Well, am new in nairaland.I have been reading and also enjoying some of the breadth taking books and threads in here and I was like why don't I also contribute my own quota to this great forum.Honestly am so happy to be fully part of you now.Am calling on everyone on this great forum to please read my story.So sure you will enjoy it.

It was a very hot day.The students of omega university were all sitting outside.Some were chatting away the time while others who were popularly known as bookworms were reading despite the hot sun.Charles was a final year student of law.His elder brother James was the state's commissioner of police.Charles family was not poor. Their father obi was a business man but from his childhood he craved for nothing except Education but since his father couldn't afford it,he was sent to Onitsha a popular to learn trade.Being a hardworking boy,he made it big.When obi had his two boys he decided to give them the best gift any parent could give to his child and that is Education.

Charles and his elder brother James attended the best university in the country. James was now the state commissioner of police.He lived in the Government Reserved Area(GRA) With his wife and their eight year old son junior." Daddy when is uncle Charles coming to visit?"asked junior
James was startled, when did junior come into the room?.He had been thinking about a lot of things and didnt notice the boy come in.
"Daddy?"junior called again
."sorry son,what were you saying"
Junior studied his father carefully he knew his dad had been thinking a lot recently. He looked at his dad and frowned."Daddy what is the problem hmm?you are not yourself at all".James was moved by the sad look in his son's eyes.The boy was just eight years old and yet,he thought and acted like a grown up.

"Don't worry son,I am all right do you need anything?"junior thought for a while before answering his father."yes Father I need you.I need my father back.Dad,you know you can always trust me,just tell me your problem".James wanted to laugh out loud."How can Junior help me?"he thought.Aloud he said"am okay son,now run to your room and do your homework". Junior nooded and left the room

Nairalanders I need to know how am doing.Pls I need your comment.Criticism is also needed so that at least I can know my flaws

pls you people should encourage me so that i can continue

Dear, would you mind to continue this piece?