Darkrebel:


and please list out all the punchlines I dropped that weren't directed at him...either that didn't have "he" or "wrongturn" in it.....tell me so I can learn. .cos I don't seem to get you with all your direct hits you have been saying since..... cos to me..am taking the most direct way...using his name and pronouns like they do on them battle leagues... so point out the lines that weren't direct so I can see and learn

ELYMAXiimus:

if i start listing out nd criticizing your bars ehn, you will hate me more than you did before nd now ....


Okay......

Now, i'm not saying you should'nt use pronouns nd so on....
But let everyone know that it's a particular person you're battling...
You may not even use a personal...

Here,

wrongtun said something like this
"twilight" bla bla... "Dark's" career is over at the break of "dawn"....

He said "it's natural we all get bored to sleep when it's dark" lol

he definitely can't use these punchlines if he was up against me...
Meaning it was specifically for you...


You said something like this " cut his thighs, pass it to alves to overlap with it" lol
this is a random punchline....
Now, i'm not saying it aint good.
I liked it.... But it can be used against anybody....
most of your punches are like that..



At least 5bars of the twelve should be specifically for ya opponent...
You get?
Thus, even without the thread's heading, a vs b, it'll be apparent before everyone that it's this particular individual you're dissing!

Lest one would get confused nd not know who you're actually dissing....

Only niggas who store bars can't
hit their opponents directly.
They just pour out everything as they had it in store....

ELYMAXiimus:

if i start listing out nd criticizing your bars ehn, you will hate me more than you did before nd now ....


Okay......

Now, i'm not saying you should'nt use pronouns nd so on....
But let everyone know that it's a particular person you're battling...
You may not even use a personal...

Here,

wrongtun said something like this
"twilight" bla bla... "Dark's" career is over at the break of "dawn"....

He said "it's natural we all get bored to sleep when it's dark" lol

he definitely can't use these punchlines if he was up against me...
Meaning it was specifically for you...


You said something like this " cut his thighs, pass it to alves to overlap with it" lol
this is a random punchline....
Now, i'm not saying it aint good.
I liked it.... But it can be used against anybody....
most of your punches are like that..



At least 5bars of the twelve should be specifically for ya opponent...
You get?
Thus, even without the thread's heading, a vs b, it'll be apparent before everyone that it's this particular individual you're dissing!

Lest one would get confused nd not know who you're actually dissing....

Only niggas who store bars can't
hit their opponents directly.
They just pour out everything as they had it in store....

Illness:
Haha.. ElyMaximus u mad gan.. Buh its true tho.. Only niggas who store bars can't hit their opponents directly.. Dark u had a nice verse bro and I missed judging that brawl..

Darkrebel:


meeen I don't store bars. but I come up with few lines daily. .do you wanna tell me you don't use metas and similes previously composed for an opponent ...he used dark twice....he played with my name ...I didn't play with his name doesn't mean..they weren't composed for him....I just didn't have the muse and ideas didn't come that time..so I can't force name plays... I dissed him bout the yeyenatu thing......thing is I don't like doing much personals... its only 2 points right? plus I can surf all d funny comments someone made and turn them to disses...reason I limit personals to 4 lines at most and concentrate on other areas....but I will increase the amount of personal disses like you said....

Wrongturn:
Direct shots make up for where personal is lacking ie, where u don't knw each and can't find personals. Use a nameplay at least; on fb u just use a bunch of punchlines to win a brawl. if ur opponent takes a little shot at u he automatically wins, no matter how d0pe ur punchlines are. The assumption is that u bit or recycled them. na for here i see different thing o. I can easily win anybody if i battle that way

ELYMAXiimus:

on point!!!

it pains me when i play a word nd someone comes outta no where to say, i bit it!!!

So to avoid this, i try as much as possible to aim specifically at my opponent.....
Though this atimes reduces the effect of ones punch.... But it's kyna safer......

ELYMAXiimus:

on point!!!

it pains me when i play a word nd someone comes outta no where to say, i bit it!!!

So to avoid this, i try as much as possible to aim specifically at my opponent.....
Though this atimes reduces the effect of ones punch.... But it's kyna safer......

mikuz:


So it pains you? Or are you not the same ninja who claimed I bit Geological from you?

mikuz:


So it pains you? Or are you not the same ninja who claimed I bit Geological from you?

sosiqdude:


I just dey for the corner, in case you're looking for me

ELYMAXiimus:

precision of language...
I never said you Bit!.... I said i have played that pun before! Check my brawl with him...

Nd it also depends on how y'all define biting on here, though.....

I asked a question which i expected you to reply but you did'nt...

I asked " is it okay to use a pun already used by someone else?"

i played "geo logical", you played "geo logical". What's the difference between the two?

mikuz:
Elymax of course, I'm in.


I call out Ksslib. 24 lines - we drop on Friday.

Darkrebel:
This is for everyone here



Mikuz said I am not humble....
Okay...here is me being humble
But really I am....I never knew I was arrogant to anyone...I thought we were just teasing...insulting and doing all those stuffs for fun....I never knew I was hurting some people's emotions and feelings ....lol ... until sosiscdude told me on whatsapp..that not all people take things that manner....

