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The Poem Review by IfyChuky(m): 7:53pm On Jan 08, 2014 |
[b]—MEN, "&" THEIR SELF-ABROGATED MEN-OF-GOD When would men from lies refrain? It hurts my heart & brings me pain, The truth & Gospel, they seem to twist; The thought of men, they've so made tame. Fake prophesies abounds in them, The multitude accrues to them. Miracles; All men won't dare to Miss. To hear them talk, they'd all form heaps. Goodnews to you, they'd all profess, It fails: You ask, they'd all gain-say. I know one day God would repay, I Pray they better go Confess. A word from Hell to man Again! "The Pope's in hell", they claim. They died & Rose; All men Believe Mens brain they drain & now deceive. To Salvation: men pays Damnation, Signs & Wonders gain Attention. End-time; I know is pretty near I wish all men would for God Fear!. Bible now stale, & old to read. The Gospel 's-now too fake to be Real. The men-of-god, thus knows it all. Their names - Men sing and now Extol. The Messiah, above has chose to gaze, On men, Free-will he thus bestowed. How vile all men has chose to live Aha-Aha! - The seeds of Eve. Cheerful-giving, they all would Preach Respect the Priest, they'd always Teach Touch not the Anointed, they now would sing "Oh Lord!", to Thee I rest my Case. [/b] #TeamMen-of-god-are-mere-Mortals-like-me; Despite the fact that most of them are Self-acclaimed, I Strongly disagree with the way most people seem to Ignorantly worship them. Besides, I always have the Bible at My Disposal, as Well as having the Privilege to tell God my Wants. I have Faith, and Grace as well, hence its All free. Why need I be enslaved or perhaps made a servitude, all cos I needed God's Favour?. I could always Ask for One, and If I do HIS will - I know HIS hands ain't too short to get to my rescue. 1 Like |
Re: The Poem Review by princesa(f): 3:01pm On Jan 10, 2014 |
Nice. And i loved the rhyme scheme adopted. And the theme, very didactic and so realistic. Got no criticism though... 1 Like |
Re: The Poem Review by IfyChuky(m): 5:03pm On Jan 10, 2014 |
princesa: Nice. And i loved the rhyme scheme adopted. Tanxx a lot. I appreciate ur Compliment |
Re: The Poem Review by IfyChuky(m): 8:13pm On Jan 10, 2014 |
[b]***What's So Special abt This Day?*** The Valentine's Day wud soon be Here! I know its near; Dats why I Fear In Tear, I try to Cobble This I know most peepz wud just thwart It. My thoughts are sane, yet Unbiased I know to You, It'd be FUN again Sumtymz to speak, I'd just go Shy Koz My thoughts to You, cud look so Dry. "Its here again!", I cry in fear, The quest to Hook; 's-now on the High Promiscuity; Wud rule the Day Oh Jah! Am here, the Truth to Say. A time when men'd Undertake Drudgery To please their Miss, they won't mind Steal The girls Feels cheap, & goes Unclad. To them; it's a way to make Ends Meet In tear, I cry & fear for Few As though its New, It spins most' thought What's so Special abt this Day? You must be shocked, but that's my View. God we know, is Love Himself How come to a Man, You accrue Ur's? Has he done more than Christ Did? Or does he love more than God Could?. In tears I write, & prays You'd adhere My Ears wud go Stiff, when most would Cry "Aha-aha! - Wished I'd known?!" Advice I bring, though It makes One Frown. S-T-D's, & S-T-I's! This' Ur Day; why not say "Hi!" Am not Saying One can't Catch Fun, If U must; Curb Ur Wants & Stick to One[/b] #TeamAnti-Valentine; Am of the View that the Valentine Celebration ain't worth the Stress. I strongly believe it ain't a yardstick to ascertaining (s)He truly loves you. More Over I term it as being Idolatry, hence it Extols but A man, and not God nor The Son. Besides, we could always show Our loved One's how much we Care, but It musn't be On This Day. |
Re: The Poem Review by IfyChuky(m): 1:22am On Nov 08, 2014 |
***AFTER EACH TRY, TRY AGAIN!... *** —When Hardwork amounts to Vain, Your Ill-fate haunts, and even friends; taunts, Then grief makes you dine your pain, I know its tough, but you've got to be strong... —When it seem none's unlucky as you, Your thought's now like; "DOES GOD EXIST?" Then it'd seem all hopes is lost, I know its not, but you've got to be strong... —I know you tussled but couldn't get there, Your sleepless nights had just gone Lurk, Despite the effort, it still couldn't prove, Its not your fault, but goodness knows best.. —The deed is done; The done is gone, Its gone for better, and gone till never, You sure would be better; Try a lil more harder, 'koz the done is gone, and gone forever... —Pick the piece thats left of you, Make amends, and make them haste, Invest more guts, dont sulk nor whine, Entrust to God, and Try Again... |
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