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Addin: (looks at him daring) Have you ever seen a lion fight? (he gathers his strength, and faces Mr Cylin seriously. He skillfully makes some moves towards Mr Cylin. Scared of these moves, Mr Cylin moves backward. Also taking this advantage, Addin gives him a skillful heavy punch that makes Mr Cylin to fall down immediately. He skillfully does some stunts to get up and faces Addin. Like he did earlier, he wants to rush Addin with blows. Just like earlier, Addin is able to dodge them. It gets to the very last blow, that Addin is supposed not to be able to dodge. But to Mr Cylin’s surprise, he dodges it and uses the counter-attack to deal with Mr Cylin. From the counter-attack, Mr Cylin receives a heavy blow on his mouth. Even before he could feel the pain, there is another blow on his forehead. Just after that one, there’s another on his stomach. He does not even know where the pains are coming from, all he knows is that he is not alright. Addin does not even allow him to settle as he rushes blows to all over his body. Addin stops when he realizes Mr Cylin is already feeling like he’s going to faint. His eyeballs are turning up and down, left and right. Just as he is out of the dizziness, Addin was already waiting for him, as he gives him an extremely heavy blow on his face. In so much agony, he falls down immediately. Shaking, he tries to get up as he doesn’t want to give up. Addin laughs at him, as he has reasons for letting him get up. Without even able to see Addin, he stretches his hands to fight Addin. His plans working, Addin grabs his right hand and twists it until several bones break. Mr Cylin shouts very loud, as he is in much pain. His right hand is no more okay. He feels a lot of pain in even lifting it. Addin smiles, and gets to his left hand. He does the same thing, that now, Mr Cylin is weak on both hands. He cries out loud, but his noise can’t be heard outside the room. Addin brings up another rope and ties him to the chair again. He then pours tea in a tea cup on the table on his face).
Mr Cylin: (in much pain) Ouuccchhh!!!
Addin: (using a handkerchief to wipe off the blood on his face) Tear the rope now.
Mr Cylin: (wants to tear the rope with his hand, but as he tries to lift the hands, he feels much pain that he quickly stops) Ooooh, ooooh… (in great pain)
Addin: (brings out the picture) Who are the people in this picture? I am sure, that you were the one standing last on the right, Mr Cylin. And also, my mother was at the middle. But who is Stunt? Who is Nonk? And who is Luto?
Mr Cylin: (shocked as he sees the picture) Where did you see this picture? (looks desperate) I am sorry, but you can’t get any information from me.
Addin: (smiles) Is it because of the bullet-proof you are putting on? (Mr Cylin is shocked to hear this. Addin unties him, and then undresses him. He leaves only panties on his body, and then ties him back).
Mr Cylin: (still adamant) Kill me! Kill me now! You won’t be able to get any information from me.
Addin: Really? (he cocks his gun and points it to Mr Cylin. Mr Cylin looks at him somehow scared, not sure, if he is really going to shoot him. Addin then shoots him on his right leg).
Mr Cylin: (in much pain) Yeee! Yeeeeeh! My leg! Yeee! Please, stop… stop… stop this (his leg really hurts).
Addin: Are you ready to talk?
Mr Cylin: (still in much pain) Nooo! I am… not saying anything.
Addin: Really? Then your left leg is next. (he cocks his gun and points it to Mr Cylin’s left leg).
Mr Cylin: (very scared) Mr, the director of CIS. Mr Nonk, and Mr Stunt, the Minister and Deputy Minister of Security Affairs respectively.
Addin: (shocked) Minister, Deputy-Minister of Security Affairs, and the director of CIS? And you, director of SSU. Four of you, The Peagries?
Mr Cylin: (in pain) Yes, yes!
Addin: (still shocked) What’s your relationship with the former president, Mr Sameh? And also, the former Vice-director of SSU, Mr Cummings?
Mr Cylin: Mr Sameh was our leader. We just framed Mr Cummings so that we won’t be discovered nor investigated.
Addin: (surprised) So, Mr Sameh put you all in these high positions so that you will be able to control any investigation about the case.
Mr Cylin: No! That was just aimed to confuse anybody that wanted to investigate secretly. Mr Sameh only helped us to be ordinary security agents back then. You should know, your mum was one of us, and she was just an ordinary security agent then. Anybody that’s investigating would only suspect those that got high positions, and will find nothing.
Addin: But what’s up with your high positions now?
Mr Cylin: We were just ordinary agents then. Anybody that was investigating would be targeting people with high ranks. They investigated them secretly, found nothing and dropped the case. When we were sure nobody is investigating, then we played our trick. The trick is rapid promotion.
Addin: (shocked) Oh! Instead of going to high positions straight, and be suspected, you got low ranks and used rapid promotions to get to high ranks which are your main aims. With this method, nobody will ever suspect you. (he shakes his head).
Mr Cylin: (he is still in pain, but a little bit relieved) Yeah, you got it. Ah! You shouldn’t have shot me. We could have solved matter without making me suffer.
Addin: I want the truth. And the truth can only be gotten when person saying it needs to say it in order to end his suffering.
Mr Cylin: Huh! You are son of a bitch, you know?
Addin: Then, why did you kill the girl in the middle? (tears are forming in his eyes) And also, why were you trying to kill her son?
Mr Cylin: Even if you should shoot my left leg, I am not talking about you and your mother.
Addin: It seems you are now somehow relieved from the right leg pain, and you’ve forgotten the pain you got initially.
Mr Cylin: I trained for ten years, do you think I have not witnessed these kind of pain before?
Addin: You trained for ten years for a particular mission, not for a particular torture.
Mr Cylin: (spits on his face) Whatever.
Addin: (cleans up the spit on his face) Okay! (he cocks his gun and shoots Mr Cylin on his left leg).
Mr Cylin: (in great pain, as he shouts out loud) Yeeeeh! Yeeeeh!! Yeeeeeh!!!
Addin: Spit on my face again, if you really won’t talk.
Mr Cylin: (still in much pain) Aaaah! Yeeeh! (with great force, he spits on Addin’s face) Aaaah!
Addin: I never expected to break you with a gun (he cleans the spit. He brings a bottle filled with a particular liquid and also a syringe. He fills the syringe with the liquid in the bottle and then faces Mr Cylin). 10CC’s of Xyalonine induces the same amount of pain a pregnant woman experiences during labour. Why did you kill my mother?
Mr Cylin: (angrily) You son of a bitch.
Addin: Really? (he injects the needle into Mr Cylin’s body, and releases the liquid content. Immediately the liquid gets into Mr Cylin’s body systems, he begins to feel a greater pain. he has never experienced that kind of pain in his life. All part of his body hurts. His eyes become red, and his body is not alright. He feels like he is dying).
Mr Cylin: Aaaaaaah! Just kill… kill… me! Kill me.
Addin: Why did you kill my mother?
Mr Cylin: Kill me… instead (he spits on his face).
Addin: You are truly strong. (he cleans the spit and brings out another bottle. He fills the syringe with the content and faces Mr Cylin) I think 90CC’s will end your life, your pitiful life.
Mr Cylin: Yeah, just kill me.
Addin: Oh, I am sorry. I was just kidding you. Xyalonine doesn’t kill, it only induces pain. 90CC’s will induce 9 times the pain you had just now.
Mr Cylin: (raises his eyebrows surprised) 9…9…9 times… the pain… I am already…in?
Addin: (dusts the needle of the syringe) I’m afraid yes. (he moves closer to Mr Cylin to inject the needle into him, but then Mr Cylin interrupts him).
Mr Cylin: (interrupts him) Stop! Stop! I will talk.
Addin: Really? (he stops)
Mr Cylin: Yeah! (still in pain).
Addin: Only the truth, please. Once I discover any element of lie in what you want to say, I won’t hesitate to stick this into your skull.
Mr Cylin: Yeah! The truth, and the truth only. We had to kill Nidda because she betrayed us. I am ready to tell you everything, just don’t inject me with that thin, please. (still in pain).
Addin: (looks at him concentrated) Just go on.

