The other four are inside the helicopter from where Nidda flied down. They are still in their air) Cameras off. Permission granted.
Nidda: Copied. Iron gate EX5097.
Stunt: (pressing some keys) Electric iron gate; Remove ring, while using gloves. Keycode EX-SFB-YLLUKOK.
Nidda: Copied (she quickly removes the ring in her hands, and puts the gloves on. She walks gently to the door. She brings out a keycard and inserts it in a slot in front of the gate. Just beside the slot, is a device with keys and a screen. She begins to press the keycode) EX-SFB-YLLUKOK (she now presses the Enter key. The gate opens immediately) Done. Ground, SH allowed?
Stunt: (others are also looking at her on the system) Acidic floor, but SH allowed. Acid can easily penetrate the shoe, since it is highly concentrated. Apply alkaline.
Nidda: Copied. (she removes the bag from her back, opens it and brings out a bottle. She pours little of the content of the bottle on the floor, and uses her shoes to step on them. She returns the bottle, and puts the bag back on her back). Done (she walks safely on the floor in a limited time till she reaches the main entrance of the house) Main entrance EX2112.
Stunt: The entrance is made in such a way that it can detect gloves. Anybody that passes through the gate must have used the gloves, so they made the entrance to be able to detect gloves. Also, avoid contact of the cloth with the door because both cloth and gloves are of the same material. Keycode EX-102-411097.
Nidda: Copied (she quickly removes her gloves, inserts the keycard, and enters the keycode. The screen brings a message ‘Level restricted’ and the door doesn’t open) Level restricted.
Stunt: (presses some keys) That’s level 4, and the level there is level. Wait a minute (he quickly upgrades the keycard to level 5) Now, retry.
Nidda: Copied. (she quickly inserts the keycard again, and enters the keycode. The screen brings a message “Access granted”, and the door opens. She enters immediately, and the door closes back. The whole place is just dark, that she can’t see anything) Surface dark, unable to see through.
Stunt: You know what to do.
Nidda: Yeah. (she removes her bag, opens it, and dips her hand inside. She counts 1, 2 and 3 to the right and brings the item that she touches there. It is a pair of glasses that she puts on her face. She is now able to see around through the glasses. She returns the bag to her back. She walks to another door that she sees at the front) No locking system.
Stunt: Use X-ray glasses.
Nidda: Copied. (she brings out another pair of glasses while still holding the previous one. With the X-ray glasses, she is now able to see the invincible locking system) Another software, it is a SP system.
Stunt: (presses some keys) Okay, call the serial number.
Nidda: SP5407.
Stunt: Keycode SP-598-65448. But don’t press Enter. The “Enter” key is a small explosive detonator. Use “#” key.
Nidda: # key? Okay (she presses the keycode and presses the # key last. Immediately the door opens, she keeps the x-ray glasses and puts the former glasses back on her face. Looking at the floor to the next room, she walks in easily. Immediately she gets in, she becomes blind. She can’t see anything. She changes her glasses to the x-ray glasses, but still can’t see. She changes the glasses again but still can’t see) Unable to see.
Stunt: Yeah, Iris detector. Just follow my orders.
Nidda: I should just go straight.
Stunt: (smiles) That’s the trick. Going straight, there is an explosive planted on the wall. It will detonate when anything touches the front wall. Whereas, the next door is at the right position. Follow my orders, three steps to your east.
Nidda: Copied. (she closes her eyes since she can’t see, she takes three steps to east) Done!
Stunt: One more.
Nidda: Copied (she takes one more step) Done!
Stunt: To west, four accurate steps.
Nidda: Copied (she takes four steps accurately to the west position) Done.
Stunt: System, sternum region.
Nidda: Copied (she takes her hand to her sternum region, and then stretches it forward. Now her hand is touching the locking system). Done.
Stunt: Snaps.
Nidda: Okay (she stretches her second hand, making it parallel to the first hand touching the system. There is a watch on her wrist which has a camera. Through the camera, Stunt is able to see the picture of the locking system. He uses some applications to brighten the surface and is able to see the serial number).
Stunt: Good! (typing while reading out) SP3102. Now index finger.
Nidda: Copied. (she presses the key at her index finger.
Stunt: Thumb, three times.
Nidda: Copied. (she pressed the key three times).
Stunt: Middle finger, double.
Nidda: Copied (she presses the key twice).
Stunt: Lastly, index finger, once. Access to enter to be requested.
Nidda: Copied. (she presses the key. The door opens immediately but she doesn’t enter. There are mines on the floor of the room. She is now able to see) Mines on floor.
Stunt: The space between the mine is just an inch. How can you pass?
Nidda: (looks at her hand) Two fingers, from each hand.
Stunt: Will you be able to do this? It is too risky.
Nidda: I was trained specially for this. (she sighs heavily, one could notice that she is really scared) Can you deactivate the mines instead?
Stunt: It can only be deactivated at the other end.
Nidda: Then I have to do this.
Stunt: Be careful.
Nidda: Yeah (she uses a rope to tie her bag to her body firmly. She now stands with two fingers from each hand. She begins to move, placing her fingers in between the mines in the same rows. One, two, three,… ten, she is still going gently to avoid the mines. She is now somehow tired, while she still has about 20 more mines to avoid before she can reach the other end. She becomes more determined and stops panting which she was already doing. With great strength and determination, she finally reaches the other end. With her leg still in the air, she uses it to press the “Deactivate” key on a device beside the locking system and the mines go off immediately. She is more than happy and relieved, as she gets back to normal posture. She firstly falls down on the floor, as she is tired, and also sweating profusely. She gathers her strength and stands up) Done.
Stunt: Good job.
Nidda: (panting) Thanks (she inserts the keycard into the slot) SP 1027.
Stunt: (presses some keys) Keycode SP-102-10798. PtE to be requested.
Nidda: Copied. (she enters the keycode and the door opens. But she doesn’t enter) Done!
Stunt: Floor sensible to touch. Mini sky-diver to be used.