So sad.

Another dope work here. Keep it up. And thanks for the mention

CowHard:




Lol...I'm not bro though wish to be another centino

ooopss sorry about the misconception. Just a few typos, apart from that you are good. As for you being Oga Centino, you will if you just keep your readers imaginations restless. Keep it up

Thanks for the update

The update is very intresting and nicely composed. Your descriptive about the whole thing is really cool. Keep it up

bro. Are you related to Centino. Because you write like him. Keep it up. And you just got a fan.
Oga Centino please come and check.

You just got yourselve a new fan. Keep it up bro.

I like how you described the characters and the settings. Keep it up

Nice story line that you got here. Keep it up. And please mention me when you update the next chapter.

I nominate THE BLESSED MAN

Your storyline is really intresting. I like the way you infuse what is happening in our society to your story. Keep it up.
And congratulation to you man on the competition that you won. This shows that the sky will only be your starting point.
And also i like Mr Cosmas' view about life.
Thanks a lot for the update man.

badohemmy:


I see you know me like the back of your palm. Taking this personal shows me the person you are. A week ago you probably enjoyed the story, now it's time to join the bandwagon of name calling. Anyway, Thanks.

Mature response. You have my respect bro.

I am happy to share the same birth month with a great writer in the making. May the blessings of the lord be with you the rest of your life. And i pray that your life span will increase to atleast another 95yrs to come.
Happy birthday THE BLESSED MAN

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.....Shewrites is a fool why wOnt sHE upDATe siNcE.......

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Intresting update ma'am. I like the twist of the event. Keep it up

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Nice update ma'am. This ur big big grammer u dey blow anyhow. Hmmm people lyk us wey chop our school fees no go fit understand am ooo.
Anyway nice story and more data to your phone.

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Thanks for the update.

Thanks for the mention man. Nice update

Thanks bro for the update.

Welcome back bro. After the epic story, "kasala th e lighting stone". You are back with this wonderful work.
Keep it up brotherly.

Intresting story. Keep it up

Your story is intresting. Like i am watching an American movie with Nigerian characters. Nice work. Keep it up

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thanks for the update. I smell love triangle drama oo.

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thanks ma'am for the update. Keep it up

And the drama have just started. Nice work. Keep it up

Cadec007:
Thanks for the mention.....my "own constructive criticism" is you should make the work either full novel mode or full drama[play] mode not in between i.e instead of mixing dialogues like [asake: give me the cup] with 1st 2nd or 3rd person narrative ["give me the cup" asake barked]just make it one of the two.don't be offended hope you get?

I totally agree with you on this one bro.

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Nice story line bro. Following already

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the future will tell bro.

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