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Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 1:08pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
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Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 1:55pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
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Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 2:23pm On Feb 04, 2015 |
Yes! Continue |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Cybershow(m): 8:23am On Feb 05, 2015 |
Oya cont. |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by timpaker(m): 12:28pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Wow! Great job Laykorn. Interesting story. Walahi, I wish I could pen things like this. |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 6:19pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
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Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 6:29pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
go on |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 7:13pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Great... Continue |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Cybershow(m): 7:40pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Nyc go on |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Cybershow(m): 7:40pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
NYC GO ON |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 7:46pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Okay, continue sire |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 8:15pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
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Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 8:30pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Cybershow, stuff46, simonhabby, Fatalveli, Bluestarry, please I need critiques sir. Timpaker, you can whine someone wo. I will throw a Thanksgiving party and pay Michael Jackson to play when I write something like 'The Convict'. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Cybershow(m): 9:08pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
Laykorn..ur punctuation are normal and the story z making sense wit dat o...bt let me kal oga stuff46 weda e has anitin to xay |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by LarrySun(m): 9:47pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
A very nice story; but you need to do something about those punctuations and some of the sentence constructions. Truly a nice job. Well done, sir. #Ayamlarrysun |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 10:11pm On Feb 05, 2015 |
LarrySun: you did'nt come out with your dictionary today? Its like he did not remember to add his suffix today, and tho you have remembered it. He is one of his kind. My guy, the story did not potray the title with these tho buh it was awesome. Work on puntuation and sentence construction as my oga said and maybe try re-edittinq before posting like your tosin's diary to make it clean and error free. With this i think your next story would be captivating like this one. Just stick to writing rules, always strive to give the best in you. |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 3:48pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
am loving this story. you are doing a great job |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 7:59pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
Laykorn, though this story is superb and I would have point out the critiques but I really don't understand it. Too many characters Punctuations Spacing Vocabs I'll kIp ConNeCteD |
Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by Nobody: 3:51pm On Feb 09, 2015 |
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Re: Gun, Bullet And Sacrifice - A Short Story by slap1(m): 4:52pm On Feb 09, 2015 |
I love this! |
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