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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Hameenat94(f): 5:13pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
This story has been interesting xo far.. Lets ride on |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by zainharb: 7:45pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
New here nd following |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:51pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Your comments and criticisms are welcomed. In other news d9ty7 is #typing# |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:03pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
I dey follow |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:04pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
I think I saw Queenxster viewing this thread some few minutes ago. Am honoured to have you here but your comment will go a long way. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:08pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Its good to have you here sire. Fixgoo: I dey follow |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:30pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
--continuation-- "Will you two at least keep quiet and think of how these recent insurgence can be stopped. You are here making noise." Clement said angrily. "Sorry sir." Ngozi apologised while Okoro mumbled some incoherent words to himself. This was why She hated him with passion, his pride and ego are always getting better of him. Just then Clement's phone rang. "Excuse me please." He said cutting Burahimo who was about saying something short. The other four police officers couldn't make out what was being discussed on the phone but they knew as soon as he ends the call, they'll catch up with the gist. "Take it." Clement threw his car key to Okoro who caught it mid-air even though he was caught unawares. He gave his colleague an askance look. "Your attention is urgently needed at the headquaters. Get the car and go there at once with Ngozi. Its likely you get the finger print results too." Clement explained. Clement explained to Okoro who stood up and made to exit the room much to Clement's suprise. Okoro was known for his inquisitiveness and questioning ability. He won't go on an errand unless he ask certain questions that has been answered to his satisfaction. He unlocked the car and hopped into the driver seat while Ngozi sat beside him. He drove out of the Area F premises. Five minutes into their journey, Ngozi has busied herself by burying her head into her phone doing only God knows what. While Okoro was shaking his head to an imaginary music. The silence that ensued inside the car is killing and Ngozi was forced to break the silence when she couldn't bear it anymore. "Am sorry about what happened the other time." She said apologetically. He smiled to himself, he just achieved his goal. All his life he has never said sorry to anyone. Not even his disciplinarian of a father. He'll rather die being punished than say sorry. Fifty yards away from the headquater's main building Okoro matched the car brakes and it came to a halt. "What's this about?" Ngozi asked angrily as she picked her up phone. "You don't see what am seeing." Okoro replied. "Fill me in please." Ngozi pleaded. Okoro picked his binocular and looked towards the police station building, Six armed men walked into the building with guns hung on their shoulders. "There is fire on the mountain." Ngozi said as she opened the door. "Where to?" He asked. "Those people inside are in danger. They need our help, you know they would be caught unawares." Ngozi replied. Okoro shut the car door forcefully from her grip and pressed the central lock which got all the doors locked firmly. "What's this all about?" Ngozi asked. "You still have a pretty bright future. Don't get yourself killed." Okoro warned. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ INSIDE THE POLICE STATION "You guys stay here while I go in to get this business transacted." One of the men who was dressed coporately in a white t-shirt and a pair of black jean trouser. The man walked into the police station and got the the counter post. "Good morning. Please am here to see Sergeant Habeed." He said to the constable he met on duty. The constable picked the intercom and punched in some numbers. "You may go in." The man walked into Habeeb's office, an office he shared with other sergeants like himself. Few seconds later, the constable at the counter was hit on the head by a bullet and he fell down. Every other policemen in the premises at the time of the gunshot all trooped out to attack the unknown gunmen but while a few got shot and died, few other were injured and a considerable amount weren't hit. The gentleman who asked after Habeeb took the emergency exit and landed behind the station fence where his colleagues were waiting for him. Together they all drove away rejoicing. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "They went this way." Ngozi who saw the men drive out of the police station said to Okoro who ignited the car engine and drove towards where Ngozi pointed. Ngozi's phone rang as the got to the main road from the utarred road that linked the police backyard to the main road. "Hello sir." Ngozi said to Burahimo. "The headquater just got attacked. Report here immediately if you are safe." Burahimo said. "We are currently on the trail of thos men as I speak with you." "You and who?" Burahimo asked. "Okoro." Ngozi replied. "With no backup? Get yourselves here in the next ten minutes." Burahimo ordered and the line clicked dead. "What's next?" She asked Okoro who was half listening to her conversation with her boss. "We'll get to the end of this one." He said as he stepped on the accelerator and the terrorist's van came into view from afar off. --to be continued-- 9 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by labaski(f): 9:50pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
tnks duro.. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 9:52pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Nice1 boss keep up d good work |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:26pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
@Darus5: Its good to have you here. @Hameenat94: Welcome ma'am. @Labaski: You are one of the few loyalist here. Thanks for reading anyways. @Snowprince07: Thanks for checking this out too. @Zainharb: Its good to have your new self here. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:34pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
@cestmoi1, akinkudin, Eniqurl,Anugod, Hussain63, talk2riel, Mercyclaire, Bettybold, Drnonny, Atk01. Check out this story and tell me what you think of it. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:39pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
@heemah, Aisha800, Ifyude, hinosend, wizard700, Tolulopegeorge, MuniratAbolani. I have updated o. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:39pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
