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King Of Lies! by laideo(f): 7:05pm On Sep 12, 2006 |
his praises all sugar coated and sweet u are the most beautiful,he says and turns to the other gurl "u too are beautiful , my dear" my black sisi am fondly called she's yellow sisi as soon as i turn skin, like that of the yellow paw paw lips as sucullent as the sweetest orange eyes shinier than a miliion stars buttocks fuller than the fat woman's waist slimmer than a bamboo stick so convincing. yet he lies thru hes teeth all deceit,candy coated lips mr double talk. dont believe his lies even if he swears to the skies he'll butter u up on both sides but if ur smart enough take every word with a pinch of salt the king of lies flee from him n be wise, |
Re: King Of Lies! by hotangel2(f): 7:20pm On Sep 12, 2006 |
I say WORD. Good poem, did u write it? P.S: A little bit of compliment doesn't hurt anyone. Accept the compliments, just dnt let it get inside your head. |
Re: King Of Lies! by laideo(f): 11:50am On Sep 13, 2006 |
first of all, how have u been girlie, been missing in action on nairaland, missed ur posts. yeah i wrote it!!!! thnx for the feedback. much luv! |
Re: King Of Lies! by kniyi: 5:39pm On Sep 15, 2006 |
that piece is a load of bullshit.i advice that u take up a poetry lesson.better luck next time. |
Re: King Of Lies! by laideo(f): 11:44am On Sep 16, 2006 |
for a while,i was wonderin where the haters at? and i was surprised someone hadn't criticised my shit yet. and am happy u came along.although am pretty sure ur ass aint no authority on whats good poetry or not but ur just expressing urself. i might not like it, but hell! its ur opinion. |
Re: King Of Lies! by mukina2: 11:48am On Sep 16, 2006 |
some nice/crazy shiiiiiiit you got here |
Re: King Of Lies! by Orikinla(m): 4:55pm On Sep 16, 2006 |
Very good satirical poem and would be best for performance poetry. But it reads like an uncompleted work. Add more pepper and salt. Lies never end. |
Re: King Of Lies! by mukina2: 8:50pm On Sep 16, 2006 |
damn roght male lies never end |
Re: King Of Lies! by hotangel2(f): 4:06am On Sep 18, 2006 |
@ laide, yeah i have been good. Ohh my sister, i've been and I'm too busy to be a post LovePeddler. Ohh u wrote it? Good one girl. How u been? |
Re: King Of Lies! by vodkat: 8:36am On Sep 24, 2006 |
nice stuff |
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