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Bliss Of Love-my Very Own rhymes by Giitheon(m): 10:44am On Jun 01, 2015 |
Oh boy'do i love rhymes.I am not a literature student,but with the little i know,have i written this piece..... BLISS OF LOVE.. My heart skipped a beat, as though i was to fall in a pit. When i saw those beautiful eyes made of diamonds that sparkle like the morning skies. Gradually as she came closer, I tried to draw away from her. Though i had love deep down for her, I just wasn't the type that could stand and talk. Lets take a walk! she said. As i attempted to storm away. Oh! i grinned in reply,and the exit way seemed far away. But she held my hands,taking my grin for a yes. As her skin touched mine, Great heat as from a mine- stormed my heart. Oh what a beautiful thing love is; And the feeling is simly a bliss. |
Re: Bliss Of Love-my Very Own rhymes by GeneralQuamdeen: 10:47am On Jun 01, 2015 |
You've really tried.. but this is more of a song that a poem.. 1 Like |
Re: Bliss Of Love-my Very Own rhymes by Giitheon(m): 10:57am On Jun 01, 2015 |
GeneralQuamdeen:noted! and modified. |
Re: Bliss Of Love-my Very Own rhymes by GeneralQuamdeen: 1:27pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
Giitheon:Keep it up.. but let me tell you.. some people will steal your good work here. 1 Like |
Re: Bliss Of Love-my Very Own rhymes by Jamzig1(m): 7:19pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
love dis 1 Like |
Re: Bliss Of Love-my Very Own rhymes by Giitheon(m): 9:43pm On Jun 01, 2015 |
Jamzig1:thanks man |
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