Good morning bro, keep up the good work. really enjoying the story.

Mr Cylin: 46 years ago, Mr Sameh took the five of us to Clish for a special training. He watched us carefully before he selected us. We were under his secret watch for about five years. Actually, he watched more than five children. But out of these children, he selected just five of us. Nidda was the youngest then, 10years. He took us away secretly from our parent, more of like kidnapping. We were all orphans as at this time. He promised to take care of us, since we were orphan. We believed him, and stayed with him all along. He took really good care of us, that we were really starting to love him even more than we loved our parents. It all started one day, when he gathered us in a room.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(The five are sitting on chairs, while Mr Sameh is standing in front of them).
Mr Sameh: You are all going to Clish for a particular training. (they all look at him in amazement).
Nidda: To Clish? For a particular training? (surprised)
Mr Sameh: Yes, you will spend exactly ten year in Clish.
Stunt: What’s the training for?
Mr Sameh: This country is currently into the development of a deadly nuclear weapon. According to my calculations, they will be through with the development in 19-20 years. So, a year before they are through, I will contest for the presidential position. I have plans that will make me be voted in easily. Before then, you would have finished with your training. I, in presidential position, and you five, turned to Peagries, we are going to conquer the world.
Stunt: (confused) I seriously don’t understand all what you are saying.
Nonk: (also confused) Me too.
Mr Sameh: (before anyone else could talk) Don’t worry, Chan will explain everything to you. You will understand everything during the course of the training.
Nidda: (curious) Who is Chan?
Mr Sameh: The man that will solely train you.
Nidda: Okay.
Mr Sameh: I will only be in Clish twice. The time I will be taking you there and the time I will be taking you away from there; that’s in the next ten years.
Cylin: Is this Chan really capable of training us for good ten years?
Mr Sameh: (smiles) He is more than capable. Anyway, you will have to assassinate him the next time I will be visiting you.
Stunt: You mean in the next ten years, that we will be finishing the training?
Mr Sameh: (still smiling) Accurately.
Nidda: (curious) But why?
Mr Sameh: Because the root of the mission must only be known by the six of us.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: The picture you are holding was taken just before we went to Clish. We printed five copies of it, and we all had a copy each. Ten years later, we finished the training. As we were told, we assassinated Chan, so that the mission will be a close secret among us. Some years later, we discovered Nidda has fallen in love with a wrong person while we were in Clish. One of our principles was never to fall in love until we are through with the mission, in order not to compromise the mission. But unknown to us, while we were still training in Clish, Nidda had fallen in love with Cole.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda in a restaurant eating, Cole brings his tray and sits in front of her)
Cole: (looks at Nidda) Won’t it be too awkward if I say I love you?
Nidda: (smiles, chuckles) You are funny? Do you think I am one of those girls you talk to, take home and then to your bed?
Cole: Mere looking at you, I know you aren’t a cheap girl. I just said it exactly the way it came from my heart.
Nidda: Forget it! I don’t have time for this. (two other men are coming to their direction. They look as if they are surprised with what they are seeing, as they clap their hands as they move closer).
Dura: (still clapping his hands) I don’t believe this.
Nity: Me too! Cole talking to a girl? This is unbelievable.
Nidda: (stands up) You’ve got to excuse me.
Dura: (looks at her) Are you leaving because of us?
Nidda: No! (smiles) I just have to leave (she goes out but hides at the door, eavesdropping at what they are saying).
Nity: (to Cole) Did you really talk to that girl?
Cole: I think so.
Dura: Cole? Talked to a girl? Was it business or sort?
Cole: Love.
Nity: (shocked) You? Cole? Love? I will be happy if that really happens.
Dura: (to Nity) I don’t believe him, it’s a lie.
Cole: I also don’t believe it. I’ve never loved in my life. But once I saw that girl, it’s as if I just realize exactly what love is.
Nity: (smiles) Are you sure, Cole? Are you really sure you love a girl?
Dura: (laughs) Oh my God! This calls for celebration… (Nidda sighs and leaves the place).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: It was later, when we got back to Notis that we realized that Nidda was in secret relationship while we were in Clish. We told Nidda to stop it, but she wouldn’t listen. So, we decided to take Cole out.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda enters the room, and sees Stunt doing something on the system. As soon as Stunt realizes that Nidda is in the room, he quickly minimizes the dialogue box on the screen).
Stunt: (trembling a bit) Hey, what’s up?
Nidda: (frustrated) I was about to ask you. What did you just minimize?
Stunt: It’s nothing.
Nidda: Really? Then let me see it.
Stunt: It’s porn, bad porn. I don’t think you will want to see that.
Nidda: (got fooled) Oh, bad boy. Let me just leave you (as she is about to leave, she notices a comm. in Stunt’s ear. She quickly removes it and puts in on her ear).
Nonk: (through comm.) Report. Target in sight.
Nidda: (shocked) What? (she moves close to the system and maximizes the dialogue box. It shows Nonk on top of a building with a sniper) Who is the target?
Nonk: (shocked, through comm.) Nidda? Shit.
Stunt: (confused) Nobody, really nobody.
Nidda: (still shocked) You said it is porn, but this is a mission. (she wants to press some keys on the keyboard, but Stunt holds her hands. She twists his hands and throws him on the floor. She now presses those keys and on the screen, is Cole. Nidda is shocked as she sees Cole) Cole is the target?
Stunt: Cole is in Notis, Nidda. He just arrived today. We know he is here because of you. We can’t let him jeopardize our mission, Nidda.
Nidda: (sad) He is not here because of me. He is here to honour the ambassador’s position bestowed on him.
Nonk: (through comm.) He accepted the position, because he knows he will get to meet you again in Notis.
Nidda: (wants to cry) Please, stop this.
Nonk: I can’t, Nidda. This is a direct order from Mr Sameh.
Nidda: (sobbing) You can’t do this mission without me. (she brings out a knife from her pocket, and puts it on her own neck) Once Cole is gone, I am gone.
Stunt: You have to stop this, Nidda. We can’t leave Cole. He is going to compromise our mission.
Nidda: (still holding the knife on her neck) Maybe this is going to be last words. I love you, Cole. (she closes her eyes).
Stunt: (clicks on a filter beside the system) Nonk, abort the mission.
Nonk: Mission terminated. (sighs heavily).
Nidda: (already crying heavily as she looks at the screen, opens her eyes) Oh, my, my Cole (crying as she drops the knife).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: Any attempt made to take Cole out, Nidda always threatened us with her life. Hell was let loose when Nidda told us that she is getting married just few months to our mission.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Mr Sameh: (angrily) What? Getting married? Are you out of right senses?
Nidda: (scared) I have to. Cole got the ambassador position, and they are telling him to get married immediately to the woman he loves, or they will get him a wife in a month.
Mr Sameh: (angry) So what? Just five or six months to our mission. Are you crazy, Nidda?
Nidda: (confused) There’s nothing I can do about. I can’t loose Cole to another lady. I won’t be able to forgive myself.
Mr Sameh: (more angry) Nidda, you can’t do this! We must be operating secretly, like snakes under green grasses. If you get married, it won’t be possible for you, Nidda!
Nidda: (determined) There’s nothing I can do about it (she angrily leaves the room)
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: (smiles) Nidda got married, and we allowed her, just because we know we can’t go on with the mission without her. During the time of the mission, (chuckles) you were already in Nidda’s stomach.
Addin: (shocked) Hmmmm!
Mr Cylin: The mission… (he is being interrupted).
Addin: Don’t tell me about the mission, I already know about it.
Mr Cylin: Really? Well, Nidda had your pregnancy during the time of the mission. Going to the Eldion house, killing a lot of people, your mother had you in her stomach. Maybe that’s why you are this tough. She was a smart lady. With the way she killed and led the mission, no one could ever suspect that she was pregnant.
Addin: (sighs) Hmmm! The Eldion house, the very last room, why couldn’t you just use C4 to blow it from the outside, get in, and take the device?
Mr Cylin: (laughs bitterly) You are very funny. Why did we have to go through all those stresses of the security systems, if it is possible to use C4 from the outside?
Addin: Oh! (realizes this)
Mr Cylin: We finished the mission, and Nidda continued her marital life with Cole. Tell me, aren’t we right to kill Nidda and her husband after the mission, considering that she almost messed up our plans before?
