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Truly its lame colors,he employed a choice of colloquial diction as it sounds more lyrical than poetical, this accentuated ur unoriginality n height of plagiarism,so b real at it wit sumtin new,out!

Lonelypal, sumhow u were quite complacent on dis 1 but i agree with u on this against colors, analyticaly speaking,the lines were nt forced nor contorted as u did nt lack the elements of an emotionaly inclined verse, Its clever n better yet speaks poignantly though the expression was intricately woven,u were able 2 achieve dat special poetic effect bt if i may suggest,work on simplicity n style, cheerz man,ure gud at it!

Helo @ poetry folks,2 av an accord n kip al handz on deck,a yahoo msngr group tagged "YOUNG POETS" shld b created by d person spearheadin d whole thingy so as 2 kip us abreast of d latest dev

Helo Nairalanderz,dis is a poem i wrote lately afta i lost my will n inspiration, hope u find it good enough
I shall often sit down alone

til joy fades gently away but fast
slowly,i try to mourn but cried
then i dreamt of home,ancestral home
too distant to return
,
Again,i heard rhythms frm ancestaral lands
drumming fiercely
naked spirits and midnite children dancing
laughing intently
at once,im poised wit lifes mistake
it rises again,bitternes fills d air
babalawos chanting;like clatter baritone
suddenly,it storms heavily,d sky turns black

it rains,raining of sadness and regret

Check voicesnet.com,poetryamerica.org,writerscafe.org n dailypoem.co.uk, i bliv ul find sum reasonable stuf in ther!

Sory buddies,d email add is trevelyansprototype@yahoo.com

Nice poem buddy,i can feel ur sense of xpresion, ure very much a writer like me

Guday @ all,im ovie olori, dis post reflects on al poetry folkz/writers out ther willing to publish an anthology, iv got a huge volume of works n im calling on writers sharing d same interest so as to av a joint publication under a set agreement, interested writers shld mail me on trevelyansprototype,msg/call on 08020634698 or send a msg 2 user id trevelyan on kobrawap.com, earnestly waitin 4 a reply, il surely get bck 2 u!