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Imperfect Creation by izeek(m): 11:07am On Jul 08, 2008
Imperfect Creation

I was made by God,
the manifestation of his spoken word.
brought about from the emptiness of mud,
yet i am regarded above angels a "small god".

I could have been a mixture of saphire and gold,
one worthy prize never to be sold.
a beauty on display, much to behold,
one that would never die or even grow old.

Yet it is his wish that i be made imperfect,
for he will be my mater, and i his subject.
taking away the mud and making me perfect,
for in me his beauty will completely reflect.
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Re: Imperfect Creation by Lovelace: 11:07am On Jul 09, 2008
If you truly wrote that,it's fantastic.
Re: Imperfect Creation by Nella(f): 10:55pm On Aug 16, 2008
agree

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