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She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval222(m): 9:44am On Jun 28, 2014
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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval222(m): 9:47am On Jun 28, 2014
Do you believe in after-life?. I mean life after death?. Do you believe in ghosts?. Have you seen one?.
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..Heartbeat drops...
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Things really have happened to me. Things beyond ordinary. Things so deadly to imagine. Things so cold and horrible.
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My name is Jude. This is my story. Or should i call it a confessional story.
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MARCH, 2009
7:49pm
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I brushed my teeth for the third time, ran out of the bathroom and grabbed my phone. Slowly i scrolled down to a name saved with "NMEKA 2go" and dialled the number with a happy smile on my face.
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Nmeka was my 2go girlfriend. The first real friend i was making from 2go after months of endless chatting. She was paying me a visit that very day, something like a return visit because we first met two weeks ago at her school where we met each other for the first time. Of course the visit i paid her solidified our friendship thus making her take the risk of visiting me for a lovely weekend.
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"hello Jude, the bus has dropped me at the park. You can now come and get me" Nmeka's sweet voice announced as she answered my call. I jumped up with joy before rushing out to pick her up.
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It wasn't had locating her at the busy bus station. We hugged each other with joy, seriously the love was there.
"i'm so happy" i whispered to her. She blinked her eyes, saying nothing.
Minutes later we arrived at my lodge which impressed her a lot.
"hmmm your lodge is beautiful. It's so big ooo. Hmmm you go fear three storey building. How much do you pay here?" she asked with admiration.
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We had a wonderful night gisting, joking and playing before finally wrapping up the whole fun with a hot super se.x. She really was so good and sweet. Oh what a delicious girl she was.
"i hope you arn't decieving me?" she asked with love in her eyes.
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"of course not my dear" i answered innocently. She smiled and closed her eyes. We went straight to sleep moments after, Unfortunately i never knew a nightmare was coming.
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I woke up at exactly 3:15am the next morning, to see my lovely visitor gasping for breathe.
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To be continued. www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/nmeka-the-troublesome-spirit-1/
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 12:14pm On Jun 28, 2014
Do you believe in after-life?. I mean life after death?. Do you believe in ghosts?. Have you seen one?.

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..Heartbeat drops...
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Things really have happened to me. Things beyond ordinary. Things so deadly to imagine. Things so cold and horrible.
_
My name is Jude. This is my story. Or should i call it a confessional story.
_
MARCH, 2009
7:49pm
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I brushed my teeth for the third time, ran out of the bathroom and grabbed my phone. Slowly i scrolled down to a name saved with "NMEKA 2go" and dialled the number with a happy smile on my face.
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Nmeka was my 2go girlfriend. The first real friend i was making from 2go after months of endless chatting. She was paying me a visit that very day, something like a return visit because we first met two weeks ago at her school where we met each other for the first time. Of course the visit i paid her solidified our friendship thus making her take the risk of visiting me for a lovely weekend.
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"hello Jude, the bus has dropped me at the park. You can now come and get me" Nmeka's sweet voice announced as she answered my call. I jumped up with joy before rushing out to pick her up.
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It wasn't had locating her at the busy bus station. We hugged each other with joy, seriously the love was there.
"i'm so happy" i whispered to her. She blinked her eyes, saying nothing.
Minutes later we arrived at my lodge which impressed her a lot.
"hmmm your lodge is beautiful. It's so big ooo. Hmmm you go fear three storey building. How much do you pay here?" she asked with admiration.
_
We had a wonderful night gisting, joking and playing before finally wrapping up the whole fun with a hot super se.x. She really was so good and sweet. Oh what a delicious girl she was.
"i hope you arn't decieving me?" she asked with love in her eyes.
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"of course not my dear" i answered innocently. She smiled and closed her eyes. We went straight to sleep moments after, Unfortunately i never knew a nightmare was coming.
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I woke up at exactly 3:15am the next morning, to see my lovely visitor gasping for breathe.
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To be continued. www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/nmeka-the-troublesome-spirit-1/