Addin: (shocked) So, you killed her?
Mr Cylin: (shakes head in disagreement) No, we didn’t. Despite all her betrayal, we still loved her, and let her be. Ten years later, Mr Sameh called us all again. There was going to be a repetition of the mission, since we still had the nuclear weapon with us.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Nidda: (shocked, and stands up angrily) Impossible!
Mr Sameh: Pillarghton is also a very large state. We can double our wealth with the repetition of the mission. (all other four except Nidda, agrees with him).
Nidda: (looks at them in amazement) You all agree with him, right? You are all senseless. We are not going to do the mission. It is impossible.
Mr Sameh: (smiles at Nidda) We really needed you in the first mission. But now, Nidda, we can do this mission without you.
Nidda: (raises her eyebrows, angrily) Really? (she angrily leaves the room).
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: Oh! So you had to kill her?
Mr Cylin: (shakes head in disagreement) We may wanted her out of the mission but we never wanted to kill Nidda. One day, we caught Nidda reading about nuclear weapons secretly.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda quickly switches off the system, as soon as the four enters).
Cylin: (suspicious) Why did you switch off the system, Nidda?
Nidda: Nothing. Just through.
Luto: (moves close to the table and sees a book there) What’s this? (he picks it up, the other four joins him to read the content).
Cylin: (curious) About nuclear weapon?
Stunt: (confused) Why are you studying about nuclear weapon, Nidda?
Nidda: (blinks eyes) Nothing. Just studying.
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: We didn’t suspect Nidda until we saw her in the room we kept the nuclear device.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Mr Sameh and the four barges in, and sees Nidda with an instrument in her hand. She laughs as she sees them).
Mr Sameh: (shocked) Nidda, what did you do?
Nidda: It is now useless. (laughs again) The nuclear device is now useless.
Stunt: (shocked) What?
Nidda: I have disarmed it, and it can never be re-armed. It is spoilt, it is gone, it is useless. (she laughs again).
Nonk: (angrily brings out his gun and points it at Nidda) Are you fucking out of your mind? (really angry).
Nidda: (look at him) Pull! Pull! Pull the trigger! Pull the fucking trigger, you motherfucker! Pull it.
Nonk: (cocks his gun) Do you think I can’t? (he wants to shoot her, but he controls himself, and doesn’t shoot).
Nidda: (hisses at him, and faces Mr Sameh) No more mission! (she laughs out of the room).
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: Oh! She betrayed you, so you had to kill her?
Mr Cylin: (angrily, and shouts out) Noooo! We forgave her! We still forgave Nidda. (tears start to form in his eyes). We so much loved Nidda and still forgave her until she pushed us to the wall. One day, Nidda travelled to the out-of-luck Luckfort, the sate we based our first mission on, five years later after she disarmed the device.
O O O O O
(flashback)
(Nidda is walking on the very rough road, then suddenly some men, three in number, attacks her. They are putting on very tattered clothes. As the first one wants to slap her, she grabs his hand and throws him away. She gives another one a slap on his chest, and pushes the last to the floor. They realize they can’t take her, and quickly run away. A lady also in tattered cloth, who have been watching the whole scene runs to Nidda).
Cudy: (smiles) You must be from another state.
Nidda: (they both start to walk down the road together) Yeah!
Cudy: Oh! I see.
Nidda: Is that how men disturb you in this state?
Cudy: (smiles) No! They didn’t attack you for money, or to rape you. They wanted to collect your clothes from you.
Nidda: (surprised) Clothes? A lady’s cloth?
Cudy: (smiles again) Yeah! Their clothes are tattered. They just need something better to cover their body.
Nidda: Is this state that bad?
Cudy: (stops walking and faces Nidda, she talks emotionally) Ever since the time of the cold black war, we’ve been suffering. The government sold our state and embezzled the money. They left us in the crisis, without helping us. Other states won’t let us into their territories. We are really suffering. (she continues walking and Nidda follows her). Down there is my house, would you like to see?
Nidda: (nods her head) Yeah! (they get to the lady’s house. Nidda sees some people fetching water from a well beside the house. Efes, Cudy’s daughter wants to take in a pot she had just fetched water into. But to Nidda’s amazement, flood concentrated of much sand is in the pot). Flood?
Cudy: (smiles) Don’t be surprised. That’s what we drink. We don’t have any other choice.
Nidda: (still surprised) Than to drink flood?
Cudy: Our plants aren’t even growing foods. We eat weeds.
Nidda: (shocked) Weed?
Cudy: Yeah, we are used to it. We’ve been eating weed and drinking flood for a very long time, and we didn’t die.
Nidda: (still surprised, faces Efes) I have some buns here with me, wouldn’t you mind to eat?
Efes: (happily) Heh! Buns? I wouldn’t.
Nidda: Yeah! (she brings out a nylon full of buns from her bag. As soon as she brings the nylon out, all the hungry children in the neighbourhood surrounds her).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: She was heartbroken that she was one of those responsible for the situation, suffering, in Luckfort. She then brought up an impossible idea. That we should return the money back to Luckfort.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Mr Sameh: (shocked) Return what?
Nidda: (looks sober) You can’t just imagine the suffering these people are in. They drink wrong water, eat wrong food, they are into wrong life. We have to return their money back.
Nonk: Nidda, are you crazy? (shocked).
Mr Sameh: (still shocked) What the hell is our concern with them?
Nidda: (still sober) Don’t you people have human feelings?
Luto: (shocked) You are married, you now have a child, so you now know about human feelings? Right?
Nidda: (sober) You people have to understand what I… (she is being interrupted).
Cylin: (angrily) Nidda, is it only you? Are you the only one in this group? Why must you always want wrong things? (Nidda looks at him, feeling confused and leaves the room angrily).
O O O O O
(back)
Mr Cylin: Later, Mr Sameh and we four excluding Nidda brought up an idea. We were scared to tell Nidda, because she might oppose it. Anyway, we called her and told her.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Nidda: (shocked) What? A terrorist organization? With the weapon we got from Luckfort? You people must be joking.
Mr Sameh: These weapons are just idle. Your skills are going down. We have to do something fast. We have to start using these weapons and technologies for our own good. We have to start making huge profit with them.
Nidda: (smiles) Please, whisper to my ears that you are joking.
Mr Sameh: (moves closer to Nidda, and whispers to her ear) We aren’t joking.
Nidda: (angrily) You bastard. (she brings out his gun, and shoots Mr Sameh dead instantly) You bastard. (the other four are surprised. They quickly run to Mr Sameh but he is already dead).
Nonk: (angry) Nidda, what did you just do? (holding the dead body of Mr Sameh).
Cylin: (angry) Nidda, you are really going beyond your boundary.
Stunt: Is it only you? Why must you be giving us problem all the time?
Luto: Do you have a death wish? (he wants to slap Nidda, but she dodges his attacks and pushes him away).
Nidda: (angrily) You had better don’t get yourself killed. (she angrily leaves the room).
- - - - -
(still in flashback)
(Nidda and Cole are in a room. Cole is holding The Peagries’ clothes he found in Nidda’s bag. He really needs an explanation).
Cole: (so surprised) Just as you do lie anytime you are always with the Peagries, why aren’t you lying about the cloth? That it was just an exhibit of a crime you are investigating, any lie. Why are you telling me the whole truth now?
Nidda: Because I really am ready to return the money back to the state. Because now, I really regret my deeds.
Cole: Then why haven’t you returned the money?
Nidda: Sweetheart, it’s not easy. These guys, they are not easy to break.
Cole: (wants to leave the room angrily, dropping the uniform on the bed) You either take those guys, or your marriage.
Nidda: (quickly holds him) My marriage. I am solely going to collect the money and return it. Solely, I am going to, I promise. My new dream is to return the money and rename the state.
- - - - -
(still in flashback)
(all the four in a room, they are in deep thoughts)
Stunt: (scared) I confirmed the recording, she really promised Cole to attack us, take the money and return it.
Nonk: (angry) How dare she?
Cylin: (scared) How dare she betray us like this?
Luto: (scared) But let’s talk fact. Solely, Nidda can really attack us and collect the money.
Stunt: That’s what I am also scared of. If Nidda should turn her back on us, hmmmm. (sighs heavily).
Cylin: We maybe four, and she’s just one, but that doesn’t stop her from taking us all out. Nidda is dangerous. She is a witch, snake-like witch.
Luto: (to Nonk) We have to do something.
Nonk: Should we…? (gives a deadly-eye signal).
Luto: Do you think it will be possible? (curious).
Nonk: Yeah, it will just be clinical.

