RELIGIOUS INSANITY

In the name of their god,
They wreak havoc abroad,
Following sick instruction,
Pushing death and destruction.

With minds warped and twisted,
Their mad cause persisted,
And they lose their humanity,
For religious insanity.

With their goodness faded,
A way paved for hatred,
Is there any hope at all,
Before more innocent fall?

Cc: Laykhorn, Texanomaly.

This is awesome. Simple. You organisation is awesome and your grammatical accuracy is superb!

Just that,
Line 2 should have ended with a full stop.
Line 10 too.

I believe you believe that a full stop doesn't come if the line isn't the last in a stanza

There's a simple rule. Punctuate your poem just like you'd punctuate your prose work.

Cheers


Ayamlaykorn

Okay. Point taken.

Thank you.

Laykorn is right. Nice job.

Lovely poem I must say

But, just asking why you did use questions mark for the last line.....


Since u aren't asking a question but making a statement

dre11:
Lovely poem I must say

But, just asking why you did use questions mark for the last line.....


Since u aren't asking a question but making a statement

That was a question.

texanomaly:
Laykorn is right. Nice job.

Thank you.

Beennkummar. An acrostic poem is a poem that spells a word, often the poem topic with the first letters of every line. Take a look at an acrostic I once wrote about someone named gloria.z
Ayamlaykorn

Imagine you wanted to write dechande.l a poem and you wrote her an acrostic, with her name all spelt out in bold letters in a meaningful poem. Wouldn't she be awed
Ayamlaykorn

Wow! I see.

I get it now. Thanks prof.

Quick question:

Must the lines follow a rhythmic pattern?

Beennkummar, your style will be the thing decide that. The acrostic is a form that can be used with all styles.

Imagine you were writing an acrostic poem with a sonnet. You would still have to observe the rhythm rules.

But if you were writing in free verse or a style that has no specific rhythm rules, then being acrostic doesn't change that.

Btw, I amu not a puro-vessor
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:
Beennkummar, your style will be the thing decide that. The acrostic is a form that can be used with all styles.

Imagine you were writing an acrostic poem with a sonnet. You would still have to observe the rhythm rules.

But if you were writing in free verse or a style that has no specific rhythm rules, then being acrostic doesn't change that.

Btw, I amu not a puro-vessor
Ayamlaykorn

Okay. Thank you sir.

Sometimes my mind is blocked,
Trapped, hindered, and locked.
Behind this cage of uncreativity,
Imagination yearns to be free.

In this prison so dark and cold,
Where no idea will spark or hold,
I fight my ultimate fear:
My imagination dying here.

What escape do I try today?
Scream, fight, hope, pray?
I push, I pound these prison walls,
But do they budge? Not at all.

But neither do I give in to this,
This cruel, unimaginative abyss.
No walls, no bars will stop creation,
Not while I wield firm determination.

Cc: Laykorn

I'm really sorry I've been inactive, missing lectures and assignments. I've been so choked up at work.

I hope everything stabilizes soon. For the meantime, I'll try my best to catch up.

Once again, my apologies.

Did you learn This somewhere beenkumar? Dont tell me you were not taught cause all my attempts in writing one are futile

Lol. No problem Son. I've been busy so much myself too squeezing time for the classes. Lol
Cc: Beennkumar
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:
Lol. No problem Son. I've been busy so much myself too squeezing time for the classes. Lol
Cc: Beennkumar
Ayamlaykorn

Thanks for understanding, sir.

mikechibuzor:
Did you learn This somewhere beenkumar? Dont tell me you were not taught cause all my attempts in writing one are futile

Nah, I didn't. I write it as the words and thoughts flow.

Beennkumar:

Nah, I didn't. I write it as the words and thoughts flow.

you see,i've been trying to write a nice one but i just cant get it