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Rate This My Lyric by PasD(m): 10:04am On Apr 13, 2015 |
Yesterday or so, someone posted his lyrics here on NL. I went though it critically and foundout it lacked rhymes and other vital musical ingredients (although the melody I did not hear). So today I decided to post one of my lyrics so that fellow songcan criticize me too. Music is a funny thing you know. It sounds good in the writer's ears but crap in readers lips. But the truth is that good music is good music hooo haaa! TITLE: YOU'RE THE ONE Verse1: You're the one to stop the pain You're the one to bring the rain You're the one to put the smile in ur face Oh yes you're the one You're the one to break the chains You're the one to start the change You're the one to set the colours in ur way Oh yes you're ther one Choros: I'm here to tell you that you're the one I'm here to bring to u that power I'm here to tell you that I'm your fan And you are my number one Verse2: You're the one to end the war Youer the one to change the world You're the one that we are all waiting for Oh yes you are! You're the one to make the choice Let the whole world hear your voice You're the one to tell the story of your life Oh yes you are! Bridge: Pictures lie, in them we smile but deep inside we cry Memories fly, and come back at night, when we are all at war, you're the one to change the world Choros and fade (modulated/coas) |
Re: Rate This My Lyric by PasD(m): 10:07am On Apr 13, 2015 |
Just be sincere. |
Re: Rate This My Lyric by NeduLuiZ(m): 10:16am On Apr 13, 2015 |
8/10. Weldone. Wud pos ma lyrics soon |
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