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....voice... by Nobody: 11:07pm On Dec 16, 2014
Cc:laykorn
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:10pm On Dec 16, 2014
cheesy
Oyya leggo
Ayamlaykorn
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:12pm On Dec 18, 2014
LOYALTY


Love is your brother,
Or should I call you loyal?
Yearning for you,
Amidst even imposture,
Lying is your foe,
Till death always truthful,
You seem difficult to find these days.


Cc:laykorn,leki10

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Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:17pm On Dec 18, 2014
Vibra:
LOYALTY


Love is your brother
Or should I call you loyal?
Yearning for you
Admist even imposture
Lying is your foe
Till death always truthful
You seem difficult to find these days


Cc:laykorn,leki10
kudos dear, meanwile....work on ur punctuations.
Endeavour to punctuate the end of each line.
Then in line 4...it should be amidst....keep it up
the sky is ur starting point
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:34pm On Dec 18, 2014
Like this?
Vibra:
LOYALTY
Love is your brother,
Or should I call you loyal?
Yearning for you,
Amidst even imposture,
Lying is your foe,
Till death always truthful,
You seem difficult to find these days.
Cc:laykorn,leki10
Re: ....voice... by leki10(m): 11:38pm On Dec 18, 2014
Vibra:
Like this?

you have done well
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 10:15pm On Dec 23, 2014
NEW ME


Gone are the days i used to shed tears,
Gone are those days i was so vulnerable,
Meek as a lamb,gentle as a sheep,
All those are bygones.





I didn't know how strong I was until being. strong was the only option,
Gone are those moments I will clung unto you for protection,
Brave as a lion,dangerous as a lone wolf,
That's what I am now





Gone are those times I felt you are my hero,my knight,
But now I've found my true hero,
I am my hero,the new me





Cc:laykorn,leki10
Re: ....voice... by D9ty7(m): 11:03pm On Dec 23, 2014
Vibra the poet-ess. You have done well enough with those two piece-es above.
Btw, it is Laykorn. Correct it so he can get the mention.
Kip up the good work dear.
Re: ....voice... by Nobody: 11:15pm On Dec 23, 2014
D9ty7:
Vibra the poet-ess. You have done well enough with those two piece-es above.
Btw, it is Laykorn. Correct it so he can get the mention.
Kip up the good work dear.
Thank you boss...following your steps
Re: ....voice... by Napoleone(m): 10:58pm On Mar 15, 2015
leki10:

kudos dear, meanwile....work on ur punctuations.
Endeavour to punctuate the end of each line.
Then in line 4...it should be amidst....keep it up
the sky is ur starting point
I don't think that really matters...there's something called poetic licence. Besides, the lack of punctuation may be figurative.

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