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AN IDEA

My papa always speaks a tale
About the rain and what it brings
The wet drops touch all men
It is pleasurable, refreshing and soothing
Oh the blessing of the rain after a dry season.

My papa tells of a kind of rain
It falls from the sky but it is not wet
These eurekaric drops can touch any man
To change the world and shift the trends
Oh the wonders of a unique rain.

Now and then, the new rain falls on me
The drops engulf me, showing a new side
Papa says these unique raindrops are ideas
The same ideas fall on different persons
The hero who acts on it and the one who ignores it
What will it be for you my child?

The answer, I know, we are all guilty
Sometimes, excited, we bask in and enjoy the rain
Other times, too lazy, we fail to take delight
Yet, I discover myself, the beauty of an idea and the thrill of a breakthrough.
Eureka!

I haf do my assignment oh.
Cc: Laykorn
Cc: Texanomaly
Cc: EverestdeBliu
Cc: leki10

Please remember to tag leki10.
You're doing his assignment.
But, let me do small amenbo.
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

Please remember to tag leki10.
You're doing his assignment.
But, let me do small amenbo.
Ayamlaykorn

Feel free to do the amebo. I knew I just had to write something. Does this qualify as a free verse?

Emeraldz:
AN IDEA

My papa always speaks a tale
About the rain and what it brings
The wet drops touch all men
It is pleasurable, refreshing and soothing
Oh the blessing of the rain after a dry season.

My papa tells of a kind of rain
It falls from the sky but it is not wet
These eurekaric drops can touch any man
To change the world and shift the trends
Oh the wonders of a unique rain.

Now and then, the new rain falls on me
The drops engulf me,how showing a new side
Papa says these unique raindrops are ideas
The same ideas fall on different persons
The hero who acts on it and the one who ignores it
What will it be for you my child?

The answer, I know, we are all guilty
Sometimes, excited, we bask in and enjoy the rain
Other times, too lazy, we fail to take delight
Yet, I discover myself, the beauty of an idea and the thrill of a breakthrough.
Eureka!

Impressive!
I like your mode and stream of consciousness. Your use of imagery is also cited...
Let's improve on our use of words(diction),structures and let's try to employ some sort of poetic sounds (rhymes and rhythm).punctuation too.
Over 10,I give you 5.

EverestdeBliu:

Impressive!
I like your mode and stream of consciousness. Your use of imagery is also cited...
Let's improve on our use of words(diction),structures and let's try to employ some sort of poetic sounds (rhymes and rhythm).punctuation too.
Over 10,I give you 5.

EverestdeBliu:

Impressive!
I like your mode and stream of consciousness. Your use of imagery is also cited...
Let's improve on our use of words(diction),structures and let's try to employ some sort of poetic sounds (rhymes and rhythm).punctuation too.
Over 10,I give you 5.

Thank you. I will work on that.

Why is laykorn shining his eyes?