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A letter to life (a poem). by Nobody: 12:37pm On Jan 01, 2013 |
Dear life what do I think of you Dear life here is a thing or two sometimes you are grey sometimes you are flowers sometimes you are gay sometimes you are sour sometimes you are dark sometimes you are beauty sometimes you are sharks sometimes you are puppies sometimes you are so unfair you treat some so well while for others you do not care sometimes when I think of you I cry the way you coldly watch justice die sometimes you are heaven in disguise the joy you bring to many, it bursts out from their eyes oh how beautiful you look then oh how praised you are by men sometimes you are greedy sometimes you are generous sometimes you are witty sometimes ridiculous sometimes you are wicked sometimes you are kind sometimes you are lonely sometimes you don't mind sometimes you are weak I see cowardice in your eyes sometimes you are strong your courage is my great pride sometimes you are old you've seen so much already sometimes you are young full of vibrance and purity sometimes I want to leave you oh how some nights I desperately wish to yet some nights I yearn that we make love forever some nights you are my beautiful lover some people lust after others from you some people flee but my love I will do neither for you are no different from me 1 Like |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Nobody: 7:28pm On Jan 01, 2013 |
Hi, this is my first time posting here, I would really love reviews. |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by amiskurie(m): 4:58pm On Jan 04, 2013 |
Claps! |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Nobody: 10:40am On Jan 05, 2013 |
amiskurie: Claps! Thanks! |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Meklex(m): 4:26pm On Jan 05, 2013 |
inurmind: Hi, this is my first time posting here, I would really love reviews.you want reviews??, here's mine,, you wrote on life like you know a thing or two Actually, it's up to three, your ryhmes can keep life nodding to the songs you bring And it kept me nodding for moments thinking it was epic At the end I hated you for writing this for you could have shown what life really is if you kept writting,, and I was anxious to know But now I know its all inurmind as it's all in us....great piece |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Nobody: 10:50pm On Jan 05, 2013 |
^^^ Thank you, I also sincerely think I could have done better with it. The inspiration came during new years eve, when everyone was busy celebrating and partying I was busy reflecting and pouring it all down. I wasn't celebrating the year, just in a world of my own, celebrating something I can't really define. Unfortunately it came down in a splatter, here and there, it was all really hard to organise afterwards and when I was done I wasn't satisfied with it. But I was quite blank and didn't know what to do with it. Thats a reason why I'm interested in people pointing out its flaws. |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Bella3(f): 2:29am On Jan 25, 2013 |
me likey.. |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Nobody: 2:37am On Jan 25, 2013 |
BĂ©lla3: me likey.. Thanks, appreciate that. |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Splendblex(f): 12:05pm On Jan 25, 2013 |
Nice one! |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by BukkyDan(f): 5:42pm On Jan 25, 2013 |
Lovely..nice work |
Re: A letter to life (a poem). by Nobody: 6:31am On Jan 26, 2013 |
Splendblex: Nice one!Thanks! BukkyDan: Lovely..nice work Thank you. |
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