Finally i'm here,
i nearly gave up from the beginning cause of how the english was constructed but i couldn't and just needed to be patient,
i'm now enjoying it like never before
thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

HazardMan:
Finally i'm here,
i nearly gave up from the beginning cause of how the english was constructed but i couldn't and just needed to be patient,
i'm now enjoying it like never before
thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

thanks so much... more updates coming soon...

SilverSpoonEnt:

thanks so much... more updates coming soon...

Thanks boss, will be waiting

Stunt: Then, order it.
Cylin: Yeah, do. I’m in full support.
Nonk: She has told her husband about us. And we don’t know if her son is also aware.
Stunt: All of them are expendable. The fact that she is taking her son brain training makes it seems as if it’s because of us.
Nonk: Good. (he picks up his phone, and makes a call) It’s me… Assassination… A plux EX mission… Target; Nidda… Meet me for full details
O O O O O
(back)
(Addin is already crying heavily. He begins to recollect him mum’s memories, and these keep hurting his heart the more).
Mr Cylin: (looks at him angrily) We weren’t wrong to take her out. She stepped on our toes. She stepped on painful toes.
Addin: (still crying) But you… you shouldn’t… have killed her! You ruined my life with what you did.
Mr Cylin: (surprised) We shouldn’t have killed her? She wanted the money. Before we can give up the money, then we would have given up our blood. And Nidda? She wouldn’t hesitate. She didn’t hesitate when she killed Mr Sameh.
* * * * *
(outside)
(Seman is in a room, Enoph and Reas runs in).
Enoph: (shocked) What did you say you find out?
Seman: (on the system) The meeting is taking too much time, so I got suspicious. Checking, I realized that our electronic devices have been disabled, I mean the ones inside the meeting room. I tried to hack but I am not able to. I later discover that Melinone Interpol must have been installed in that room, and activated from somewhere else.
Enoph: (surprised) That’s Addin’s and Jetar’s works. Addin was the one disguising as Mr Abrah. I knew it. How was he able to fool me?
Reas: (confused. To Seman) Open the door.
Seman: I am not able to. It has been locked from the inside with an application I am not able to hack yet. It may take time before I do.
Reas: Then, we should just use C4 to break it.
Enoph: Addin is very wise. I am sure he will have Mr Cylin by the door. If we use C4, we will only harm Mr Cylin.
Reas: (realizes this) So, what do we do?
Enoph: Addin will never pass through the door, he will fly down the window using rope. We must be waiting for him.
Reas: What if he has killed Mr Cylin?
Enoph: (confused) I don’t think Addin is capable of doing such. We just have to hope that he doesn’t. If we should attack from the window, once Addin notices us, he may kill Mr Cylin immediately. So we have to wait till he is ready to escape.
Reas: Okay.
Enoph: Some men should stay by the entrance in case he tries to come out from there. And I will be waiting for him with other men, by the window if he tries to come from there. Also, I know Jetar will be around somewhere with car. Check around and find her.
* * * * *
(Addin talks through comm.)
Addin: (through comm.) It’s time to leave. Hope you are ready.
Jetar: Okay, I will be waiting.
Addin: Don’t come until the time I ask you to. And make sure you aren’t discovered.
* * * * *
(After some minutes, Addin opens the door of the entrance, and comes out. He comes out as if he has been beaten mercilessly. He is having tape covering his mouth. He is waving his hands like he wants help. The men noticing this, quickly report to Enoph before shooting him).
Enemy: (through comm., to Enoph) Sir, Addin has come out. He is having a tape covering his mouth. And he is very weak, like someone that has beaten.
Enoph: (he is downstairs, by the window with other men targeting their guns towards the window. They are waiting for Addin to come down. He realizes something) Don’t shoot. That’s not Addin, that’s Mr Cylin. Addin must have disguised Mr Cylin as himself. Addin himself will never come out easily like that. I repeat, don’t shoot. Just move back, and be careful.
Enemy: (through comm.) Okay sir. (to other men) Don’t shoot. Move back (the men retreat).
(Enoph and his men see Mr Cylin having suit on, rolling down from a rope by the window. He is holding a gun, pointing to their direction).
Enoph: (to his men) This is not Mr Cylin, it’s Addin. Shoot to death. (he and his men begin to shoot Mr Cylin without stopping. Finally he rolls down dead. Enoph checks his body and confirms that he is dead. He is happy that Addin is finally dead. He tries to remove the wax on his face to show that it is really Addin, but he finds no wax. He is confused as he begins to use knife to pierce Mr Cylin’s face. Alas! It really is Mr Cylin, and not Addin. He and his men are confused and scared that they actually shot Mr Cylin and not Addin. He quickly talks through comm.) That’s Addin with you, shoot to death.
Addin: (through comm.) Now.
(Before the men could shoot Addin, flame starts to cover the whole place. Addin quickly uses his handkerchief to cover his nose, and begins to walk past the men. They are not able to see him because of the flame. He brings out his gun, and begins to shoot any of the men he meets on his way. He climbs a stair going upstairs, and reaches the roof of the building. Then a chopper lands on the roof. Addin quickly rushes towards the chopper. Reas comes from behind and begins to shoot to Addin’s direction).
Reas: (through comm.) Jetar is here in a chopper. Addin is running towards it.
Enoph: (shocked and confused) Make sure Addin doesn’t escape. He must not.
Reas: Copied. (he runs towards Addin, as he continues to shoot towards him. Addin makes sure to avoid the shots as he keeps diving. He finally reaches the chopper and enters. Jetar flies the chopper away immediately. Reas doesn’t stop as he continues to shoot at the chopper but they escape. Reas is so hurt) They escaped. I was too late.
Enoph: (cries out loud) Ah! Addin. You escaped again. I failed again. Ah! Where did I get this all wrong?
Man: (one of the men standing beside him. He is so scared) We mistakenly killed Mr Cylin. What are we going to do?
Enoph: Who killed Mr Cylin? It wasn’t us, it was Addin. It should be broadcasted tomorrow morning. Addin killed Director of SSU.


