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Village Monarch by sirwebs(m): 1:05pm On Jun 25, 2006
VILLAGE MONARCH

Yesterday he was a trader
A fairly successful dealer;
Today he is a ruler
The monarch of our village

They say we are now autonomous
Granted freedom to form a new kingdom;
Old Uncle Joe was made a monarch
King over ten hamlets.


Inspired by the granting of autonomous status to my small community
Re: Village Monarch by Genial(m): 1:26pm On Jun 25, 2006
I like your poem. It paints a coherent picture and is easy to follow and understand.
Re: Village Monarch by eveseh(f): 3:28pm On Jun 25, 2006
good one kiss kiss kiss
Re: Village Monarch by Ehijie: 3:55pm On Jun 29, 2006
I do declare, this poem is awesome, its almost sublime. I read it more than 15 times. I love your use of metre, rythm and the simple but profound story. Keep it up man

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