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Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by Nobody: 3:36pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
spacefreak: Now, I'm suspecting you Is this an autobiography? 1 Like |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by Nobody: 3:38pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
Nice one though it was brief, i think you can broaden it and make it into a novel. You write very well, your descriptive and narrative style was superb. But... At least you should have mentioned what type of car Chiamaka drove. And then a little about what she does to earn a living,you mentioned something about her been more financially balanced than you,i was expecting you say what she really does. Conclusively,you acted quite rational. If am a male and an ex tells me we have a baby,i would experience _shock_doubt and i would love to see pictures of the baby before anything. ~my points may not be relevant,but as the saying goes 'each person is a king of his thoughts. Thats mine. Thumbs up! More ink to your pen |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by HumbledbYGrace(f): 3:39pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
No short story, the ladies in here will just have to have that pacemaker effect on you if that's what it takes to write this novel. |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by HumbledbYGrace(f): 3:41pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
Chinweblinkz:That's it! |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by spacefreak: 4:47pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
MzNelly: Lool hell no!. I wish it was. You know, having two independent women that loves you. And of course having a son. I don't have a son and I don't have women that love me. |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by spacefreak: 4:56pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
Chinweblinkz: Your opinion is very relevant. Thank you. He did experience shock and doubt, that's why he went to the restroom to clear his head. I should broaden it but Im a lazy writer. |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by spacefreak: 4:58pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
HumbledbYGrace: Lool Im not feeling it yet. I hope I feel it soon. |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by Nobody: 5:27pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
spacefreak: I could swear I felt relativity to the main character in question. All good tho 1 Like |
Re: Pacemaker - A Short Story by HumbledbYGrace(f): 6:17pm On Feb 08, 2015 |
spacefreak:hopefully...will be waiting. back @ you. |
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