“The next day, newspaper headline”
Addin, the bloody murderer continues on his killing spree as he assassinated the Director of State Security Unit yesterday. There is unrest among the citizens of Notis, as this murderer is becoming unpredictable in his assassinations.

Opinions please... Was Nidda wrong? Were the Peagries right to kill her? What should Addin do? What do you think will eventually happen to him?... I just want to listen to opinions, not that they'll influence the story, as the story is already complete here...

Nice job, thank Silverspoon

Moscorpion:
Nice job, thank Silverspoon

thanks boss

Youngchizar:
Nidda was trying to mend her evil past, so 2 dat effect she wasn't wrong.

The Peagries on d otherhand are blinded by greed.

Addin is fighting a just cause.

thanks for this... more coming soon

The peagries are just devils Nidda wasn't wrong trying to mend her bad ways Adding saw his Dad dead and his Mum killed right in front of him His dead destiny was truncated, he couldn't live his live the way he wanted to
The story sha.. interesting

Nidda wasn't wrong, she was an innocent girl brought up and trained to be who she was, but she realized her past wrong and trying to correct that.

The Peagries see her as a dangerous threat and the best thing they think they can do is to eliminate her.

Addin, just trying to justify his parents death, moreover to unveil the mysteries behind his parents death.

thanks guys, I'll update now...

ACT TWO SCENE ONE
(The citizens of Notis are calling on the Notis government for help on Addin’s case. They are all scared of the new murderer, as some even dream about him attacking and killing them. They want the government to intervene quickly, so that the assassinations by Addin can stop. Addin, the bloody murderer’s case is all over the internet. It is being discussed even on the TV and radios. With the way things are going, there’s no way Addin can cleanse himself of the false allegations against him.
Addin and Jetar are shown inside a room. Jetar is on the system).
Jetar: (scared as she faces Addin) People are protesting against you, Addin. It’s everywhere, people won’t stop talking about you. It’s only a matter of time before the government listens to their protests. You have been accused of killing Mr Dart, Mr Verre, Tunis, Director of SSU and many others. Addin, if government should intervene, even if we use the best security technologies to cone ourselves into safety, we will still be figured out.
Addin: (somehow determined) Once The Peagries are out, I will turn myself in. But for now, I have to avenge my mum’s death. The Peagries turned my life into this mess. They changed my dream when I was young. They turned me to a murderer. They spoilt my life when they killed my parent. I will never stop until they are all down. I will gladly turn myself in once I am through with this mission.
Jetar: (sighs) So, what’s our next plan?
Addin: We take them one by one. Mr Cylin is dead. Enoph killed him and still has the gut to frame me of it. Anyway, next on the list is Mr Luto.
Jetar: What do you want to do?
Addin: We have to know where he is, and eliminate him. Try and find if you can track him.
Jetar: Okay. (she begins to search for Mr Luto but unable to find him) I can’t find him. He is securing himself well.
Addin: I know he will be. Search the location of CIS director instead.
Jetar: (realizes this, and begins to press some keys) Oh! CIS director is on leave. Since he is out of work, he cuts out his whereabouts. His mails, cellphones, etc are not reachable and can’t be used to track him. He also gave a standing order that his whereabouts should never be looked into. It will be difficult to find him, Addin. (sighs).
Addin: (sighs heavily and confused) So what do we do now?
Jetar: (also confused) What do we do now?
Addin: (realizes something) Oh! What of satellite imaging?
Jetar: Oh! That’s right. I should just find the satellite imaging on CIS director, right?
Addin: You won’t be able to find the Satellite Imaging on CIS director.
Jetar: (curious) Why?
Addin: We can’t get the satellite imaging on any security agent in the country without knowing their Registry ID Numbers. These Registry ID Nos can only be viewed by those working inside the organization the agents we want information about is working. These Registry ID Nos are used to keep private information about the security agents safe. The main reason is that they are keeping these information from other countries, especially Clish. Other countries can use these information to target top security officers in Notis, as a mean of threat to us. So the information are only being viewed by the respective organization which is in Notis.
Jetar: Oh! I get! But what do we do?
Addin: I can’t plan to go to CIS to get it. It’s like walking to a straight death. There will be traps there for me already, and Mr Luto won’t even be there. Just search Satellite Imaging on Luto. It will bring all Mr Lutos and we will just choose the one that we are looking for.
Jetar: Yeah! (she begins to press some keys and then a list is being shown) Now, we have to find him. (they begin to check all the “Lutos” with their respecting profile. They have already used hours but they’ve not found the “Luto” they are looking for. They are already somehow tired) Oh! I don’t think we can find anything here (yawns).
Addin: (also tired) Mr Luto we are looking for has a strong profile, so his name shouldn’t have been this far. They must have encrypted him from the satellite search, knowing that we would search for it.
Jetar: So what are we going to do now?
Addin: Maybe, maybe we are going to search what you wanted to search earlier.
Jetar: (confused) Satellite Imaging on CIS director? We don’t have his Registry ID Number.
Addin: Then we are just going to find out. (he gets to the system and does some things. And then, a phone number of a worker in CIS office comes up) Call the number and put it on speaker. I will use the filter.
Jetar: Okay. (she calls the number, and the owner picks up).
Ms Kedik: (she is in her office, sitting down, and very busy as she manages to pick up the call) Hello, who is this?
Addin: (clears throat and talks in a smarter way) Is this Miss Kedid from ICT department? (holding the filter close to his mouth).
Ms Kedik: Yeah, who is this?
Addin: Actually, I am from the Defense Department. A file came up, and I need Mr Luto’s Registry ID No to verify something.
Ms Kedik: (confused) From Defense Department? Why aren’t you using the Intercom?
Addin: (he and Jetar look at each other shocked) Actually, there’s something wrong with my box. The maintenance department is already working on it. It will be okay in few hours.
Ms Kedik: (a bit convinced) Hmmm.
Addin: I just checked up the directory here, found your number and called.
Ms Kedik: You know what? I am very busy. All the time you wasted in checking my number from the directory, you would have come down here and check the files for the ID No yourself. Bye. (she hangs up).
Addin: Ah! (he and Jetar are shocked and sad) Ah! She hanged up (confused and disappointed).
Jetar: (also confused) She’s our last hope. What do we do now?
Addin: (totally confused) I also don’t know. There’s nothing else we can do. (the phone rings, and they are surprised. Jetar picks up the call, while Addin picks up the filter).
Ms Kedik: (angrily) Mr Luto’s Registry ID No is 02-253-0001.
Addin: (happily) 02-253-0001? (as Jetar writes the numbers down) Oh! I am very… (Ms Kedik hangs up immediately).
Jetar: (smiling) Oh! That’s great.
Addin: Destroy the line, so we can’t be tracked through it.
Jetar: Oh, yeah! (she retrieves the line and puts it in a device. The device makes the line seems like it never existed. Then she begins to open up the search, Satellite Imaging on Director of CIS. A dialogue box comes up asking for Identification Number, and she puts in the number 02-253-0001. After some long minutes, about twenty locations are being shown on the screen).
Addin: (disappointed) Oh, shit!
Jetar: (also disappointed) Just one of these locations is the actual location of Mr Luto.
Addin: (still confused) There’s no way to be sure of his exact location.
Jetar: Unless we go to these locations one after the other.
Addin: It’s impossible and too risky. We have to get the exact location.
Jetar: There’s no way. This is just as far as we can track him.
Addin: (he angrily bangs his head, he is totally confused) Oh! What do we do?
Jetar: Oh! (realizing something) Wait, wait! (she looks at the locations closely).
Addin: (confused, as he looks at her) What?
Jetar: (still trying to figure out) Just, wait…wait!
O O O O O
(flashback)
Enoph: The stress today is not easy at all. Since they had not seen me for the past few days, I was made to make a lot of reports on my whereabouts.
Addin: (smiles) Hope you are able to feed them with accurate lies?
Enoph: (winks) Don’t you trust me? They believed all my lies.
Jetar: (playfully bangs her hand with his) I trust you, dear.
Enoph: Yes now. (Jetar lightly hugs him, and then sees a white paper almost falling out of his pocket. She takes it, and glances through the address; 4 Cheese Road, Beside Golden Supermarket; it in a second).
Jetar: (still looking at it) Which address is this?
Enoph: (snatches the paper away from her) None of your concern (he moves to the restroom, squeezing the paper back into his pocket).
O O O O O
(back)
Jetar: Oh! It’s this! (points to a location on the screen) No 4, Cheese Road, Beside Golden Supermarket.
Addin: (curious) How do you know?
Jetar: This was the address in a paper Enop kept away from me few days before he betrayed us.
Addin: (happily) Thank God. This is number twelve on the list. If we had followed your advice, we would have been to eleven wrong places before getting the right one, and also considering the risks involved if we are discovered.
Jetar: (happily hugs Addin) But now, we know the exact location. It calls for celebration. You know, Addin, it’s being a while since you treated me to couple’s drinks.
Addin: (looks at her happily, and holding her) This night! Right after Mr Luto is out, I am treating the love of my life to the most outstanding couple’s drinks.
Jetar: (happy) Promise?
Addin: Yeah! I promise.

