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Clemzy16: e don do abeg.

lolz... Warri go say " e rech"

Ruby spice: He wants more Dan to enter d jeepu? Lol

I swear down lolz... Oya dey *dropt* hot na or na til 2morow?

Waitin expectantly...

Sir Frank, I just read d 1st part of dis story and yet 2 finish d second part. Wow now i get ur points clearly. U are 1 wonderful fellow on Nairaland.
By d way have u seen James Omokwe's Awakening (movie)?.

Splendblex: Waiting for more...op weldone

Sowi 2 kip y'all waitin, am tryin 2 fix smtin up. Min while ma work abi na job is eatin all ma tym. Updatin lata sha....

Shey u don enta "mulano jeep?" e go clear u eyes soon.
As 4 ur story, Wat mur can i say? Carry goo

Dis story + Dubic = ?

Min while, I guess sm1 is Missin In Action... "Special Agent Princessa"

When? Downin ma dubic and watchin

[quote author=frank3.16]I love ur story and I promise to be wit u all the way[/quote]Tnks man am rily grateful.

Anytime...

repogirl: How bout man/ woman, or does 'man' encompass both? And what does Literature man of the year' mean? Isn't it same as best writer. I think I prefer the former categories as HBG outlined on the other thread.

And i was hopin she could just lift d essential parts in respect to dis award stuff and... The rocket wud av bin half way gone.

I read d whole work and it was ok. The only pain was dat d narration was not very descriptive, maybe cuz i was a day student bak in sec. Sch so i don't knw much abt d boardin house lyf style... All u nided was a lil tym. People wud av com 2 comment and correct ur flaws. Princesa and some ordas constructed mine smtym ago.

ReineViolet: [color=#0066ff]BUT it was bad. I have to scrap it[/color]

well u av don it... U just murdered a "living work in cold blood." so i advise u modify it and put it up again.

oruchechuks: weirder than u think

den i certainly don't wanna be der... Lolz. Oya com *dropt it hot*

ReineViolet: I felt bad about the story ... It looks awful

It certainly wasn't dat bad na. So wat do u intend doin?

Wat happened here? Reeneevio...!

Min while am finally here... am now up to speed... U are pretty gud lyk i anticipated

datblaqgurl: d examiner got examined.. Dats nice

Like in "The ghost and d darkness, when d hunters became d hunted."

oruchechuks: thanks very much. have u been to sango? so U'll know were chike lives

Nope... I guess its gonna be rily weird...

repogirl: Aww, but I can't share it, it's on my amazon kindle.

Am a bit lost here... Well wen i get bak 2 calabar am gonna source 4 it

The meeting with patrick was set after the Lawyer was able to convince the officers on duty of its importance in her clients case. Benson stood with Susan at a corner and heard the officers and the lawyer discussing in a hush tone. He didn't hear them clearly but somehow he deduced they were denying her request.

Doris had made references to the constitution severally and even spat some legal jargon which obviously was incomprehensible by the officers and was at the verge of raising her voice before she had her way.

Benson had only a few minutes with his brother. The whole time Patrick had emphasized that he kept both himself and Susan on a low key through the case.

"I don't want you to gain any attention during this period. I am not telling that Lady nothing and I don't want you to ok?" Patrick warned his brother who apparently was listening with keen interest.

Just like the Inspector had planned Patrick wouldn't mention anything about Chamberline as he doesn't have a clue of the guy's way about.

"Patrick just be strong then. I just hope Doris finds a way to help with what ever means available to her" Benson told his brother. He didn't want Patrick to notice the hot tears steaming in his red eyes.

"Yeah bro, just remember all I told you." Patrick replied his brother who was already standing up and ready to leave before the arrogant officers will remind him that his "time was up".

Benson was almost half out of the room when Patrick called out after him.

"If they can't get the hen they go for the chicks." Benson understood those words properly. Their mother never failed to say it to them, especially when the travelled to the village. Benson did not reply, he nodded his head slowly and left the room to meet Doris and Susan where they were waiting for him.

Susan had only met the Lawyer but they were discussing like they had known for ages. Doris was slightly older than Susan perhaps the same age as Benson.

"How did it go?" Doris asked as Benson joined them. He replied with only a flash of smile.

"Same old story ma'am. He didn't accept he knew anything else.... and somehow I believe him" Benson added. Susan heaved sigh of relief. She knew things would certainly get ugly if a word about drug peddling was said.

"How is bro P?" she finally asked.

"He's hanging on as strong as he could, just that he has lost some weight." he noticed the sorrow on his sister's face.

"It's no big deal" he quickly added to ease the young lady.

Susan softly turned her neck to both directions and it made a cracking sound. She traced her long natural hair along her ear line.

As Doris drove out from the Police station, she couldn't place her thought on anything besides her client and his family. They were really awesome and she had fallen in love with all of them. They possess and show so much courage that she wished to emulate them. She would do her best with the little information she had in this case, she thought within herself.

"We haven't negotiated your bill Ma'am" Benson said.

"Don't worry about that for now" Doris replied, once in her life she was speeding.

underage: Kudos. But please make the updates more lenghty, that'll make the story more interesting.

Yes ma... I 'll try 2 do just dat. Tnks

ninja4life: Haha nice work kudos to d op pls update more frequently

Have bin tryin 2 work on dat wit no success. Stil tryin sha. Tnks bro

[quote author=Mynd_44]I follow every story [/quote]Rily? I guess it won't be easy.

@Repogirl I guess i'm interested

yemi2plus: While doing the above, try to change the names of your characters so as not to put yourself in wahala.

oga Yemi u dey fear? U are ryt sha

seunviju: Keep up the Good work

I'll... Tnks 4 readin 2ru

Smhart1: Gosh! Am turning a silent reader
******weldone******

eya plz don't turn a silent reader o. Gud 2 see u around

Splendblex: Interesting...! Weldone o

Tnks dear

repogirl: Lol, u want to borrow it?

wish i cud... I heard d book won an award.

D only reason why I believe u are as beautiful as u claim is d BEAUTY of dis work. Khia! Am checkin Oxford and longman 4 an adjective 2 qualify it... Finally i gat a warri writer on NL.