The heart dreams of a home
where the treebirds sing
and the palmfronds sway
majestic like kings.

The heart dreams of a home
where pain is not known
and good times arent just memories
where we seek refuge for sanity.

The heart dreams of a home
where the eyes arent pools of sorrow
and hearts dont feel numb
from all the heaviness inside.

The heart seeks a home
with meadows green and oceans blue
where love radiates from every soul
and peace gains victory at last.

Mynd44 and Cuddlemii...urgently need your attention here pls...pls..pls.

Who liked my post?.. Am so flattered..
Guys rate this on a scale of 1 to 10 pls

4

Lol.. Not bad..

Uhmmm, need to know. Song or Poem?

7..it's nice

semid4lyfe: Just there. . .didn't move me at all

4/10

Lest I forget, palmfronds and treebirds should be separated as they're different words

uncle, u're not nice at all..
thanks though..at least am close to average
corrections noted.

ciphoenix: Uhmmm, need to know. Song or Poem?

Definitely not a song. Make we manage call am poem

Oluwafunmilayo95: 7..it's nice

Thanks jare, sweerie

I am glad you decided to write.

I won't grade it just yet, I will send you a pm instead with a review

Don't be discouraged, all great writers started from somewhere. Some writers had to start from ABC

Keep it up babes!

^^

Thanks for d encouragement sis..
I know it isnt that good but u guys just had to see it.. I'll be waiting for d review..thank you once again.

I will rate if .............

Great stuff. I no sabi review poem but that was great stuff. You have it in you na. Stop being shy

Mynd_44: I will rate if .............

Great stuff. I no sabi review poem but that was great stuff. You have it in you na. Stop being shy

if..... Oya rate naawww....
thanks though..thank u, thank u .. I'll keep trying.

Shugamania:
if..... Oya rate naawww....
thanks though..thank u, thank u .. I'll keep trying.

Keep it up babe

count my smile

7 for u

Just Oηε word: Wow!

Never knew you got flows.

This is soo koool!

Nice stringing öf lines.

Each verse had a plan, each plan passed a msg and daz very kul.

Good transition too.

No matter what any1 analyzes, if you can hone dese skills,
I seee you floating on high with d glory only words could afford

The main thing is, inspiration comes at d spurs of d moment, as dey do, put them down (ενεη if you are bathing with soap all ova, clean your hands and jot down) if not dey'll varnish into tin air.

Kudos once again

U're far too kind bro..
U give me too much credit.
Thanks though, lol.. i feel so good with myself after reading ur comment.

Seriously, thanks for the boost.

Shugamania: U're far too kind bro..
U give me too much credit.
Thanks though, lol.. i feel so good with myself after reading ur comment.

Seriously, thanks for the boost.

Yoü welcome S gurl

Ʊ deserved all d credits no jokes.
just make sure Ʊ Kip flowing .....
No matter how small, drop it. Oηε line, two lines and so on.

You might wano search ƒoя ma diaries .
I let go wen I'm in dere some times.
Ƒoя all its worth, you could pick oηε or two tins along.
Not that i aм too good or anything, i just love to Saч it differently from every other. Some of мч many posts too, got a lil touch.

I love worship songs ånd all kul söunds with poetry.... They inspire me.

Regards

Sure.
Went through ur profile..
Your diary is really cool.
Nice rhymes, kudos.