Grilled fats are oily.
Sweet by the decree of the suyaman's maggi.
.
Grilled meats are dry.
So they smell better for the love of flies.
.
And anytime I passed by the suyaman's stand.
At Niyi beside where Tk ran his local band.
My desirous stomach cried.
And my empty pockets smiled at its whines.
.
But when it rains and the gutters fill up with sand.
Alhaja rescues the lost sand to build her paintless house.
She's old and frail so she always needs a helping hand.
So she pays the neighbourhood boys to rescue the sands for her.
.
Lifting up the sand from the gutter.
Balanced on my head all the way to Alhaja's compound.
Haa,wasn't an easy task.
But when will my tongue wallow in the oil of the suyaman's fat?
.
Jumping,jumping I visited his stand tonight.
"Abeg sell me fat!" In the pidgin he understands.
But he cut the dry meats on onto the paper.
"My broda I don sell meat,the fat I too hot"
His heavy accent,poked at a rising temper.
.

Ayamlaykorn
Cc: noble4d,OMA4U,philtrum,texanomaly,kagari,iyabodeh,
Poets please help me find my mistakes

laykorn:
Grilled fats are oily.
Sweet by the decree of the suyaman's maggi.
.
Grilled meats are dry.
So they smell better for the love of flies.
.
And anytime I passed by the suyaman's stand.
At Niyi beside where Tk ran his local band.
My desirous stomach cried.
And my empty pockets smiled at its whines.
.
But when it rains and the gutters fill up with sand.
Alhaja rescues the lost sand to build her paintless house.
She's old and frail so she always needs a helping hand.
So she pays the neighbourhood boys to rescue the sands for her.
.
Lifting up the sand from the gutter.
Balanced on my head all the way to Alhaja's compound.
Haa,wasn't an easy task.
But when will my tongue wallow in the oil of the suyaman's fat?
.
Jumping,jumping I visited his stand tonight.
"Abeg sell me fat!" In the pidgin he understands.
But he cut the dry meats on onto the paper.
"My broda I don sell meat,the fat I too hot"
His heavy accent,poked at a rising temper.
.

Ayamlaykorn
Cc: noble4d,OMA4U,philtrum,texanomaly,kagari,iyabodeh,
Poets please help me find my mistakes

so funny

noble4d:


so funny

Is that the only mistake I made? Hehe!
Ayamlaykorn