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A Poets Story by kagari: 4:21pm On Mar 23, 2013 |
HY, this are some of my poem collections. i would appreciate constructive criticism from all. thank you |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 4:22pm On Mar 23, 2013 |
TALE OF AN EMPTY HEART alone in the fields my heart longs, for love, life, and air for my lungs, fresh, flowing from supernatural source, a little bit of hope for a black dunce, pure, not of a tempest torture, in history lies the days i clamor, reminiscing the past, the present has no future, what of life? i dwelt in peace in her harbor, at this time in shields and armors, attacked, beaten, torn to shreds by vultures, my heart survives the take but longs for another, another, if there could be another dear mother? then i would worship the breast that gave milk, and i would bless the hands that fed me. a sad tale, right in the heart of the Sahara, amidst the mystical mist of the Savannah. yes deadliest beautiful one, dearest ugly one, i come to your doorstep, with water and blood, in your reign, i came to know war, on your throne, i ate my spinal cord, but in one accord, lets raise our hearts high lets drink, lets dine, lets dance, let us all die. what is the joy of life, please kindly tell me? at the gate of eternity, what is its toll fee? violence comes knocking, yet violence knows love aren't these vices and virtues from one God? one must take today, the other wait for the next forever in an empty heart, i would always bless |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 4:23pm On Mar 23, 2013 |
TEACH ME teach me how to cry, my tears lives a mark, teach me how to smile, a light in the dark, teach me how to laugh, when it is worth it, teach me all about life just for a hint teach me how to pray my hands up to heaven teach me how to play counting one to seven teach me how to dance all through the evenings teach me all about balance that of natures dealings teach me how to fight for equal rights and justice teach me how to chat with confidence and prestige teach me how to cuddle especially when in love teach me all about evil from the bottom to the top teach me how to understand what is good and what is bad teach me how to stand away from friendly mishap teach me how to clean lifes mistakes and stains then you teach me how to dream of those little lovely poems 1 Like |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 10:14pm On Apr 17, 2013 |
ADVENTURE OF RAPHAEL I sail through the darkened quagmire Leaving behind, not a mile. On the port of oblivion I meet sire I kiss the ground, saying “Sir”. Go forth and go out of the mire Cut the thorns and piercing wires. He sayeth unto me And I heeded to thee. This adventure not thus my desire Nonetheless, on this route I ply Night befalls me on the sly The night-crawlers heavenly fly In my stomach a reviling cry Food for thought, just a fry It’s movements to and fro, so wry. The second day consciously born Enslaved to the impending sun My attire quaintly worn, Now vigorously torn. One moon-light gone in my slum A new ego-bum Transpired below average norm Sailing to the records of a worm. I am just an everyday Tom My service digs-up my tomb. Third day my visions exposed A delightful imbroglio A clear dominion imposed Flattened to an embryo. Dink, ding, dang My shattered nerves bang And my bones in gangs Shoot-out rather familiar tangs Shuddering bodily slangs Rendezvous in brain-bands Omnipresent classic yin-yang In an altitude of magical wand. Mission rendered was no wangle But least expected the crawling tangle In darkness again my soul mingles And the tooth in the coldness tingles In my faint thoughts, I cuddle Back and forth in darkness cradle. Fourth day, an exposé to reality Totally lost the sense of sanity Commensuration and tenacity A hopeless vanity. And now my memory fails me While my visions keeps playing tricks I see my son in the garden of greens We play round and round, his laughter so real But the air in my trachea, cut loose I lay flat on my adventures noose. |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 10:17pm On Apr 17, 2013 |
OH MY AFRICA A sound is heard in Africa The sound of bitter weeping Africa is crying for Her offspring’s Refuses to be comforted For they are about dying! The children, pride of the mother But now, there is great disorder While Africa stares and mourns Whilst her offspring’s is gone with the storms Can there ever be a remedy? Maybe it might end-up being deadly Till then Africa looks-up to the sky And weeps the tears of her eye Oh my! Oh my! Africa |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 10:26pm On Apr 17, 2013 |
FREEDOM O Freedom, where thou at Your children, on thou part Seeking your sweet act Carried on your soothing cart We knock, O thou on your door Come and make us free once more We roll on sack clothes, weeping Just for your minute blessing Freedom! You are sweet and we know that Freedom! On our lips and we speak-out Freedom to go wherever Freedom to empower a leader. Freedom! Could be soured in excess A controversial ceaseless menace But Freedom, is good that I know Freedom, is judged with my soul I wear my freedom My vision becomes clearer I wear my freedom My voice is heard louder I wear my freedom I say you are a bad leader I wear my freedom I know my country is on a wrong ladder Freedom! Come tell us the truth Freedom! Come exert your prove Freedom! My actions, are they good? Because Freedom is all good We are free, Freedom is that so? We claim to be; only Freedom knows What does it mean to know freedom? An obligation for the next generation |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 10:29pm On Apr 17, 2013 |
i wish someone could comment on my thread. i feel so lonely on this thread |
Re: A Poets Story by Theflint1(m): 3:47pm On Apr 24, 2013 |
nice poems, reali enjoyed 'teach me' and 'freedom', keep it up |
Re: A Poets Story by faisol: 6:33pm On Apr 25, 2013 |
You the boss.Hope you working on publishing |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 1:20pm On May 01, 2013 |
thanks all. i have a published collection in the market, but i get fulfillment when people read and enjoy my work. when it is time to make money through my writing, i would. thanks all |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 12:52am On Oct 01, 2013 |
Iam back |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 12:24am On Oct 06, 2013 |
Morning peeps. Happy sunday |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 9:59am On Nov 08, 2013 |
Hy mods can you make my thread hit frontpage? |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 4:26pm On Nov 30, 2016 |
long time coming |
Re: A Poets Story by JoeBlocks(m): 11:59am On Dec 03, 2016 |
kagari:You dropped your pen, bro? What happened? |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 7:50pm On Dec 03, 2016 |
JoeBlocks:na my pen is my weapon |
Re: A Poets Story by JoeBlocks(m): 7:57pm On Dec 03, 2016 |
kagari:True that. |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 9:23am On Apr 16, 2017 |
Lalaclastica use this as an Easter surprise. |
Re: A Poets Story by batros: 11:16pm On Apr 16, 2017 |
Could you please try to put punctuation and capital letters where appropriate? It is important you do that so that your poems will not have aberrant and erroneous structures. I would be glad if you could accept my criticism without acrimony. |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 11:52pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
batros:criticism noted and appreciated. |
Re: A Poets Story by kagari: 12:50pm On Jul 03, 2017 |
Hello |
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