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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 11:36am On Jun 29, 2014
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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 11:36am On Jun 29, 2014
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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 11:40am On Jun 29, 2014
*continues*
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Before i could understand what was happening, she collasped on the bed. I fearfully stared at my unconscious visitor. Confused, nauesous and lost.
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"please don't do this to me" i pleaded seriously. Tears fell from my eyes, my heart pounded furiously.
The poor girl breathed her last, a very heavy breathe it was before keeping still, leaving me all alone to my fate. All alone and hopeless.
I was left with the choice to tell the truth. A freaking truth which no one would buy.
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"no no no" i cried with panick, jumped out of the bed and wore my trouser. My mind was set on going out to seek help. To scream, to cry out loud.
"Perhaps my neighbours could be of assistance" I reasoned with a cold shiver. But on second thought i played down my fears and decided not to seek external help. She wasn't breathing, she already was freaking gone. I felt her pulse over and over again.
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Desperately, i tried breathing into her mouth. I pressed on her chest a hundred times over, but nothing worked. I fell back with fear, while the consequencies of my predicament ran through my head. I was in deep s.hit.
I needed no one to tell me that I only had a little time to think out a good explanation or plan. Time was running out fast. Dawn was quickly approaching.
"d.amn" i exclaimed as my head played back our last moment together. I really was ruined, definitely fu.cked.
"Damn 2go" i hissed, wondering what must have happened to her.
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"perhaps she's asthmatic or something. Perhaps i woke up too late to save her. Jeez" i cursed, reached for her handbag and searched it for drugs or something similar but found nothing.
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Slowly my clock struck 4:10am, i had little time left.
"I have to act fast. I have to move her body" i reasoned with a fearful courage.
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"Where will i dump her?, how do i cover my tracks?, did anyone see us together the previous evening?" i wondered as i pulled her down from my bed.
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To be continued. www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/nmeka-the-troublesome-spirit-1/

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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Nobody: 12:06pm On Jun 29, 2014
oh my God!!! Dats a really bad experience....following ur story bro
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Yemlizzy(f): 12:50pm On Jun 29, 2014
Awwww terrible! More pls......nice story.
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by meelorlah(f): 4:38pm On Jun 29, 2014
I was actually reading ur story before NL was attacked...was weeping for d young guy sef...but don't keep us waiting dis time around o
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by missuniverse(f): 6:05pm On Jun 29, 2014
hmmm,quite unfortunate.

kip it coming
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Tantidora(f): 6:18pm On Jun 30, 2014
@ coolval22 is ur blog hack too ?
Cos as it stands it seems it has been hack or sometin
plss do check it
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 4:39am On Jul 01, 2014
Tantidora: @ coolval22 is ur blog hack too ?
Cos as it stands it seems it has been hack or sometin
plss do check it
no it's back online.....
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 4:40am On Jul 01, 2014
*continues*
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I quickly pulled off her night wear and dressed her up with the clothes she wore from her place. A black jean trouser and a pink top. It truly was the most difficult and irritating task i have ever done in my life.
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"what next?" i asked myself as i looked out of my room window. The hostel{lodge} gate was still locked. There wasn't anyway i could carry her out of the lodge without waking the gateman or seen by early morning weed smokers, {Annoying students who were fond of smoking hemp in front of some hostels]. Moreover the hostel lights were equally on and glaring.
I rubbed my face in desperation. I was living at the top-most floor and so had little or nothing to hope on. It was a do or die affair.
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I left my room and took a quiet tour round the lodge. Fortunately no one was outside, which really was a very big relief. I went round the lodge searching for a quiet hidden place i could dump Nmeka's body. Of course i wasn't thinking of dumping her outside the lodge because their wasn't a way i could do it without being seen. I couldn't ask the gateman to open the gate without arousing suspicion nor scale the fence with such a heavy load. I had to look for a spot within the lodge to dump the body.
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Finally an idea quickly struck me. The was a staircase at the extreme end of wing c which was hardly used because the three stairs at the front and middle back of the big hostel was the most preferred by everyone. The staircase was exactly the kind of place i was badly searching for. There wasn't any bulb underneath it like the other staircases {the bulbs were probably stolen} and so had poor visibilty even in the afternoon. My only fear was that the cleaners who swept the lodge every morning might discover her on time. Perhaps before i could be able to dispose her handbag and other belongings which i intend disposing at a place very far from the lodge later in the morning.
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Seriously i never imagined my heart could be as dark as it was that fateful morning, but it got me to realise that the heart of man is very dangerous especially when faced with an unimaginable circumstance.
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I quickly inspected the staircase, rushed to my room and carried the poor girl's body. Discreetly i headed back to the staircase, my heart almost at breaking point.
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To be continued. www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/nmeka-the-troublesome-spirit-1/

