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nkpommpko:
Nigeria is not hopeless with minds like you. Respect!

thanks sire

kossyablaze:
If you participated in Shiloh, or the Redeemed program and you
are still supporting GMB as the right person to rule this country, I
am beginning to doubt your Christianity....Obviously God didn't
speak to you... *last bullet*I love you OP!

wow! Thanks

devigblegble:
Needed these so bad on a Sunday morning ... Thanks op

you welcome sire

sweetjulie, caught you!

Wow! I must confess, this is P-E-R-F-E-C-T Queennelly, you just opened my heart with this stowie... Well, Hannah, hiding the test result would just be another reptition of Ben's secret action, and the outcome of the cancer would expose everything, hence she'll have only herself to blame plus Ben aint gonna like that... Ruby? Damn! I wish she were real, I'd have love to have her as a kid, she'd try her best to always lighten up Hannah's face despite the problem. And joe?! Pls don't let's kill that open-hearted simple gentleman, he needs hannah so there got to be a quick solution to that cancer thing. Its your story though, just bring it out as perfect as it has been. *kisses*

Purity1:
wow this is wonderful thanks alot.

uwlcm

On a dark cool night
souls were kissing the bed and pillow
the stars, alongside the moonlight
made love and bore a faint glow
.

A glow that illuminated the earth.
On a dark cool night
the birds had retired to their nest
whilstling and singing a-light
.

Amidst these activities
of the wonderful creatures,
a mother hen lay on her egg and hatches
The chick revered the beauty
of nature
.

the newly-born gazed at the sky
watching its kings dominating their abode
The poor thing wished so hard to fly
fly high like the kings, brave and bold
.

On a dark cool night
the rays of a new dawn perpetuated the darkness
welcoming the morning light
watching the mother hen flying cross the lawn
,

On a dark cool night
the kings hovered in their abode
singing and hallowing the creator's might
and the thought of the chick arose
.

A day would come when i would fly
not as the mother hen but a bird
perhaps i might just turn to a bird and soar high
to where the the sight of man will never beheld

wow! Purity, this is PURE, i mean your choices of words are good, your use of imagery and distict discription, better. All you need is the background knowledge of poetry.., and i promise you, you have the sky as your starting point. Wait ama rearrange that for you. Keep eet huuup!

tmx21:
Wow! I love this poem, susrite keep it up.

thanks man

Queennelly:
very nice
the tone, the choice of words, all good
its depicts hope determination
you can only make it if you try

wow! Thanks a bunch

festwiz:
Good one bro. Follow back

thanks #done

Queennelly:
I just replied and updated
will like to see the thread too

follow my signature

Queennelly:
wow thanks
really needed this
points taken. u r blessed and on.the tutorials u teach me I teach you am not perfect
xo what do u need?

ooow! Never knew you've replied. Ill tell you what i need later

Hi QueenNelly, well done, and when is the next update? I told you to take me on tutorials and you didnt even reply, well, eerm i just created my first thread, would you like to read?

regular updater? Hey almacherish, you are needed
i vote almacherish

Your plus
your choice of words
your simple literary ability
your arrangements
what to work on
indepth physical attribute
carefullness on your quotation marks
effective but simple language (all of us no be BSc candidate)
my wish
can you take me on written-artistry tutorials?
.
But seriously, this is one hell of an almost-perfect writeup. Keep it up queennelly

festwiz keep it up! Nice one bruv

I'm hoping this's gonna be a great one! Wow! Did i just made my first comment on NL on your story? You better don't dissapoint me. Besides, queen [why the queen?] jennimma, permit me to take a sit beside you...