Great!
Can't wait.......... Update please

soon...

Nidda isn't wrong. Addin isn't wrong either. Who will see his/her parents murdered and framed and yet keep quiet over it without moving a muscle even if it doesn't change anything?

Op carry on jarey but spare addin oh. Also i dont trust that Jetar girl one bit. She has some skeletons in her undies.

* * * * *
(somewhere else)
(Because of the recent attack on Mr Cylin, Mr Nonk orders that Mr Luto and Mr Stunt should be at different places. And that Enoph should be leading the security guiding Mr Luto, while Reas should be leading the security with Mr Stunt.
Enoph is sitting and Seman is on the system).
Seman: (on the system) There was a call within the CIS today about Mr Luto’s Registry ID No. I am able to figure out that the call was from outside CIS.
Enoph: (shocked) Mr Luto’s Registry ID No? Outside CIS? That’s definitely our prime enemy.
Seman: Yeah! I tried to check what the ID No was actually used for and I discovered that somebody logged on to make a particular satellite search.
Enoph: Satellite Search? Mr Luto’s Registry ID No? (smiles) That’s definitely satellite imaging on director of CIS; Addin at work.
Seman: With the security systems I used in hiding our location, I am pretty sure that they can’t know our exact location. But we can’t leave out the possibility.
Enoph: (understands) Yeah! We have to assume that they already know. (he stands up and begins to roam around the room) Assuming I am Addin, once I have the exact location and I know that if I should try and fight in, I will be easily eliminated, how will I enter?
Seman: If I am Addin, I will just blow up the place, end of discussion.
Enoph: (smiles) No! (still roaming about) Not Addin’s strategy. If Addin wants to kill somebody, he doesn’t usually think of a strategy like that. He will enter and make sure the person is dead.
Seman: (confused) So, what do you think he will do?
Enoph: I must get Addin down this time, and I must not fail. If Addin should escape today, I swear I am going to kill myself. I will shoot myself straight in the head.
Seman: (shocked) Do you mean that?
Enoph: Yeah, I do! Actually, it is an order from Mr Nonk. He personally told Reas and I that, if we fail to protect Mr Stunt and Mr Luto, and still loose Addin, we should end our own lives. And I am really going to follow that order.
Seman: (surprised) This is totally frustrating. But do you think you can arrest Addin, or save Mr Luto?
Enoph: I am going to do both.
Seman: (sighs) Really?
Enoph: Yeah. I have failed in so many attempts to defeat Addin. This is my last chance, and I won’t Bleep up. (very determined) Now, what will Addin do? Jetar is definitely going to be somewhere outside. If she is near this place so that she will be able to open this place’s layout. She will be looking for the exact room Mr Luto is. Addin will be already in, waiting for the exact room through communicator. How will Addin enter? He will want to disguise himself as anything. It maybe a businessman, manager, or anything with correct and up-to-date documents. Addin will definitely not fight, I can bet anything with that. He will just want to think of a way to enter without fighting, and fooling us in the process. Addin won’t fight, and Jetar will also be in a small car near the place. She won’t bring chopper like the other time, because she will know we will be ready for that now. She will never the car, but will try to hide well.
Seman: So, what will be our plan?
Enoph: We may have a very tight security, but we still can’t underestimate Addin’s ability. He is a very dangerous being. We can’t take him outside the premises, but once he is inside, he is dead. We will let him enter without any problem. But before we attack him, we will first cut off his backup.
Seman: Jetar?
Enoph: Yeah! You will be having your own fight against Jetar on the system. You must not let her open the building’s layout. We will be using that to stall for time. Once she can’t open the building’s layout, Addin can’t proceed since he knows it is suicide. In the meantime, I will leave with my men to get Jetar. Once we have Jetar, we can then proceed to take Addin.
Seman: (smiles) What a smart plan!
Enoph: Before then, try to learn even more about how you will do your work. More applications, download; more programs, install; more ways, learn. All I know is that Jetar must not defeat you. (looks somehow determined) I will surely not fail this time.
* * * * *
(The same day, at night)
(A company truck drives to the gate of Mr Luto’s location. Addin is using wax on his face. His truck is being stopped at the gate. Some men move to the side of the truck, as Addin winds down the glass)
Man 1: Hello, what are you doing here?
Addin: (clears throat) I am a professional worker from a plumbing company. Someone from this building called my company for the installation of Backflow Preventers.
Man 1: Where are the order documents?
Addin: Yeah! (he brings out a paper and hands it over to the man) This is it. (the man hands it over to another beside him).
Man 2: (checks the papers) Yeah, the order is correct. But why is it that you are the only one here?
Addin: (chuckles) Other workers have also been assigned to different places of works. I am just assigned here.
Man 2: With no subordinate workers?
Addin: (smiles) It’s night, they have all gone home.
Man 2: Okay.
Man 3: Is there no legal information about your company?
Addin: (smiles again) You didn’t ask for that. (he brings out a file and hands it over to him).
Man 3: (reads it) Marilah Group of Companies, situated at… (reads inward, and then after some minutes of reading) Good. But let’s check that bag beside you.
Addin: (smiles) Okay! (he gives the bag to him. The man opens the bag and only plumbing equipments are there. There’s also a separate nylon in the bag which also contains plumbing equipments)
Man 3: Why are these not with the others, but in a separate nylon?
Addin: I don’t know! I just picked them up from the store.
Man 2: The back of the truck.
Addin: Check it, it’s not closed.
Man 2: Okay! (he goes to the back of the truck and finds a backflow preventer there) Confirmed!
Man 3: Okay, you can proceed.
Addin: Yeah! (the gate is automatically opened, and he drives in gently).
Man 1: (he switches on his comm. as Addin enters) Addin is in. (Addin looks back and sees him that he’s talking through comm.)
Addin: (through comm.) We have to be careful, they didn’t give me much problem in entering.
Jetar: (in a different car, near the building, also on comm.) Yeah! How will you get to the water system room?
Addin: They are going to lead me there themselves. (a man comes to meet him).
Man 4: Are you the plumber?
Addin: Yeah!
Man 4: I think you will be going to the water system room, right?
Addin: Yeah!
Man 4: Pick your things and follow me. (Addin picks up his bag and backs it. He also picks up the Backflow Prevent and follows the man to a room. The man leaves him in the room. Through comm.) He is in the water system room.
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Enoph: (somewhere else, through comm.) Yeah! Don’t attack him yet. We have to take Jetar first.
- - - - -
Addin: (through comm.) I am in. Start.

Is this where jetar falls??

What! This is a great suspense so far, pleas update ASAP, you can't just stop here right now. Please

