A cousin of mine just dropped this..and it's a fairly OK song but I think it's not there yet...so I want y'all to listen and just write out what you think...go real hard...it's difficult telling it to him myself...so please listen.

http://soundcloud.com/famujimi-tobi/shade-feat-dr-franz

Hope you will like this
Song Title: 50% it will only appeal to one ethnic group even though you have some igbo line
Song Chorus :100% nice,Catchy an Sticky..meaning its easy to remember and recite.
Song composition: 40 % ..I dont know which part you took but the rap is really whack and the rapper needs more practice and probably needs a style.At around 2:44 the rapper doesn't know what to say again .
Song Arrangement:60%..The beat are not arrange properly..It missed during a roll.
Over all:75%
Remark
You/Your cousin needs to probably take the song to a better producer who can do well with beats and mixing.Add heavy kicks and subs (good for club)..And if you paid the producer no need to say his name..You wasted 18 Sec on that..An average human has less than 10 Sec to change his/her mind.once the beat drops start the flow leave all those shoutout for your outro..
My honest opinion..

www.naijadjpool.com

Stexy:
A cousin of mine just dropped this..and it's a fairly OK song but I think it's not there yet...so I want y'all to listen and just write out what you think...go real hard...it's difficult telling it to him myself...so please listen.

http://soundcloud.com/famujimi-tobi/shade-feat-dr-franz

honestly,i gotta say i like the song,but your cousin needs to know that all that s/o shit is outdated,just get right to it..doesnt matter if the beat hasnt dropped yet...you change the tune when the beat has dropped

trust me am a professional

if he needs a songwriter

songwriterkadiri@yahoo.com

naijadjpool:
Hope you will like this
Song Title: 50% it will only appeal to one ethnic group even though you have some igbo line
Song Chorus :100% nice,Catchy an Sticky..meaning its easy to remember and recite.
Song composition: 40 % ..I dont know which part you took but the rap is really whack and the rapper needs more practice and probably needs a style.At around 2:44 the rapper doesn't know what to say again .
Song Arrangement:60%..The beat are not arrange properly..It missed during a roll.
Over all:75%
Remark
You/Your cousin needs to probably take the song to a better producer who can do well with beats and mixing.Add heavy kicks and subs (good for club)..And if you paid the producer no need to say his name..You wasted 18 Sec on that..An average human has less than 10 Sec to change his/her mind.once the beat drops start the flow leave all those shoutout for your outro..
My honest opinion..

www.naijadjpool.com

do you make beats?

I don't

Stexy:
do you make beats?