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A poet is like a painter or an artiste with so much words, simple or complex to build an amazing castle. Ur poems are ok but I think you should reduce in trying to make the wording rhymes cos sometimes it becomes so boring 2 read and might even destroy the original content/context of the poem (you can try and improve in ur use of metaphors, Cos 2 me is a perfect replacement)...I actually got tired of reading the first few poems which I had to scrolld down to read the rest with less rhyming which were beautifully and excellently made. To write is to have an imagination that some people would see as being weird once in a while and yours cannot be far from it and I bet if you try your hands on writing novel you might actually get a shot at it with this your musing wey you don take scatter my head finish.






























My 1 kobo as a self acclaimed retired amature Poet lol