Jetar: Yeah! (she begins to operate the system, checking some things and wanting to open some layouts. But she is not able to. She just continues to try harder).
- - - - -
Seman: (to Enoph) The hacker is not trying to open the building’s layout.
Enoph: (surprised) Then what?
Seman: Just the entire water piping system of the building. Just the piping system map. (he is confused).
Enoph: (first confused, and then smiles) Oh! I get them. They are just trying to confuse us just as they think they’ve just done. They want us to believe that they are truly plumbers, so that we won’t suspect them.
Seman: (realizes this) Yeah! So what should I do?
Enoph: (smiles) Let’s play along. We have to let them think that we are truly fooled. First, open the piping map for them. And second, check the surroundings and get exactly where Jetar is.
Seman: Yeah! (he begins to operate the system. He opens the piping system map, and then begins to track Jetar around the building. He begins to point to the screen) This is Jetar. (pointing to a red mark on a map on the screen).
Enoph: (looks at the screen carefully, and smiles) Behind that tree. (through comm.) Team A, are you ready? … Let’s go and get her.
- - - - -
Addin: (impatient) Be quick. (through comm.)
Jetar: (after some seconds) Yeah! I have gotten the map! Turn left (Addin turns left), left again (he turns there). Right (he turns right). Turn… (she stops as an alert comes up. It is an alert trying to tell her that she is being tracked).
Addin: (angrily) Continue now.
Jetar: (scared and quickly ignores the alert) Oh! Sorry! Left twice. (he turns there) The pipes there, the fourth one from your right.
Addin: Good! (he smiles) Let’s get started (he puts gloves on his hands. He marks the actual pipe. He switches off the tap regulator. He waits for like five minutes, for all the remaining water inside the pipe to be used up. While waiting, he brings out a bottle and a syringe. He fills the content of the bottle into the syringe. When the water in the pipe is finished, he moves back to the pipe he marked and injects the syringe into it. He fills the syringe again, and injects the pipe again. He continues this until the bottle is empty. He uses a thick tape to cover the point the syringe entered through. He goes back to the tap regulator, and switches it on. He then smiles) Done! Time to wait for the distraction.
Jetar: (also smiles) Good job! (she sees some men coming towards her car. The car she is in is the one she and Addin planned on taking away after the operation. So, in order, not to blow up their plan, she decides to lure them away. She doesn’t want to inform Addin about the men, because if she does, Addin will surely want to save her, and that will also destroy their operation. She picks up her two guns, and gets out of the car. She begins to run to particular direction. Immediately the men see her running away, they quickly follow her. After some seconds of running, she finally stops and faces them, taking cover. She shoots two out of them down and changes cover. They begin to shoot to her side but she is able to dodge their bullets. Since it is in the night, she is not able to see them all clearly. The men quickly split into different directions. They are able to distract her from knowing that they’ve split, as they continue to shoot at her side. Suddenly, she hears rattling of leaves some stones thrown away from her, from her back. She faces back, and points her guns to the direction. Suddenly about five men attack her, kicking and punching her. She falls down, and her guns fall down from her hands. Another man wants to kick her again, but she grabs his leg, twists it, breaks some bones and throws him away. She gives one of them a blow on his chest, and another one a blow on his face, simultaneously, as she stands up. An enemy wants to kick her, but she uses her legs to return his legs, and gives him some heavy blows on his stomach. She gives the last an elbow attack on his neck. She wants to pick his gun to face those that are still trying to shoot her, but then a man from the shade gives her a heavy slap on her left cheek. She falls down immediately. And then, Enoph comes out of the shade. Jetar is somehow scared as she sees him. She quickly stands up, wanting to dodge any other slaps. She is now at alert. As Enoph wants to give her another slap on her left cheek, she is able to block his hand. But she is not able to block Enoph’s second hand on her right cheek. She falls down heavily again. She stands up and rushes to Enoph. Enoph is able to get all her attacks, and then gives her some counter-attack blows and kicks. She falls down again, now bleeding. Enoph brings out his gun and points it to her. She stops immediately. Then some men come and tie her tightly with a strong and long rope.
Then a man begins to talk to Enoph through comm.)
Man 5: (he is shocked and scared, through comm.) Sir! I am in position, but I can hear Mr Luto screams from here.
Enoph: (shocked and confused) What! (to Seman, on comm.) What’s happening? How was Addin able to get to him?
Seman: (also shocked) I don’t know, sir! According to what I have here, Addin is still in that water system room. I really don’t know what’s happening, but I can also hear Mr Luto’s screams. Some men are already on the way to his room.
Enoph: (still confused) All men should get to Mr Luto’s room now. It is Addin! He is already there. He must have used one of his tricks to blindfold Seman. Everyone, on him. We must get him. I will join you now.
All men: (on comm.) Copied. (all the securities in the building rushes to Mr Luto’s room. Peeping through a hole, Addin notices them running towards a particular direction. He smiles as he realizes that his plan is working. He quickly comes out of the room, hiding from them. Immediately almost all of them are gone, he quickly drags the very last man, making sure he is not seen. He covers his mouth, and twists his neck. He takes the man’s gun, and leaves him on the floor. He keeps the gun in his pocket, and quickly climbs up the wall. As he gets down, Enoph and some men, just coming, see Addin. Jetar is not with them).
