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I Take Heart by gtim4uall: 2:44am On Aug 25, 2015 |
I TAKE HEART So I will lay here And take heart I will lay broken I will wear out Like the wreath By the graveland And pointing silence An age towards Graceland I will lay black Just to take heart Bestow no hope I love this grope Besides hell belly Please set my dinner And Take her yonder I hate this murder Oh!"stop this wander, Heart grows fonder I guess she never ponder So I take heart Wrecked and lay back 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: I Take Heart by llaykorn: 12:51am On Aug 27, 2015 |
There's a slight typographical error in the last line of your third stanza. Please do a check on that. As simple as this poem presents itself to the naked eye, it actually cloaks a beautifully and complexly structured piece of art. I think I can indulge myself and lay the blame on the complex structure for not quite being able to make meaning out of your second stanza. I'd really appreciate an analysis, brother. Above all, this is a beautiful piece that strikes. And, gtim4uall, have you ever thought about punctuating poetry? |
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