Kim is her name, being awesome her game,
Persistently flawless in everything she did,
I was in love the first time I saw her cheeks,
She smiled like an angel and laughed like the
heavens,
Walked like the moon and glistened like the sun.
Kim is her name, breaking my heart was her
game;
She should have said she loved another
She led me on like a clueless sheep,
She killed the sheep one sunny Saturday
As she said in a heartless tone, I think we should
split. Kim is her name, I love her all the same.

The poem started with something I can only describe as dislike. It was fun to see how you describe her, with emotion and defining words. The last sentence clarifies your mindset after writing.
But the theme of the poem itself was...disconcerting. I doubt that under normal circumstances, someone could be as madly in love as you are in the course of this poem and still feel like the person he's in love with is playing him.

Illuminatus: The poem started with something I can only describe as dislike. It was fun to see how you describe her, with emotion and defining words. The last sentence clarifies your mindset after writing.
But the theme of the poem itself was...disconcerting. I doubt that under normal circumstances, someone could be as madly in love as you are in the course of this poem and still feel like the person he's in love with is playing him.

Thanks a million, but truth be told the poem has no bearing with reality, I was simply bored.

d-hammer:


Thanks a million, but truth be told the poem has no bearing with reality, I was simply bored.

Lol