Look it wasn't intentional quarrelling and fighting ..okay? But when some people make some remarks like I have multiple ids and stuffs... I can't just stay quiet and not defend myself when I know I got no other account...apart from my first one that got banned and this rebel account.....

So guykhena... I know you didn't bite ibime's wordplay...obviously I was wining you cos you probably haven't heard his song....and I havent bitten any lyrics before... So quit the disazter thing....
I want the rivalry and hate to stop and false accusations....for good....

Elymax.... We have both offended each other....am sorry..and I forgive you too...
Same with Kr0ne ....
Ksslib ...
Giyazz ..sorry bout those horrible things I said bout your sis....and I forgive you also for the horrible things you said.....

Ummmmmm who else...?
Okay if ve offended you in one way or the other....
I beg for forgiveness....and those that ve offended me ....I swear I hold no grudges....
Ohhh yes I remember....youngdanaval ...sorry ....

And ummmm Coogar...sorry for calling you Sauron... to be honest I think your sauron cos your bars are kinda similar...but since you say your not...well its ok..cos i think you were angered a lil the day i was saying it.....

And mikuz sorry for insulting you in the mode nine thread....I forgive you also for insulting me first by indirectly with Nigeria's educational system affecting me reasoning.
.

I dont know if ve offended ...Teddybiyasi ........well if I have...am so sorry babe...you never know ...we can get married.... Lil

Also wrongturn too.... But get prepared for our ffucking rematch man...
Captainflash too

Also Ibime ..EmaPrince ...and all the other vets that have offended and disrespected with frequent quarrels and fights here ....

...if I omitted anyone's name...feel free to say..and I will apologise too....
I also forgive all those that ve offended me ...

Well ...I have humbled myself now and taking the pain to apologise and type something this lengthy... 
Anyone can vote in my thread....and I promise I won't complain...argue or insult anyone in this thread again..so don't be scared to vote honestly on my threads.....mark my words.. . I won't fight or argue...or complain...

So am waiting for your replies....
I hope am accepted back....I hope to read all your comments at night....
Am going to school now...

Am waiting for your replies....please...

kr0ne:
Wrongturn fit disgrace me in my present condition. The way he copied those comments and dissed on them amazed me. I no get that kind time and power abeg. When I'm ready I'll let y'all know. Meanwhile, make I enjoy my birthday small
Na the cake wey NL give me be dis

kr0ne:

You could think up a cool wordplay now and before u post it you'd see it has been used before. It has happened to me several times. Even that 'ex odours' I used against Fyh came up fresh in my mind. I was surprised when they said it's generic.
At times, however, they can be useful, depending on the context with which u want to use them. But if it's necessary u use them on a verse, do so without highlighting

kr0ne:
Wrongturn fit disgrace me in my present condition. The way he copied those comments and dissed on them amazed me. I no get that kind time and power abeg. When I'm ready I'll let y'all know. Meanwhile, make I enjoy my birthday small
Na the cake wey NL give me be dis

Happy Birthday bro .
Heineken popping today..

ELYMAXiimus:

i guess if the pun is used in a totally diffent context it's termed as GENERIC....
But if the context is similar to one which has been previously played with that same pun, it's termed BITTEN!!! Right?

Guykhena:

Happy Birthday bro .
Heineken popping today...

Wrongturn:
who go disgrace u, u wan begin hype me too?? Happy birthday tho

kr0ne:

Exactly! Inasmuch as they can be useful to fit in a context they score no point in the criteria since the idea is no longer fresh.
Bitten is not just for one word, it can be a complete bar or a punch. Setups can look similar so you don't count them as bitten. For instance, I can tap some ideas in ur setup for another punch..though not advisable in brawls

ELYMAXiimus:

precision of language...
I never said you Bit!.... I said i have played that pun before! Check my brawl with him...

Nd it also depends on how y'all define biting on here, though.....

I asked a question which i expected you to reply but you did'nt...

I asked " is it okay to use a pun already used by someone else?"

i played "geo logical", you played "geo logical". What's the difference between the two?

Darkrebel:
@elymaxiimus


this is a part of siddogs lines I liked in his brawl....


.
Then I look! and sight him far/. . . . with a white flag
tied to his left hand/ . . . . and I'm like. . . .
"that why he shifted the brawl"?/ . . . . to give in
before/ . . . . I beat him to pulp??/ . . . . till he meets
his untimely death . . . . for beating the clock !!!/ .....
.
.can you see the way he used pronouns all through? repeatedly mentioning of name kills the rhythm and maybe cause am a fast paced spitter and your pace is slower...maybe...but rapping the verses and repeating names or making lines Long... doesn't flow when I rap it ....

go to any of your previous brawls....download a neutral hip hop instrumental ...and rap with it...and tell me how your flow would be hampered by repetitions and Long lines

kr0ne:
Jigsawkillah, na u know wetin dey bite u for where I dey. God pass u sha

mikuz:


I didn't answer it because you are not supposed to be asking that kinda question. I should expect that from a newbie.

I played 'Bis' against Ibime and U3 played 'Bis' against him too.
I played Mats Hummels and Ibime played it too. The reason why I did not accuse them of biting is your answer. Stop sounding like a noob.

ELYMAXiimus:

i won't talk too much....
I'm waiting for you to start playing words like you always do...

I swear na all your puns i go recycle finish. From A - Z
since it's a normal thing.. No longtin....