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Yayyyy...!
Tony Yayo...!
How you dey.
Where have you been siiince.
I'll come back after downloading Sir.

prof800: Yayyyy...!
Tony Yayo...!
How you dey.
Where have you been siiince.
I'll come back after downloading Sir.

I dey o sir prof and i'll be waiting.

Na wa o... Tony you hide from us heh? Just saw the email... will read it as soon as possible. First thing i noticed on the thread - John West is a very funny name... it's a brand name for canned tuna lol

Nice to have you back, tony.

Btw, am I the only one that finds the title very weird What's with the reconciliation parade bro: reconciliatory doctor, reconciliation wedding?! Hmmm.
My comment is based on the synopsis alone since it encapsulates the full script.

IMO, I think you should work on the ending of the 'story' or it would look like the "usual nollywood" predictable movie. And I hope those scenes where John West "reconciled" ppl were written in a very convincing way that viewers can put themselves in the characters' shoes and won't say "sebi na film. E no fit happen lailai..etc."

The difference between ordinary and extraordinary is the little extra. Nice effort.

Hi Tony, I did get a bit confused by getting the email and this thread at the same time. First of all thanks for the 'revised' edition of ERO.TICA - however, having given you a detailed breakdown here - https://www.nairaland.com/1331998/m.o.w-script and then discovering the very first line of the 'revision' still has the exact same flaws of 'writing-what-cannot-be-seen-on-screen' I will politely decline to read the 33 or so pages of it. To be honest I actually scanned the first sentences of the first three main scenes and nothing has changed in the writing.

I honestly thought this thread was the same thing and didn't read the initial post but just commented on the 'John West' name as those that know it's all about canned fish will find it funny.
I've just read the 'synopsis' and well... hmmmmm... it's a bit tricky. It might be 'interesting' but this honestly doesn't do it for me; sorry about that.

sholay2011: Nice to have you back, tony.

Btw, am I the only one that finds the title very weird What's with the reconciliation parade bro: reconciliatory doctor, reconciliation wedding?! Hmmm.
My comment is based on the synopsis alone since it encapsulates the full script.

IMO, I think you should work on the ending of the 'story' or it would look like the "usual nollywood" predictable movie. And I hope those scenes where John West "reconciled" ppl were written in a very convincing way that viewers can put themselves in the characters' shoes and won't say "sebi na film. E no fit happen lailai..etc."

The difference between ordinary and extraordinary is the little extra. Nice effort.

Thanx sholay. Is the title that bad?! I thought this's the best title ever, anyway i'll look into what u just said, thanx for ur comments.

VillageBoi:
Na wa o... Tony you hide from us heh? Just saw the email... will read it as soon as possible. First thing i noticed on the thread - John West is a very funny name... it's a brand name for canned tuna lol

Villageboi ibiakwa ozo.

VillageBoi:
Hi Tony, I did get a bit confused by getting the email and this thread at the same time. First of all thanks for the 'revised' edition of ERO.TICA - however, having given you a detailed breakdown here - https://www.nairaland.com/1331998/m.o.w-script and then discovering the very first line of the 'revision' still has the exact same flaws of 'writing-what-cannot-be-seen-on-screen' I will politely decline to read the 33 or so pages of it. To be honest I actually scanned the first sentences of the first three main scenes and nothing has changed in the writing.

I honestly thought this thread was the same thing and didn't read the initial post but just commented on the 'John West' name as those that know it's all about canned fish will find it funny.
I've just read the 'synopsis' and well... hmmmmm... it's a bit tricky. It might be 'interesting' but this honestly doesn't do it for me; sorry about that.

Thanx

tony ayo:
Thanx sholay. Is the title that bad?! I thought this's the best title ever, anyway i'll look into what u just said, thanx for ur comments.

You can't be serious.

'Reconciliation' could simply do the trick or 'The Matchmaker' or smth. What's with the doctor aspect in association with reconciliation?

It kinda reminds me of herbal doctors.

sholay2011:
You can't be serious.

'Reconciliation' could simply do the trick or 'The Matchmaker' or smth. What's with the doctor aspect in association with reconciliation?

It kinda reminds me of herbal doctors.

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