@heemah, Aisha800, Ifyude, hinosend, wizard700, Tolulopegeorge, Temmytayo20, MuniratAbolani. I have updated o. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 11:22pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Hehehe...nice story. As e dei hot #grabs cold viju. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by popeshemoo(m): 11:35pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
why una come block d front seat like dis.........my papal sedela no fit enter here na..........e be like say na untop d stage i dey go sidon.......d9ty7 shey yu no mind |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stormybucci(m): 11:39pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
AudreyTimms:hehehehe!! me sef am a toddler!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Mhot42(f): 11:40pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
James Hadley Chase in the making. Kip it up. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stormybucci(m): 11:42pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
PrinceAdepoju: ###Automatic Following!!xo u dae here nd u no call me?? cane dae wait 4 u, u go come palace come meet me |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Jayson4a: 11:46pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Good one bro |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rahma26(f): 11:50pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Good one from you boss. You know how we do it? Oliver twist |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by oluday2: 11:58pm On Sep 16, 2014 |
Am suprised am still awake by this time. D9ty7 is the cause. Good one boss, more ink to ur pen. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:03am On Sep 17, 2014 |
Goodnight guys. I will reply you all tomorrow. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by talk2riel: 6:14am On Sep 17, 2014 |
I planned to be a ghost reader but since you have catch me, I shall make this comment "great work". Sha no make clement dey feel like SHELOCK HOLMES o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by labaski(f): 7:24am On Sep 17, 2014 |
D9ty7: @Darus5: Its good to have you here.u r welcome |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:54am On Sep 17, 2014 |
I will update later in the day when I must have charged my phone. Good morning guys how was your night? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Darus05(m): 8:21am On Sep 17, 2014 |
D9ty7: I will update later in the day when I must have charged my phone.so sweet boss nd urs? txns 4 d update more power to ur phone. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 8:22am On Sep 17, 2014 |
Good morning guys, how you doing? The month is gradually going to an end and it will be very bad of us if d9ty7 losses again this month. Lets vote him as our writer of the month because he's been doing well so far this month. If you know you are enjoying this story go in here https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/17 and vote for d9ty7. Just type I vote d9ty7..... Hope to see your votes when next I check. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:27am On Sep 17, 2014 |
--continuation-- Chief Obi Patrick descended the stairs into the living room where two of his business and politics friends were seated. The two men, Prince Ogunsakin, a former executive governor of one of the south-west states and Andrew Gulak, a three time presidential aspirant who has lost all three times at the general election. "Good morning Chief." The two men greeted. "How you doing this bright morning?" Patrick asked. "We are good sir." The two men replied. "Hope no problems? Why are you here?" "Sir, we are here concerning the death of Kingsley." Gulak said. Chief Obi Patrick motioned him to keep quiet. "Lets go into my study where no one will hear us." Chief Patrick said leading the way and his visitors followed him. +++++INSIDE THE STUDY+++++ "kingsley remains our only opposition in the oil and gas sector. You know how stubborn and adamant he has been on the latest request we submitted to him." "What request is that?" Gulak asked. "So you don't know? We only requested for ten percent of the oil revenue budget to finance the party but he refused. Now he wants a senatorial ticket and he is almost getting it." Chief Patrick explained. Gulak knew only few of the party's activities and policies because he just decamped from the opposition party when he discovered he'll never win the presidency while in the party. But joining the ruling party, he knew he won't get the presidential ticket but he has been assured of the vice presidency. Chief Patrick has promised to axe the current vice president few months to the election. "With Kingsley dead now, who is taking his place?" Ogunsakin asked. "According to the news I heard yesterday, his deputy, one woman from the east will assume the office temporarily before the president nominate a new candidate." Patrick replied. "And women from the east are difficult to control." Gulak said. The three men continued to make plans over the upcoming election. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Five girls were seated in their room getting dressed for a birthday party. The girls, Dayo, Dolapo, Tola, Chioma and Hadiza are in their final year in the Lagos state university. "Hadiza, why are you looking gloomy?" Tola asked. "Deoye asked me not to go to that party." Hadiza replied. "Who is Deoye?" Tola asked. "My boyfriend nau." Hadiza replied. "Oh! sorry. I thought you guys have broken up." "Why will he ask you not to go to the party?" Dayo, a computer science student asked. "He said it is dangerous for me." "How come he knew that?" Dayo asked. "He gave no tangible reason." Hadiza replied. "Babe, abeg free yourself. Nothing do you. We'll all stay together throughout the party" Chioma, an Igbo girl studying English said assuringly. With these the ladies trooped out of their apartment and boarded a cab at the bus-stop that conveyed them to the venue of the party outside the school. +++++++AT THE PARTY++++++++ As the party progresses, everyone was having fun and music was being played by a disc jockey who is expert at what he does. "Baby lets talk outside." A guy said to Hadiza as they were dancing and she obliged since they couldn't hear themselves properly inside the party. They went outside and started talking. Dayo's phone vibrated, she checked it and discovered she has a message which reads, "You persuaded her to go with you bah? I'll get you killed." From Deo. Dayo knew Deoye was a dreaded cultist in the school. And messing around with his is as dangerous as messing with a lion. She quickly exited the hall and went in search of Hadiza whom she saw when she left the hall with a guy. But she met the shocker of her life when she got outside. --to be continued-- 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:11am On Sep 17, 2014 |
Danger de smell |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by talk2riel: 10:55am On Sep 17, 2014 |
D9ty7:Hope its not Buhari you are portraying here |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 10:56am On Sep 17, 2014 |
Kip it yp bro. I don vote 4 u 4 best writer. FEED ME MORE *oliver twist* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 11:01am On Sep 17, 2014 |
Heyah! Hadiza died. Nice story D9ty7 1 Like |
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