Literature › Re: A Short Story by slap1(m): 9:44pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
Weeks later, when my husband Ayo, returned home, the serene way his lips curled into a smile filled me with rage. There should be no comma immediately after Ayo. However, I love the idea of the story. I suggest you give it a title ( 'Desire ', maybe). I'd also love it if you continue and understand if you won't. When I have chance, I may write a continuation for it, for fun, and paste it here. |
Literature › Re: The First Class Student ( A Short Story) by slap1(m): 9:23pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
Nice. But you need to pay attention to details: sequence of tenses, omission of articles, concord, punctuation, and compactness of sentences. Good work. No be to graduate with first class be the koko! |
Crime › Re: 59-Year-Old Man Arrested For Raping 2 Sisters Aged 3 & 5 by slap1(m): 9:02pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
His name says it all:
Ferdinand Duwa na AMU. That's all. |
Politics › Re: Katsina Stoning: Niger Delta “ll Retaliate, Says Dokubo Asari by slap1(m): 9:01pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
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Politics › Re: Katsina Stoning: Niger Delta “ll Retaliate, Says Dokubo Asari by slap1(m): 8:55pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
sleekp1: Asari was speaking from Abuja, he travels to the Delta unrestricted, thank you. But he is not a Nigerian. How is it his business? |
Politics › Re: Katsina Stoning: Niger Delta “ll Retaliate, Says Dokubo Asari by slap1(m): 8:52pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
Retaliate from Benin Republic? It's a pity that those that should be in prison are given the status of senior citizens in this country.
[ Vote ALEX OTTI FOR GOVERNOR, ABIA STATE ] |
Celebrities › Re: Davido Shows Off His Expensive Cars (photo) by slap1(m): 8:31pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
VickyyB: Ugly short boy. Even his money won't turn me on.  I trust you!  |
Celebrities › Re: Davido Shows Off His Expensive Cars (photo) by slap1(m): 8:29pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
Congrats! Na your time. |
Celebrities › Re: Charly Boy: “Why I’m A Buddhist & Take My Siesta Inside A Coffin” - Pics by slap1(m): 8:24pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
I care more about an unknown, sick, hungry child in an obscure corner of the earth than this phantom.
VOTE ALEX OTTI FOR GOVERNOR OF ABIA STATE! |
Politics › Re: Katsina College Releases Buhari’s WASC Results by slap1(m): 8:12pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
Why is he wearing a cap? |
Celebrities › Re: Meet Ice Prince's New Girlfriend, French-ghanaian Beauty Maima - Pics by slap1(m): 8:04pm On Jan 21, 2015 |
OK... Waiting for the next one. |
Politics › Re: APC Rejects PDP’s Denial Of Fayose’s Controversial Buhari Advert by slap1(m): 8:27pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
Haha. They reject it? How? They accept Buhari may die in office or what? |
Celebrities › Re: Georgina Onuoha's Marriage Crashes by slap1(m): 7:25pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
Pity. I admired her acting. |
Romance › Re: She Has Never Received Anything From Me !! Could This Be Love? by slap1(m): 7:22pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
youngds: stop fooling urself , she is just a friend or maybe she has bigger plans for, like using u for ritual Haha haha! Which kain people full this site sef? |
Politics › Re: Police Intercepts 850 Cutlasses Smuggled Into Katsina By Political Party by slap1(m): 7:17pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
coolhamid: Since the party was not mentioned that clearly shows its PDP.. If it were to be APC, they would have mention the party... PDP causing havoc in Nigeria since 1999.. This implies GEJ has people that will fight for him in the north. He is fairly popular then. |
Family › Re: My Wife Is Pregnant For An ‘Okada’ Man, Pastor Laments In Court by slap1(m): 7:12pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
The okada man's swag has to be really enviable. |
Family › Re: My Husband Thinks I Lied 2 Him About My Virginity Bcz I Didnt Bleed The 1st Time by slap1(m): 7:06pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
The disappointment from your hubby is understandable. Let me ask, if there was no blood, was there a triumphant entry? Because that should make you a liar, not the lack of flow. |
Politics › Re: Which Of These Nigerian Politicians Is The Best Dancer? (Photos) by slap1(m): 5:08pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
This Amechi guy is crazy!  |
Politics › Re: Nigeria Election Debate Group Releases Timetable For Presidential Debates by slap1(m): 2:25pm On Jan 20, 2015 |
BokoHaramm: I will like to hear GMB english and how he will stabilise oil price that day. Lol. You're nuts! |
Romance › Re: What Does It Mean To Be In An Open Relationship? by slap1(m): 10:52am On Jan 20, 2015 |
Means while eating egusi soup, you could as well taste okro if you want. And so could the other person. |
Politics › Re: Ill by slap1(m): 5:22am On Jan 20, 2015 |
musiwa94: I think most of you are illiterate And most of us know you've lost your marbles. |
Jokes Etc › Re: Laugh Off Your Sorrows With This Hilarious Joke by slap1(m): 8:52pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
The real joke lies in the extreme dryness of the original 'joke'. |
Family › Re: How Many Men Still Do This In Nigeria ? (pics) by slap1(m): 8:48pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
My future wife sitting on that type of chair and me cooking with that type of pot is certainly not our portion. Amen! |
Celebrities › Re: Ini Edo And Mike Godson Are Dating (Photos) by slap1(m): 4:06pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
My guy don leave pillow put head for bobbbby. Congrats! Osho free things! |
Politics › Re: Gbenga Adeyinka Mocks Jonathan Over N10 Fuel Price Reduction by slap1(m): 4:02pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
Gbenga and co should be neutral. All these careless posts could potentially put him out of business. |
Travel › Re: The Bad State Of Murtala Muhammed International Airport by slap1(m): 2:43pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
Looks like a local bakery. |
Politics › Re: Picture Of A Woman Clad In APC'S T-SHIRT And PDP'S Wrapper! by slap1(m): 1:59pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
powerblaze: Yea she's APC at heart, and she's PDP down there  Down where? |
Politics › Re: Picture Of A Woman Clad In APC'S T-SHIRT And PDP'S Wrapper! by slap1(m): 1:59pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
Which way, Nigeria? |
Politics › Re: Controversial PDP Ad On Punch Newspaper Front Page (Photo) by slap1(m): 1:08pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
Irresponsible journalism. The Punch shouldn't have accepted the advert. |
Car Talk › Re: Man Killed In Ikorodu By Hit And Run Driver (Photo) by slap1(m): 12:17pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
elantraceey: He would have checked careful nau  That's why i'm never in a hurry to cross an highway.
May his soul rest in peace Lots of things on his mind, maybe. |
Celebrities › Re: Uche Jombo, Mike Ezuruonye & Others Pour In Tributes For Muna Obiekwe by slap1(m): 12:07pm On Jan 19, 2015 |
RIP Our celebrities are using abbreviations annoyingly. |
Celebrities › Re: Throwback Photo Of Kcee Will Make You Laugh by slap1(m): 11:51am On Jan 19, 2015 |
The same material he used for that coat can easily be used to make two suits for him today. Poor guy be dreaming big... |