Enoph: (shocked) Addin! Get him. (as Addin sees them, he begins to run away. All the other men running to Mr Luto’s room now knows where Addin really is, so they quickly change their direction to outside. They all begin to chase him. He is running at a very fast speed, but they are running towards him at a faster speed. They begin to shoot while chasing him, but he also starts to dive to dodge the bullets. This is not as he planned, so he is kind of scared. After some minutes of running, he finally gets to where Jetar’s car is but they are still running after him. He gets in to the car, but is now totally scared when he realizes that Jetar is not in the car.
If he should stay and face the men including Enoph, in less time, he will be easily defeated. He knows that it is suicide to face all those men alone. So he is left with no choice than to just leave, or they are going to kill him. “Jetar is not here, but the car is not damaged. Probably, she’s safe”, he thought. He just gets in the car, and drives away. They begin to shoot at the car but he is able to dive. So the bullets didn’t meet him nor his car. However, a bullet shot by Enoph meets the car’s windscreen glass at the rear, as it breaks immediately. But Addin is still able to drive away. Enoph is totally frustrated and disappointed as he wants to cry that he fails again, Addin escaped. A man comes to meet him).
Man 6: (sadly) Mr Luto’s dead, sir.
Enoph: (shocked) What? I thought the scream was just a distraction.
Man 6: What Addin actually did at the piping system was that he filled the pipe that runs to the bathtub in Mr Luto’s room with a highly concentrated acid.
Enoph: (still surprised) But, how does he know Mr Luto’s room?
Man 6: He must had known that he would surely be in the largest and most conducive room. I believe that’s how he knew.
Enoph: (shocked and really disappointed in himself) So, he filled the pipe with the acid, and waited for Mr Luto to bath. So immediately he opened the tap, he screamed as the concentrated acid fell on his body. Addin used that against us, knowing that once we hear Mr Luto’s screams, we would think he is there, and then rush there. He used that to distract us, and then climbed the wall to escape. He has not just his brain, but luck to thank for, that Mr Luto actually bathed at the time he wanted.
Man 6: Exactly.
Enoph: (really disappointed) I will fulfill my promise. I will kill myself but I will make sure that I prepare Addin’s death before that. (he brings out a phone from his pocket. He picked the phone from Jetar’s pocket. He calls a particular number on the dialed numbers on the phone, and really, Addin’s phone rings while he is still in the car. He picks up)
Addin: (curious) Jetar, where are you? Your comm. was disabled and I am not… (he is being interrupted).
Enoph: (interrupts him) Do you want to see her again?
Addin: (shocked) Enoph?
Enoph: There is a dead building at Toffew road, the place is painted yellowish-green. Go there, and shoot yourself dead. I won’t be there myself, but we will send CIS, SSU, and Police to verify your dead body. Once it is confirmed, Jetar will be released immediately. You have 48 hours. (he hangs up).
Addin: (tears start to roll down from his eyes) No! No! Please, Enoph! (he realizes he has hanged up) No! No! Jetar.
O O O O O
(flashback)
Addin: (still crying) I am absolutely useless. Why was I not able to save her then, and you too? What if that wasn’t a training and you were really shot? What would have been my fate? I will be shattered to pieces. I am really scared that if you are by my side, I may loose you just as I nearly did.
Jetar: Please, stop! I will make sure I take good care of myself. You couldn’t protect her, and you couldn’t protect me. You may change that bad omen, by determining to protect me. Protect me for her. Use me to remember her.
Addin: (looks at Jetar in the eyes, and wipes off his tears) Do you promise me you will be fine by my side?
Jetar: (anxious but delighted) I promise you, that no matter what, you won’t loose me!
- - - - -
(still in flashback)
Jetar: (happily hugs Addin) But now, we know the exact location. It calls for celebration. You know, Addin, it’s being a while since you treated me to couple’s drinks.
Addin: (looks at her happily, and holding her) This night! Right after Mr Luto is out, I am treating the love of my life to the most outstanding couple’s drinks.
Jetar: (happy) Promise?
Addin: Yeah! I promise.
O O O O O
(back)
Addin: (now crying uncontrollably) No! Jetar! No! You promised me you will be fine, and I promised you couple’s drink. No! (he continues to cry. After some hours of crying, he knows he can’t drive himself home as he may get himself involved in accident. He calls Mary, who quickly comes to pick him up from the spot).
* * * * *
Enoph: (his phone rings, and he answers it) Yes, sir!
Mr Nonk: (angrily) Mr Luto is dead! And Addin escaped!
Enoph: (disappointed) I am sorry, sir! I am going to follow your order, sir! (he cocks his gun and points it to his head).
Mr Nonk: (sighs) Don’t shoot yourself. Since you have his girl, it’s just like you have him. Just come to my country with the girl.
Enoph: (delighted) Yes, sir!
* * * * *
(Midnight. Addin is on his bed, trembling uncontrollably. Mary is sitting on a chair watching him. Addin can’t stop crying and thinking about Jetar. “Is she dead? Is she wounded? What are they doing to her? What is she thinking? What will he do to her?” So many thoughts flash through his mind).
Mary: Addin, just sleep and stop thinking about this.
Addin: (still crying, facing the other side) Stop… stop thinking about what? Stop thinking that I got her into the pit of hell?
Mary: Are you really going to kill yourself like they said?
Addin: I have got no other choice. What else should I do? Should I let Jetar die because of me?
Mary: Addin, this is exactly what they want. They want you to be scared, they don’t want you to fight. They are scared of you. Do you think they are going to release Jetar, if you kill yourself? Hell, no! The moment you kill yourself, Jetar dies too. Because if they release Jetar after you die, Jetar is going to be full of revenge. She will come back at them. They won’t want that. They aren’t so foolish. So, they will definitely going to kill her.
Addin: (still crying) But what do you think I should do?
Mary: Fight!
Addin: What if they get angry, and kill her in the process?
Mary: If you don’t fight, she’s going to die anyway. The only way to get Jetar out alive is to fight. You can do it. (she moves to the bed, sleeps beside him and holds his hands to comfort him through the night).

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