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Your story is intresting. Like i am watching an American movie with Nigerian characters. Nice work. Keep it up

Mizsylviah:
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thanks for the update. I smell love triangle drama oo.

Mizsylviah:
honourable356, Cadec007, Ehmjay, BiadeFolar, Nelsizzy, Oluwakemi65, bimberry1407, John944, xaviercasmir, Godwinfury, dissybling, petkoffdrake2, oris4show

thanks ma'am for the update. Keep it up

And the drama have just started. Nice work. Keep it up

Cadec007:
Thanks for the mention.....my "own constructive criticism" is you should make the work either full novel mode or full drama[play] mode not in between i.e instead of mixing dialogues like [asake: give me the cup] with 1st 2nd or 3rd person narrative ["give me the cup" asake barked]just make it one of the two.don't be offended hope you get?

I totally agree with you on this one bro.

Ok. Following

Nice story line bro. Following already

seun0225:
Cadec007. Evold , idrisbabat5, Black5050, Dranoid, honourable356, Godwinfury, EmperorTayo1864, dammypheex, YINKS89, Bolaji299, ayxmania, ijeleNwa, dazzysleek, YINKS89, BiadeFolar, Danchoco, aprilwise, xasviercasmier,kevwecute.
Come and read o
I hope you all find it interesting

the future will tell bro.

Following

Bibi294:
See as this thread dey dry..

Bolaji299, ayxmania, ijeleNwa, dazzysleek, YINKS89, BiadeFolar, Danchoco, aprilwise, xasviercasmier,kevwecute come o... Food don don

Thanks ma'am for the update

IjeleNwa:
God will punish Soyinka for causing a life-stigma in our country

[quote author=IjeleNwa post=64924406]:-/ :-/

BiadeFolar:
I am actually a HE!... Thanks, I'm only a learner

Sorry man. My bad

Thanks for the mention sis. The description of the story is good. Keep it up

Thanks sweetie for the mention. Your story line is intresting and captivating. A little us of paragraph will even make it more easy to read. Keep it up.

This siara is a devil. Keep it up bro

I really like how you narrate your story bro. Keep it up.

Thanks for the update and the mention ma'am.

Another classic from a great writer. Following ma'am

UltimateDayg:
black people and their mentality!!!!

and Mr white people with their over sabi.

Alexbrain:
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i have been here since. Just the spirit of ghost reading is in me. Ride on bro.

Nice story. Following already

Thanks for the mention bro. Already seated.

Bro dis ur update short ooo. We need looooooooooong update. Keep it up

Alexbrain:
Update is here oh

Kaycee9242, kingin55, xaviercasmir, Preetiex, Gucciqueen38, Mhizrohzz, frankline461, GideonThomas, Chigold121, Joislim, and others

Thanks boss for the update.

Thanks for the dedication ma'am.Nice update Keep it up

Making more sense to me now. Ride on bro. And try to invite others into this tread

Ok. Following

Hmmmm two sisters at a time. Easy ooooooo Nice update bro.

I can'nt read this wonderful story alone.
Marianneada, Shewrite Kimberleywest Ayrmboye Chumzypinky badohemmy and the rest. Please come and tell me what you guys think about this story.
Keep it up bro.

I really like this story. It have that deep cultural sense about our methodology. Keep it up bro.

You have a great story here. Keep it up

Centino:
Thanks y'all. I must mention the new comers xaviercasmir, excelmerry, donblazer10, olumose001, SunFlow, AvatarMode. Great to have you guys and thanks for the interest.

Bro i am not a new comer here ooo just the spirit of ghost reading is in me that time.