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Incredible Man by tremie(f): 3:53pm On Mar 11, 2015
I saw this incredible man even though I wasn't looking. He came to show me the true meaning of friendship even though I wasn't prepared to see. He spoke kind words to me but I was tough with him. He taught me that people had different make-ups but could change if they wanted to. He said I was unique and he believed in me. I grew to appreciate his friendship and felt better every time I spoke to him. He became the bestie I never had. He spent most of his time talking to me and listening to my complaints, though he had a lot on his passionate mind. He taught me that I could eat less and still be happy. He feared I had NES and offered solution. He encouraged me at all times and he became the reason I wanted to finish anything I started.
Somehow, I knew he would leave someday to his better- half but I failed to let myself believe that. Soon, I came to realise that people come into our lives for a certain reason and after that, they go back to people who really need them. Its not going to be easy knowing that someone out there knows a lot about you but can't be as close as before. I knew I had to take a hard and fast decision, "he would still go, so why not now"?
It would take time forgetting him but a step they say begins a million miles. I rather walk and behave like the one I'm looking for, than wallow in self pity and be caught unawares.
Thank you incredible mansmiley
Re: Incredible Man by kingphilip(m): 12:45pm On Mar 25, 2015
is that the end??
Re: Incredible Man by Aspiregreat: 1:10pm On Mar 25, 2015
Don't tell me it's over kiss undecided
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 10:09am On Mar 26, 2015
kingphilip:
is that the end??
Umm.. He left.
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 10:15am On Mar 26, 2015
Aspiregreat:
Don't tell me it's over kiss undecided
Sadly it is dear smiley
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 10:40am On Mar 26, 2015
Wow!!

Short,precise and clear

Nice onesmiley
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 5:55pm On Mar 26, 2015
kitnah:
Wow!!

Short,precise and clear

Nice onesmiley
Thanks dear. Have read ur piece too.. I love it smiley

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Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 6:11pm On Mar 26, 2015
tremie:

Thanks dear. Have read ur piece too.. I love it smiley
Awww.....just what i needed

Thanks smiley

Keep reading o

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Re: Incredible Man by kingphilip(m): 8:18pm On Mar 26, 2015
tremie:

Umm.. He left.
when will u make a thriller
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 8:35pm On Mar 26, 2015
kingphilip:
when will u make a thriller
LOL.. I don't think I can dear, writing isn't really my stuff. I put together the piece above in a few minutes because that was how I felt @ that point.. Nothing to drive me.
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 8:38pm On Mar 26, 2015
tremie:

LOL.. I don't think I can dear, writing isn't really my stuff. I put together the piece above in a few minutes because that was how I felt @ that point.. Nothing to drive me.
Really??

We might write a short story together one day smiley
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 8:57pm On Mar 26, 2015
kitnah:

Really??

We might write a short story together one day smiley
Wow! That would be great! Looking forward to that..
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 9:00pm On Mar 26, 2015
tremie:

Wow! That would be great! Looking forward to that..
yeah!!

Once i'm through with my ongoing story
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 9:50pm On Mar 26, 2015
kitnah:

yeah!!

Once i'm through with my ongoing story
Can't wait grin
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 7:25pm On Apr 19, 2015
tremie:

Can't wait grin
Please can I post a sequel to 'the incredible man'??

Awaiting your reply
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 8:09pm On Apr 19, 2015
~~Sorry tremie,your storry entered my head and I felt like doing this,we could make it a short story,if you want??~~

Since he left,I could still perceive his masculine cologne,I could still hear his rich baritone voice constantly on repeat in my head telling me 'I'm unique',I could still remember his manly athletic physique because it's stamped to my head.
With those thoughts,I entered my room and said a short prayer,asking God to protect him.
I ransacked my wardrobe,I quickly wore my fitted denim jacket with a shorts. I needed distraction to get over the bitter taste,I'm feeling.
So I delved my hands in my jacket's pocket with earplugs in my head,playing a cool solemn song,I took a white Ink with me.I went across the street to a deserted quiet place. I just want to be alone.
When I got to my destination,I climbed to the highest peak/summit in the forest,I sat down for some minutes,letting the cool breeze blows through my bobbed hair.
I spent close to twenty minutes on the summit,something I couldn't do before because of fear,but this amazing man kicked that bit'ch away from me.
I stood there admiring the works of nature,the dune,the flowing lake,the ever blue cloud and the green valley,the birds that moves in unison,such as a beautiful sight to behold.
I painted the mountain with the inscription "He left",and I left the forest and started walking back home,feeling relieved and better.
While I walked back home,I suddenly start to think in a negative way.
'Will he remember me??"
"Will he come back for me??"
I heard my subconscious answering the questions "No,dummy,he won't remember you,because nothing lasts forever"
A tear trickled down my face and,suddenly overcome with sadness,I bursted into tears. The pigeons,startled by the noise,took to the air in a flurry of flapping wings.
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 5:01pm On Apr 26, 2015
kitnah:

Please can I post a sequel to 'the incredible man'??