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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Sheenor: 11:26am On Jul 01, 2014
very eye catching story........will definitely follow till the end.....please coolval, do increase the lenght of your post....thanks in advance......awaiting new update though.....
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Lorlaahlozz: 11:33am On Jul 01, 2014
Sits at d front.....following....oya come nd update
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by ESIXLOVE: 11:41am On Jul 01, 2014
mehn i dey your back.
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by ESIXLOVE: 11:42am On Jul 01, 2014
Lorlaahlozz: Sits at d front.....following....oya come nd update
na everywhere you go come.
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Lorlaahlozz: 11:45am On Jul 01, 2014
ESIXLOVE: na everywhere you go come.
u nko...no be everywhere u dey go tongue
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by ESIXLOVE: 12:15pm On Jul 01, 2014
Lorlaahlozz: u nko...no be everywhere u dey go tongue
see your face. tongue
Lorlaahlozz: u nko...no be everywhere u dey go tongue
see your face.
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Nobody: 1:20pm On Jul 01, 2014
Awwwwww...Nmeka o
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by rapmike(m): 1:41pm On Jul 01, 2014
Hmmnnn...eyah
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Hannahamah(f): 2:07pm On Jul 01, 2014
#Following, please do not keep me waiting smiley
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Nobody: 5:15pm On Jul 01, 2014
Enjoying the story!pls update ASAP
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by ChideraFavour(m): 5:53pm On Jul 01, 2014
Update pls, ds story is vry interestn I swear
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by rapmike(m): 6:37pm On Jul 01, 2014
Xtarxhyne: Awwwwww...Nmeka o

Xup xtarxhyne
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Nobody: 7:17pm On Jul 01, 2014
rapmike:

Xup xtarxhyne
Hi
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 7:22pm On Jul 01, 2014
Thanks for the wonderful comments. Updating shortly.
Re: She Died In My Room 1 by Coolval22com: 7:24pm On Jul 01, 2014
I quietly carried her to the staircase, my heart beating wildly as i carried the heavy load.
I needed a whole lot of luck to avoid detection. Only a single mistake could destroy everything i had planned.
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Luckily i got to my destination without being seen. I calmly dumped and pushed her well underneath the staircase {of the first floor}.
"if things go as planned perhaps it will take a day or two before she's discovered" i reasoned before another idea came into my head.
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I rushed up to my room, grabbed a bucket of water, came down and poured it all over her. I wasn't a biologist but i felt it could destroy any evidence like my prints which were on her body. Yea it might sound silly but i felt a bit relieved after doing it even though the water quickly spilled out towards the exit door but it wasn't enough to draw attention.
I grabbed the empty bucket and returned to my room. I knew nobody would investigate a spilled water in a lodge filled with students. Unless of course the cleaners.
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As I got to my room, i quickly cleaned up everywhere, packing up all of Nmeka's things in a big black sack bag including her phone which was the first in the list, but before doing it i first logged into her 2go account{luckily the appilication opened without asking for a password} and deleted everything about me, including my phone numbers and text messages we shared. I knew the police had the means to get me if they were serious but i did everything just as a precaution. I equally washed the bathroom, and changed my bedsheet, made sure everything was in order before sitting down to rest.
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I was so terrified and nervous. I needed all the goodluck in the world. I was scared of being caught. My future just stood before me, glaring at my face. I knew i did the worst atrocity by trying to hide the poor girl, but i had no choice than to do it. I wasn't ready to hang for something i had no hand in.
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Nervously i waited for the hostel gate to be opened, the success of my plans depended on it. I had to dispose Nmeka's things in a place very far away. Precisely in a river.
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To be continued. www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/nmeka-the-troublesome-spirit-1/

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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by touchmeder: 7:35pm On Jul 01, 2014
OMG m following this one.

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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by barackodam: 7:46pm On Jul 01, 2014
Leggo!!!


Ah love dz kinda story, buh if am not mistaken, that link says, the troublesome spirit.


Yepaa!!!

Ghost.

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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by ChideraFavour(m): 10:27pm On Jul 01, 2014
Weldone keep it cumin

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Re: She Died In My Room 1 by eunisam: 11:11pm On Jul 01, 2014
i love this.bring it up.

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