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Please keep it up. I want to know the reason why the psycho is doing what he was doing.

Welcome back dear. And thanks for the update.

Nice one bro. More inspiration to your brain.

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i am here boss. Ride on

Intresting. Keep it up

ftosino:
Today Is My Baiday Fellow Literature Lovers, Pls Marrianneada Make The Update Long Wella For My Sake,
Thanks.

Happy birthday bro

Nice update. Noticed some typos. But all together, good work. Keep it up

I like your line of story. Keep it up

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i am here oooo ride on

And another wonderful master stroke here bro. Keep it up

Another mastro bro. Keep it up and thanks for the mention

cbella:
Sure! Thanks for that observation Xaviercasmir. Regarding the spacing ,am pretty much trying to adjust to the NL settings when posting cuz it's totally different from the main source.
Lazy at proof reading and editing but will sure try and work on the latter.

i hope i got this emoji right now

lol you are on point dear

Your story line is good but you should make of word spacing. And also you make your readers confused because we don’nt know when a sentance end or the start of it.
In all, your story is good but is poorly stated. But you can learn from the experenced ones here on nairaland like chumzypinky marianneada and Divepen1 to see how they state their works.
More ink to your pen and keep it up

Nice intro. Intresting. Please keep it up

my guy i have learn one or two things from the master. And thanks for the mention. Keep it up

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An update is coming soon....
Thanks to y'all

we are waiting

Just one word bro “EPIC”. Keep it up bro.

Nice work bro

BiafraBushBoy:
Wake up to a new episode.

i am waiting

Wow update bumber to bumber. Keep it up bro

Breathtaking and one of the most exciting story i have ever read on nairaland. Keep it up bro and i am waiting for the part 2

do4luv14:
that film sucks, 24hours
mistcheew!!!!...., I hate that movie

but one of my best tv series ever

do4luv14:
that mole might even be that computer guy, Paul

maybe you are right but on my own opinion it maybe Taila. Thanks to waching too much of 24 tv series

do4luv14:
I think there is a mole in mossad too

me too

do4luv14:
that's what I mean by desire affects, there is many hills around , and mountains, to create imst from, as well many ghettos to create the slum for the safe house,


the materials are available , but the manpower and wills to do it is. Lacking, cost of cost and pirates

true word my brother

do4luv14:
but nollywood can create history by , shooting it to the desire affects,


that's apart from greed

nollywood will not be able to shoot the film in diffrent locations that are mentioned in the story. And they will not sit down and organize the story before shooting it.

My guy Hollywood should buy this story oooo. Keep it up

Thanks for the update. Keep it up

Thanks for the mention. I really like this story. Keep it up.

A thriller indeed. More ink to your pen.