He had been running for the past 30 minutes, he knew his only chance is not to get caught. Suddenly, he saw 2 men about 5 metres from him, he had seen the other three 30 minutes when he left his house. He knows who they are, why they are there and who send them but he also know they would not dare shoot him because the director wants him alive. He knows too well as they also that they no matter the calibre of gun they carry, they wil be death before they have the opportunity to pull the trigger. He is the best at any given time, they know his pistol-which was custom made specially for him, a previlege reserved for only the best of the best- was with him. He knows the neighbourhood like his palms.
He turned to his left, after running 10 steps, disappeared into an alley, he knew he was safe, he had just shaken them off. It wil take them 3 to 4 days to find his whereabout.
This is not the life Gerald Gideon, simply known as Gizzeh had in mind when he joined the agency 12 years ago but the result of being in the right place at the wrong time. He never thought the director was capable of such an act. Not even the president is safe anymore..

You need to work on your tense constructions, you're mixing past and present. Also, try to organize the script, no paragraph.

Hmmmm, im already interested. Please go on

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Larry-Sun:
You need to work on your tense constructions, you're mixing past and present. Also, try to organize the script, no paragraph.

Thanks bro, i'm not a gud student of english language(i wonder why i always pass english bt fail maths). I'l try ma best

*******12 years ago*******
2 yrs afta secondary school, Gizzeh got admission to student chemisty B.Ed. He fell in love with teaching right from his SS 2 and went 4 it when he graduated bt his uncle wanted him 2 become a doctor, the very 1st in the family. He followed his heart knowing he is going to pay for disobeyin his uncle someday.
Gizzeh is not the kind of guy you will exactly call a ladies's man_ a shade darker than normal chocolate, average height, always quite_ but 1 quality always brought girls to him_ patience_ he has alot of it. And dat made Prof Hessler notice him from the first day he ask new students to submit their assignment individually.
Prof Hessler is not just a lecturer but also a spy/undercover agent, the best among his comtemporaries but he has only 3 years to recruit someone who will take his place when he retires and he saw Gizzeh, he knew he had found the right person but the problem is how to convince the boy that he really is an agent.

It took him 6 months to convince Gizzeh that he is not a terrorist, a gangster or a cultist bt a genuine undercover agent workin for the country, he even took gim to the Agency's safehouse in the state.

OYA kip it rolling @ op. but try to minimise ur mistakes.

Gizzeh was in his 3rd yr in the university wgen prof. Hessler retiree at the age of 70 yrs from active service, both as a lecturer and as an agent. He know he can trust his replacement - Gizzeh-.
Gizzeh had made up his mind 2 become the best of the best. He concentrated on omovement and weapon handling. It was not a suprise that he was so good with the pistol, he could practice for 6 hrs staright in the range. He never miss his target, no matter how small, fast and far away it may be. He hadn't gotten a chance to put his skill to test until the fifth year when the elite team had failed to prevent an international assasination gang from coming into the country. He had been assigned to intel gauthering. He was reluctantly allowed to join the team becuse they thought he was not ready for action yet.
Available intel report showed that there is a plan to assashnate the country's richest man and a personal friend of the president ay the gang @ 2200 hrs the next day. They know they had to intervene or the chief is as good as dead. They made plans to replace the personal bodyguards @ the chief's house two hours b4 the plannd assasination. They plan to do so by drugging the guards when they take their dinner @ 2000hours. Every thing went went according to plan, by 2030hours the night, they were taking their positions within the perimeter of the house. Fiue operatives were stationed by the gate, each with an automatic rifle capable of firing 20 rounds per second bt the agents have bn train to be able to control their fire to 9 rounds per second, unknown to them, Gizzeh had traine d himself to be able to fire 5 rounds anytime he squeezes the trigger. The team was still trying to dig in properly when the assasins decided to strike earlier than planned,they came with automatic weapons, all with silencer that it will tbke trained ears to hear the sound of the guns but could not hide the flashes at the muzzles.
The team leader known as thunder was just settling down in the guardroom which doubles as the command headquarters for this particular operation when he had over their secure intescomm," redlion come in, this 010 alpha, waterloo red, two men down, Backup asap". B4 he finished Gizzeh had joined then at the gate, one more person is down, he knew he is their last hope, his hours of trainin wil be put to test now. He knows that the assasins wik be wearing body armour but their faces are not protected. He only had to see the flash of a muzzle and he knows where to shoot and like they were trying to test him, he saw three flashes.

I dey enjoy ur tori o. con continue am o.

Nice story o,but mistakes plenty o, too much of mistakes,wrongly spelt words,mixing of tense,and using short forms of words.

No vex, na phone i dey use since person wey like am pass me dome take ma system. D english na manage, me sef dey wonder how i take pass waec.
BTW, i'm no writer, just doin dz 4 fun

I wil be off 4 sumtym, project tinz

No qualms, project must be done.

Uderstandable

Thanks 4 understandin

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Nice piece
Buh just like larrysun pointed out,work on ur punctuation,words and paragraphs and sentences.

Really following bro