Topic: I Lead, Y'all Follow

Instruction: Braggadocio stuff. Show some swag, and be strict with topic is all



Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Swag - - - 3 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points


Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 8 bars/16 Lines...(It shouldn't be less)

- Deadline is Saturday 24th Jan, 2015. Time: 8:30pm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

Goodluck!

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Sokrates,,,pls am gona be busy today.so lets post by 10pm today

RapAcme:
Sokrates,,,pls am gona be busy today.so lets post by 10pm today

i totally 4got bout this battle

Sokrates:
i totally 4got bout this battle

hmmm

Sokrates. . .dont forget we agreed to post before 6pm today

typing. . .freestyle sh1t. .socrats post too

RapAcme:
typing. . .freestyle sh1t. .socrats post too

i post soon as i type finish maybe 7pm

Quickly scripted, busy things but i hate to disappoint

i'm a global icon/
i'm like zeus, cos i own hades and his bro poseidon/
i roll far above your known horizon/
known to rap insane/
my punch lands faster than a crashing plane/
yo Bleep that
i am like an activist/
so when i speak niggas follow/
the thugs advocate/
so fucckk with me in a battle and choke in the 3rd and read from a note like a nerd just like canibus/
niggas look up to me, i'm the star that make em smile/
they neva look up to y'all like the sun in the sky/
fucckk that
i drop facts/
that'll kill these rug rats/
and fucckk that.
#Frees

There lives a town,the king is wicked and brute/he's an "Abacha" cos he took the money of the masses with sickest acts too/he's always in the shrine,he gat the illest charms. .oops/with that,his warriors are always winning the biggest battles//
the villagers are suffering/crying that they ar hungry/anyb0dy who dare complain will av his head cut till/hs life tryna c0py usein b0lt and run out!. .u got it?/yet to be born when all this was happening,was in my m0ther's w0mb balling/my mum was 1 of the king's wives. . .y0 its 9m0nths, call it a "battle yet to c0me" when i say am "about" to be b0rn!!/yeah ama lad to be str0ng/gats will be t0rn/c0s i br0t macs to this w0rld/to fight my dad to the c0re/the labour was hard,mum couldnt give birth to-me/c0s the gods are angry with my dad who's-king/but he went d0ing-things/to-see that i was b0rn. . . and guess what? I was the next authur pendragon cos the king's charms showed that i was b0rn by cul-tricks!!//
as the time goes i went to my dad's palace and confronted him to leave the throne/the freaken king gr0aned/and he was like s0n!,ar u cAlling a battle against me? Dont u know u are weak to tha b0nes?/and i was like yes,let the shít be told/and yes am your son,i mean jesus,u ar my dad,i mean joseph. .do the maths dad,u b0rn to serve ur s0n!!. . .u freaken bl0ke/see dad am a bad mafia/thats the fact here/so u better leave the throne or ah'l av ur mind pierced/leaving it with bad "tears"/then you'll die crying with your heart instead of your eyes,,yep!!//
the king was still sturborn and refused to leav. .so i gatherd troups/nd also br0uqht macs in/some say am not str0ng enough to rule,mehn my father should/but i always tell them, you'all ar merlins/thats the bad ass truth/cos with all your powers? Ur meant to serve me!!//
the battle gona be bitter/the villages hate my dad so they're always following me like its twitter/with charms my dad is iller/but i made sure what i gat is sicker/when my dad heard this? He surrendad.,and made me the king fast!/and to the land?/I brought the happiness and peace back/. . . . .lmfao, i guess my dad just "gave his life to me" cos he agreed to serve me for the rest of hs life!!!

Sorry for p0sting late,gat some pr0bs with my phone. . .kr0ne tag judges pls

Ice coulda won this with the way he started but he's not serious.

VGT: Rap

Smh! Open for votes

Emaprince
Ibime
Mikuz
Elymaxiimus
Guykhena
Krone
Loonat11kk

Please your votes are needed. Thanks

Nice

kr0ne:
Smh! Open for votes

Emaprince
Ibime
Mikuz
Elymaxiimus
Guykhena
Krone
Loonat11kk

Please your votes are needed. Thanks

more votes pls

MVT = TIE

icekid has to shake off this laziness... You never pen a complete verse.

ices's verse was short, but it was just too d0pe nd more on point with the topic than his opponent, i lead, y'all follow"(bragadoccio)

rapacme, i don't think it's everytime one has to take that narrative path.
For this topic which requires a bragadoccio scheme, i expected alot of hyperbols like ice was doing.
You had a few tho, but i feel that narrative path you took limited the amount of ideas you used.

"I lead, y'all follow" ...your approach to the topic limited your exploitation of it. You referenced only a king nd his son.
I mean, it's not only a king that could lead nd people would follow. You had a bragadoccio scheme, i expected you to take us through a wide range of instances.
But don't misquote me, your concept was nice, but it limited the exploitation of the topic. You didnt brag enough.

Ice was doing nice, but verse was too short.

Nice from both though

henhENHEN. . Iceskidd whats happening now? you never pen a complete verse?
you for beat rap hand down...
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breath in . .breath out!