Good Day, Nairalander. This is a fiction story. Abeokuta To Lagos My First Story on Literature Section. The Story unfolds

“Iam going to lagos, Iam going to lagos”.
**Sweating like a valentine’s goat**.. I jumped up from my bed
like I just received a call from barrack obama telling me to
come to white hood. Ohh my people, guess
what? It was a dream. I didn’t remember
what I saw in that
dream but something was just telling me
“Go to lagos, go to lagos” Asif someone is
waiting to give me
money. I then told myself I will go to lagos even though that was
my 1st time of going to that place called LAGOS.
Should I tell my family members about
this new plan? Should I tell my best friend
Anjola?Should I tell my
gf Bisi? All these questions kept coming to my mind but the
best answer I could give was “Iam
going to lagos”. I decided not to tell anyone because
they wouldn’t help by giving me money or follow me to
lagos.

Different thoughts about this lagos
unplanned journey started popping up even though I wasn’t listening to “POP” by Drsid but I knew God
will win so I played
“GodWin” by Korede bello because even if
enemies throw “Kataput” it won’t touch me. I couldn’t
stop being anxious
and curious about whatever I was going
to meet in lagos, don’t know where Iam going
in lagos but I just wanted to go so I decided to pick a Thursday for my
unplanned journey to lagosand didn’t tell anyone about it. Thank God I knew where my
mummy put her money, I rushed inside her room on Wednesday night to pick ( not steal, anything for my mum is for me, so? ) I picked up 2000k from her purse
( will she know about
this? Mscheww I didn’t even care) all was on my mind was lagos. To Be Continued

You need to restructure this story. It make too much sense than you allowing some rules to make people not comment. Oya, work on the lapses and gbam story go dey sweet us for belle.