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To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 2:27pm On Nov 23, 2012 |
First love, first son, or perhaps a precious daughter, their laughter swift and sweet, his hand so sure, his love so pure, his loyalty to them amazing, his patience vast, and his heart wider than the heavens, the leaven for their lives, the bright sun in their skies, the one to whom they turn, the man for whom they burn, the flame of love so bright, his wisdom always right, his hand so strong, so seldom wrong, so sweet, so near so dear, so much the hub of all, and once upon a time so tall, his love for them never waning always entertaining, handsome, dashing, teaching, reaching for the stars, driving funny cars, a loving hand and heart for every lass and lad, beloved man, eternal friend, how lucky you are, sweet children, to have him for your dad. |
Re: To My Daddy by Mynd44: 6:28am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Awwww |
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 7:13am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Mynd_44: Awwwwwats awww, mynd? |
Re: To My Daddy by Redmosquito(m): 7:18am On Nov 24, 2012 |
AWWWWWWW! I am moved |
Re: To My Daddy by Mynd44: 7:20am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Sapphiredamsel: Redmosquito: AWWWWWWW!Do I need to explain further? |
Re: To My Daddy by Redmosquito(m): 7:21am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Mynd_44:Xplan wat? |
Re: To My Daddy by Mynd44: 7:22am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Redmosquito:What "awwww" means |
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 8:59am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Redmosquito: AWWWWWWW!dis mosquito don come here? |
Re: To My Daddy by Obinoscopy(m): 9:49am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Awwww. Nice one damsel. You're truely a damsel and a poet. Your poem goes straight to the heart and makes one elicit the 'awwwww' sound. That explains why Mynd and mosquito couldn't help but release the 'awwwww.' It came straight from their heart. More of those poems hon. Don't bottle them up for your man only. We need some as well 1 Like |
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 11:19am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Obinoscopy: Awwww. Nice one damsel. You're truely a damsel and a poet. Your poem goes straight to the heart and makes one elicit the 'awwwww' sound. That explains why Mynd and mosquito couldn't help but release the 'awwwww.' It came straight from their heart.obino, i couldnt help but be 'awwwed' by ur critique. It helps. Ive written other poems. Maybe i should post the link |
Re: To My Daddy by Obinoscopy(m): 11:22am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Sapphiredamsel: Please do hun |
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 11:27am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Thats my first poem on Nl www.nairaland.com/1026884/ping-me |
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 11:37am On Nov 24, 2012 |
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 12:12am On Dec 24, 2013 |
I have more poems |
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