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Untitled by noble4d(m): 12:14pm On May 31, 2015
Can someone give this poem a title?...

In the city of despair,
There lives a man unconscious
Swimming in blooding
And bathing in tears.

He had lived for centuries
Begging for food to eat
Ranging from abode to offices
Just to be free.

He is indeed,
An embodiment of patience
Optimistic that,
The years of struggle will be over.

Here comes a new dawn
The birds prayed for.
He hope, he'll smile again
And be free.
Re: Untitled by joseph1832(m): 7:40am On Jun 01, 2015
"Patience is virtue" sounds like a good title. Howdy noble4d. Been a while.

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Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 9:42am On Jun 01, 2015
joseph1832:
"Patience is virtue" sounds like a good title. Howdy noble4d. Been a while.

Yah Bro, ave bin good, How about you?
Re: Untitled by joseph1832(m): 9:44am On Jun 01, 2015
noble4d:

Yah Bro, ave bin good, How about you?
I've been better.

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Re: Untitled by theunusualmoon(m): 1:24pm On Nov 22, 2015
Hope

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Re: Untitled by Bamibor: 12:10pm On Nov 24, 2015
The poem is quite deep and thought provoking. Several lines had me trying to decipher what the writer was thinking, his mood. Was it despair?
"he had lived for centuries... "
Was it hopelessness?
"...a man unconscious"
Was it hope?
" here comes a new dawn"
Perhaps it's a mixture of all of these, which man usually has to experience in one short lifetime.
Giving it a fitting title, is not an easy task sir.
A really nice piece. Cheers!
Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 8:30pm On Nov 25, 2015
Bamibor:
The poem is quite deep and thought provoking. Several lines had me trying to decipher what the writer was thinking, his mood. Was it despair?
"he had lived for centuries... "
Was it hopelessness?
"...a man unconscious"
Was it hope?
" here comes a new dawn"
Perhaps it's a mixture of all of these, which man usually has to experience in one short lifetime.
Giving it a fitting title, is not an easy task sir.
A really nice piece. Cheers!

Alryt Bro tanks smiley
Re: Untitled by BobUg28(m): 9:27am On Nov 28, 2015
I like the poem. Deep and insightful.

I suppose this appellation; TRAVAIL AND DESPAIR will do
Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 10:54am On Nov 28, 2015
BobUg28:
I like the poem. Deep and insightful.

I suppose this appellation; TRAVAIL AND DESPAIR will do

Alryt Bro, tanks.

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Re: Untitled by Nobody: 6:56am On Nov 29, 2015
Swimming in blooding
Re: Untitled by noble4d(m): 8:05am On Nov 29, 2015
Rainess:
Swimming in blooding

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