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A Stare by Nobody: 10:54pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
I've spent 3 decades in this world, Seen faces, personalities of different kinds But never have i come close to such distinguished face So rare and full of expressions Very contrasting qualities Like a chameleon Only this eyes is scary I stared at this aggressively beautiful young woman stealthy I could see deep beneath those scary eyes I could see eyes filled with anger hatred, Betrayal I couldn't help wonder who this eyes fill hatred for Who could cause such gem feel such pains A lonely heart Searching to be fulfilled A broken heart shattered in pieces The knowledge of what the eyes says I Still can't fathom Still in these eyes and face, I see a strong mind Determined by all odds to succeed The swiftness in movement, The manner in speech The composure Amazingly distinguishing Patience and a lot of sacrifices she's ready to make And kindness I sense on the other part Willingness to help other people As I watched her pick up a stranger's pen From where it fell I stared ravenously to know who this beryl is I saw a lot that could change a nation from a stare It was no more a stare I scrutinized her as she walked away silently oblivious of my eyes... |
Re: A Stare by EzePromoe: 11:01pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Not bad |
Re: A Stare by Cathaliya: 11:17pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
cool, but um, needs to be re-constructed. Use your figures of speech, give spaces...you know without all these, its naked. I love it, just modify for better reading and understanding for us readers ok..? |
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