Voting Criteria : Opener - 1 point Rhymes - 2 points Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Punchlines - 3 points Personals - 2 points Flow - 1 point Wordplays - 2 points Closer - 1 point Rules - 20 lines. - Deadline is 11:59pm, Tuesday 9 September 2014. - Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments - No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. - Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong. - If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over. - NO argument with established vets OR voters. - Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that. - Only specific judges are allowed to vote. Goodluck!!!

judges are
yeyenatu
stinstuntz
hellrazor

Uh... Dis ur juj damm, Nawa o... Let just get dis shit ON:>

[color=#000000][/color] atlessMIKUZ should bhe informed nah . . . . yew guys should put him as vhe jujs tew . . . / twin-bro itz mhe leo

lee get mikuz piko!!

would post soon

Owhk@lap0ga . . . . . Mha check if ah qo fit inbox am!!!!!

Checked. .I drop on Tuesday

his school name is perfect kiddies,,his nickname is kingsley,,his 2go profile picture has him wid a blackshade on. .d rest are diggable
leggo
with black shade on/i'll still shatter ur eyes lyk rays from d sun/so even if u have LucK on ur sde i'll still be second to none!!/so stop saying u are da numba one/punches would make u ask for more like "cookies"/wen i tear off ur "cache" i'll make u look like new rookies/i swear am gan make u loose "sight" wid hefty punches. .delete u like removing rubbish!!/so even if u spit "jokes" u won't still "crack my ribs". .gan take u to nassarawa as i *"laugh ya"*/no music but gonna make u "dance to the tune" lyk u were poured hot water!!/so if dis efe ever harm-bruce(ambrose) i'll slash down his hands just to make his arm-loose/place u behind "bars" just to put u on d "line"/make u break "in between my teeths" like tablespoons i use to dine!!/couldn't suck "pussies",now i know dis cat-a-lena(catalena). .d only time he "acts" must be wen he see-bad-tins(sebastien) like d movie "wen u are mine"!!/lyk sum1 trying to "beat the time" i'll bliss thru u in a haste/so lyk "broken clocks" am quicken to end ur days/d only time he would ever be a "king" is probably wen i bow down to his grave!!/his genes seems to prove dat he is a "goat" but e wnt still give birth to perfect "kiddies"/like a "stubborn" silk i'll leave you with more stitches/eat u up in no time like hungry witches/i'll scratch-dis-wack den bash-his-back to leave him wid more "beats" dan a mixtape/i'll "clear-you-off" wid blows dat "tear-you-up" just to correct a mistake!!/like dat netherland player(dailey blind) i'll leave u wid more "shots" everyday to make ur eyes "daily blind"/so quit dis place or d only time u would ever be a "king" is wen i tear u into 12pieces lyk dey did to "king saul"/. .scatter up his "joints"* wid "benches" dats what u call a maul/so if u do d maths den u know dat one horizontal slash plus a vertical smash equals to me splitting you into four like the cardinal points!!*

:-Xmute . . .. Whr z Kingsely

If dis niqqa clams "ontop" hiz Polly an true AKURE-OUT-"SKIRTS"/ know to pull pants lyk ah CUM HELL BOUT/ so im sprayinq bullets on dis GEEK'S HEAD!/ made em lose "memory" when "TIMED" lyk some WEAK-NERD/ amma brinq you "qiuk" "flowz">so u know amma 9ja "DOPE"</ "LAPOGA" leave u to keep rapinq by dea "mirror"/ now you know what tz is if u hear "KINGSLEY"/im "here" to spit "flowz"lyk SPAM-TOM/ now lemme walk in to viz shit with my "crown"/ coz vz a "KING" taq to dea name "KING-SLEY"/... Ish* im feelinq "KILL-I-MAN-JARO"/ coz my "dope" keep kickinq urs lyk "POLO"/ >tfa... 7Tim'z< to us WACK-BAR'Z/ and after u see vhat u've lose E be lyk(damm i gave em all i have)"maroon5"/ have u ever wonder y we mOda "bar'z"(tz coz we lyk keeping u "UPdATED" //status\\/ damm tz seems u know me so well/ mhen i most be popular in vhat ue "area"/ tfa... 3Tim... 4 readinq&memorizing my "dope"BAR'Z"/ <tfa... Aqain> coz u worthy nothinq in Spain<:p/ i really wanna punch u hard!! Buh ur so Black.../ Vhat my punch only touch'z ur "TEETH"/ [i see now u get none!] chai!!.... Ur "MONALESA" we keep lookinq at u lyk WHERE-E-COME-FROM!!?/.... At "first" i came in peace but u lemme BEAT&BAZUKA ur lyf 2"pills"/ chai so na alL that ur bar'z we (R:I)8-) and he's toothless watching me BALL'OUT

geoxpress
yeyenatu
stinstuntz
xpecial007
thunderboat
pls vote!!!!

Mehn I was n0t impressed at All!!!

Well I'm dissapointed... All the same, my verdict goes thus...

Opener-nil(I don't get it, tho oda jujz might)

Closer-nil

Flow-tie(so hard 2 read, both of ya)

Metaphors-Lapoga

Multies/rhymes-tie(work on this)

Wordplays/nameplays-Lapoga

Punchlines-Lapoga. . . I must say I'm dissapointed here, cus I'mma great fan of punchlines. . Tho cool quotables in Lapogas verse that won him this crit is


. . So even if u are a 'joker'/ u can't 'crack my ribs!!'

And!

. . .The only time u'd feel 'king'/is wen I'm 'bowing before ur grave'

There might have been others...but took interest in these 2

Personals-nil

So.... Geoxpress' final vote goes to-Lapoga

This battle is more lik a threat 2 me! Y'all are 2 serious, I mean be lik warriblood na..put up some humour

Well all the same...its good!! No insults pls, other verdicts could go other wise

Abeg kingsley were u. . .
Sleeping wen u was scripting Dis Bars? Am realy Disapp0inted
Closer=Kingsley
Punchline=>Lapoga
Metaz=>Lapoga
Creativity=>Lapoga
Multies=>Lapoga
C0nnectivity=>Nil
Opener=>Nil
pun=>Nil
n0 threats ah cud av qiv Kingsley Threat. . . WEAK BRAWL TH0. Vgt Lapoga

Aoc goes to Lapoga. . .

it is lapoga 2-0 kingsley. .more verds

Geo said it all.....my AOC= lapoga ....vgt=lapoga.....(pls up ur game)

Hey guyz...funny o!.... I just keep wounding if u read mine very wel??... Or maybe he's a close friend tho!... Ok if dea say u won no p:...tz just gonna make me come out more. Tank's alL*

lapoga cruze's in into the next round still havin more work to do

Kinqsley: Hey guyz...funny o!.... I just keep wounding if u read mine very wel??... Or maybe he's a close friend tho!... Ok if dea say u won no p:...tz just gonna make me come out more. Tank's alL*

bro u need 2 w0rk M0re! If u see STINSTUNTz 4 Groupy holla me. . .

Chai!!.... Even lapoga whoop me 4 my next brawl with u... Ah go punch u tell u quite NL