Awaiting your reply

Oh my! Kitnah i so love it!!! Im starting to flow... I feel like writing ...

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Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 5:13pm On Apr 26, 2015
tremie:


Oh my! Kitnah i so love it!!! Im starting to flow... I feel like writing ...
Oya write jor,anything anyhow

The thing entered my head ni o

Waiting patiently
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 10:31am On Apr 30, 2015
Tremie,I've replied your mail
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 7:56am On May 02, 2015
Oya you guys should stop writing about me am back. smiley
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 12:17pm On May 02, 2015
Bennyzino:
Oya you guys should stop writing about me am back. smiley
Tell tremie o
She's the one delaying
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 1:30pm On May 02, 2015
kitnah:

Tell tremie o
She's the one delaying

Kitnah I noticed you are good at poet, drama and play.
What ur discipline
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 1:33pm On May 02, 2015
Tremie am beginning to have this mixed feelings u didn't put that piece togeda all by yourself.

Else

Prove it by writing another one or continue the previous one. tongue
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 4:28pm On May 02, 2015
kitnah:

Tell tremie o
She's the one delaying

My dear,, IV bin running around for nysc stuff.. going to camp on Tuesday, hv to be prepared. I'm really very sorry but once in settled il do something plsss.. Cn we post the one I sent u?? Really confused.. Pls bear with me..
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 4:36pm On May 02, 2015
Bennyzino:
Tremie am beginning to have this mixed feelings u didn't put that piece togeda all by yourself.

Else

Prove it by writing another one or continue the previous one. tongue

It's ok to have mixed feelings..
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 7:41pm On May 02, 2015
tremie:


My dear,, IV bin running around for nysc stuff.. going to camp on Tuesday, hv to be prepared. I'm really very sorry but once in settled il do something plsss.. Cn we post the one I sent u?? Really confused.. Pls bear with me..
Ehyaa
It's ok,I understand
Just increase the length of that one
Goodluck in camp smiley
Make sure you take care of yourself,so gbo??
Bennyzino:
Tremie am beginning to have this mixed feelings u didn't put that piece togeda all by yourself.
Else
Prove it by writing another one or continue the previous one. tongue
Haba!!
She wrote it herself na
She's just busy and all that
Pls bare with her
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 7:52pm On May 02, 2015
tremie:


It's ok to have mixed feelings..

Buh I love your piece.. It felt so real or was it real?
All the best in camp.
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 11:49pm On May 02, 2015
kitnah:

Ehyaa
It's ok,I understand
Just increase the length of that one
Goodluck in camp smiley
Make sure you take care of yourself,so gbo??

Haba!!
She wrote it herself na
She's just busy and all that
Pls bare with her

Sure I would dear.. I'd complete that one and send to u.. Then if its ok il upload. Thanks for everything + u inspire me alot kiss

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Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 11:50pm On May 02, 2015
Bennyzino:


Buh I love your piece.. It felt so real or was it real?
All the best in camp.


Thanks dear.lol to an extent
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 5:57am On May 03, 2015
tremie:


Thanks dear.lol to an extent

I can't be that man. That would be pretence.
But I can be me.
Humorous, Intelligent, Empathetic, strong, humble caring and romantic.
Re: Incredible Man by Nobody: 6:38am On May 03, 2015
tremie:


Sure I would dear.. I'd complete that one and send to u.. Then if its ok il upload. Thanks for everything + u inspire me alot kiss
Honoured,I am
Thank you!!!
Re: Incredible Man by tremie(f): 1:27pm On May 03, 2015
Bennyzino:


I can't be that man. That would be pretence.
But I can be me.
Humorous, Intelligent, Empathetic, strong, humble caring and romantic.

Lol.. Don't stop being you please..

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