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Your voilce my enchanter

Your silence, deafening

Open your mouth and confess to me

Please sing your usual

Let me toss it around to create an echo

So I can draw birds to you; to this room

The way you look at me through the mirror

The way you Raise your hair to a ponytail

Keeps waking something after another

I want you to go out more

but your company is the best place to be

No No No No

Who have hurt you this time?

I can't tell the difference between your singing and crying

Not until your tears stream an awaken of frost

Will you ever know you are creating something?

Will you
ever realise am hurting too as the birds?

If I was huMaN

If I were with a heART
aNd could talk

SomeHOW your being transforms me

maYBE I do own a hearT

... to be this moved

If I was flesh

If I had a soul

I could fill in your love puzzle

With the secrets best noted

I could move you

My consciousness you gave birth to

These yearnings you impregnate me with

But afterall ...

Nothing else beside a castle

But if I could change

But if I could demolish mySELF

So from WALLS become dusT

Be so, that I'm breathe upon

To wake up a boy

Handwritting of love

Created Flesh for you

To live one with you

with no tears
nor Pain to disgust

All wishes aside...

But my unbecoming love ...

Am just a wall

Only Eve was meant to wake a human

Why Can't I Understand this piece?

Cc: llaykorn

JigsawKillah:
Why Can't I Understand this piece?


Cc: llaykorn

u know i shudnt be explainin my own piece...buh i think it is expressly obvious what d piece is about..anyway i ll av 2do beta..d piece was inspired by celine dion' if wall could talk'.. Thanks 4taking time.

written:

u know i shudnt be explainin my own piece...buh i think it is expressly obvious what d piece is about..anyway i ll av 2do beta..d piece was inspired by celine dion' if wall could talk'.. Thanks 4taking time.

it's actually cause I can't relate with love. Not everybody is a poet, sometimes you might need to explain to some.

The message is quite simple too but i find it hard understanding some love concepts.

PS


I'm not a fan of Celine Dion sef. . . Only pretend I understand her when I'm with the female folks lol

written:

u know i shudnt be explainin my own piece...buh i think it is expressly obvious what d piece is about..anyway i ll av 2do beta..d piece was inspired by celine dion' if wall could talk'.. Thanks 4taking time.

Actually you should, for the benefit of those who aren't poetic.

JigsawKillah:
PS


I'm not a fan of Celine Dion sef. . . Only pretend I understand her when I'm with the female folks lol

atleast u agree them female folks are ones spinning d globe 4 us men--whether science findings like it or yes,doesn't mata..wrote d piece 7yrs ago..on the premises of"beauti4 but unlucky"...some 'angels' are just plague that way

joseph1832:
Actually you should, for the benefit of those who aren't poetic.

noted..thanks..

Still wandering in the forest of ignorance about this poem

emaculate99:
Still wandering in the forest of ignorance about this poem

must mean its insufficient...and not enough element to merge the subjects b4 ending it...just dont like lenthy piece..i ll try...the setting of dis piece...is a very lonely lady who had failed at love and now mostly in solitary,cornered in her 4walled room..here her wall takes to protesting, wishing..buh are wishes horses? I ll hav to create a conectn

Llaykorn I see you viewing

Been a while

JigsawKillah:
Llaykorn I see you viewing


Been a while

Bros, e no easy. How have you been?

llaykorn:

Bros, e no easy. How have you been?

cool. . . Wetin dey sup?