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Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Guykhena(m): 9:31am On Nov 25, 2014 |
Title : If I Control Time Description:Based on what you'll do if you could control time,what mistakes will you right,what scenarios will you prevent or change and so on. (Seems straight forward) Criteria Creativity-- 2 points Flow- - 1 point Imagery- - 2 points Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points Consistency/Topic-- 4 points Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points Vocabulary-- 2 points Emotion Rules (must be strictly adhered to) - 10 Lines... - Deadline is Wednesday Nov 26th 4pm - Verses should be posted by both contestants on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - No dissing of opponent - No unnecessary comments |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by obainojazz(m): 3:46pm On Nov 25, 2014 |
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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Gladyys(f): 8:29pm On Nov 25, 2014 |
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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Gladyys(f): 9:33pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
IF I CONTROL TIME I would go back to the times,you had dos cute smiles/ I would let out those feelings I used to hide Behind dos looks, smiles/ I 'would not act Lime',so I'd 'stop my teeth from biting' my lips!! I would let my words incline/ If only I knew you wouldn't decline/ If only I knew yours was in its prime. If I control time/ I would go back to the times we spent together/ Dos times wen in summer like jack and jill,d hills we went together/ And shared d blanket in a colder weather/ To the times You wrap your warm hands around mine/ Promisin never to let me go,be alone or cold,you even said WALAI!!/ If I control time Dis moment my heart 'break fast',wouldn't 'lunch' dis day to dine!! Staring at d engraved inscription/ Memories dat entails your description/ trails back into my mind,takes away my diction/ Dumb n numb,thoughts elude through a slow track/ My heart tumbles into my stomach/ D strands of hair stand firm/ The terror tangles itself with fear/ Dat moment I had your dead eyes on mine/ Cold hands on mine/ I felt dead too,havin such cold feet/ Waves of death encompassed me/ Your lifeless body on lied on my hands,so feeble/ D grim snatched Your soul from me/ If I control time I would alter d creation of d grim reaper/ If I control time You would still be me sweetheart/ If I control time Right now I would be saying d words more clearly/ Kissing your lips more firmly/ Screaming I love you more dearly/ How I wish I could control time But even now I cnt control my fears,d tears nor d pen........ 4 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by obainojazz(m): 9:43pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
........if I control time I'd go back and be Hitler.... y'all be black and Jews i'll be ruler... of both the wise and fools line y'all.....in ur socks and shoes share u in two/ the blacks in zoo others working from morn till noon. ...or I could be love and truth . .means I could be Jesus.. and die for you in my youths/now a king is dead... he's gone too soon . .....if I control time i'd go back to eden capture the serpent throw him in the lions den write to God to right all wrongs happening back den and be back before ten . ......if I control time I'd go back to shekau's mom pregnancy stage cause her a miscarriage so the terrorist who shows all what terror is won't come of age and attack this sovereign state. . .....if I control time i'd erase word war earth will be a free land for all ....a place of love where whites and blacks will be one it will begun/ when hates be gone or when feuds be solved ....without the guns. . .....if I control time I'd won this easily I'll go back to secondary enter j.s three and start studying poetry. or I coulda met gl@dys she'd be mother of me kids john, Annabel and Philips instead of this/she had be ffucking with me. or I could be mod ban peeps for fun and claim they dump. .....ffuck if I control time na me go be god. 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by obainojazz(m): 9:46pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Guykhena(m): 9:47pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
Open for votes Mikuz Kr0ne Elymaxiimus Loonat11kk Rapmaestro Guykhena Ibime Emaprince |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Gladyys(f): 9:50pm On Nov 26, 2014 |
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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Emaprince: 2:13am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Criteria Creativity-- 2 points -Gladdys...obianojazz focused more on telling his stories straight away...gladdys had something like " 'I won't act lime' so I won't 'bite my lips' "...though it aint fantastic but half bread is better than none. Flow- - 1 point-tie Imagery- - 2 points-obianojazz Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points -obianojazz...gladdys was falling in and out.. Consistency/Topic-- 4 points-obianojazz Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-Gladdys Vocabulary-- 2 points -tie MVGT-obianojazz 1 Like |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by kr0ne(m): 8:18am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Guys, don't make it sound like soft poem please! Creativity-- 2 points - Tie Flow- - 1 point -Tie Imagery- - 2 points - Gladyys Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points - Tie (though both of u were barely rhyming) Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - Gladyys (she maintained her topic from start to finish) Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points - Obainojazz Vocabulary-- 2 points - Obainojazz Mvgt - - Gladyys |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by ELYMAXiimus(m): 9:20am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Lol @ obaino's closer!. One thing you both should know is that, you don't have to keep repeating the topic everytime... There was too much "If i could control time" in y'all verse.. Upping. . . |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by ELYMAXiimus(m): 9:34am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Creativity-- 2 points = Gladys ( she a better story writer) Flow- - 1 point = TIE Imagery- - 2 points = OBAINOJAZZ (imagine sey i be God... ...) Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points = TIE Consistency/Topic-- 4 points = TIE Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points = GLADYS Vocabulary-- 2 points = TIE MVGT = GLADYS |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Guykhena(m): 10:24am On Nov 27, 2014 |
Creativity-- 2 points - Gladyys Flow- - 1 point-Gladyys Imagery- - 2 points- Obainojazz Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points -Obainojazz Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - nil( You both didn't really follow the theme, you both were reciting "If I could control time" countless of times,there are different ways in which you can pass your msg across without necessary Stating the topic) Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-Gladyys Vocabulary-- 2 points -Obainojazz 6-5 MVGT -Obainojazz . |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by mikuz(m): 10:50pm On Nov 27, 2014 |
Criteria Creativity-- 2 points : Tie Flow- - 1 point : Tie Imagery- - 2 points : Obainojazz Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points : Obainojazz Consistency/Topic-- 4 points : Obainojazz Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points : Gladdys Vocabulary-- 2 points : Tie MVGT : Obainojazz |
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Geoxpress(m): 11:30pm On Nov 27, 2014 |
Lol. .una dy try.......^_^ |
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