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Ladies Of Babylon by Nobody: 1:06pm On Nov 07, 2015
Ladies Of Babylon

White turned black
Eyes shut down
Like a switch was off

Darkness fled
Consciousness adjusted
The earth yet spins

Plastic smiles
Made of rubber
Robbed man's engine

Called by its name;
Lively unconsciousness
Devil also's loved

Wrinkled mien
Portraying innocence
Stereotype of'em all

Samson already died
Next in queue,
Hitler of your own

After World War 3
Believe again
Be robbed again

Dimples at first sight
Pimples at last fight
The ladies of Babylon

~Agba Sixtus
©2015

Cc gracile

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Re: Ladies Of Babylon by gracile(f): 10:36pm On Nov 07, 2015
TheAgba:
Ladies Of Babylon
White turned black Eyes shut down Like a switch was off
Darkness fled Consciousness adjusted The earth yet spins
Plastic smiles Made of rubber Robbed man's engine
Called by its name; Lively unconsciousness Devil also's loved
Wrinkled mien Portraying innocence Stereotype of'em all
Samson already died Next in queue, Hitler of your own
After World War 3 Believe again Be robbed again
Dimples at first sight Pimples at last fight The ladies of Babylon
~Agba Sixtus ©2015
Cc gracile
7th & 8th line, methinks is tautology 13th line(mien) is a typo ryt? aside that and the fact that its very encoded, its a beautiful poem cheesy
Re: Ladies Of Babylon by Nobody: 4:08am On Nov 08, 2015
gracile:

7th & 8th line, methinks is tautology
13th line(mien) is a typo ryt?
aside that and the fact that its very encoded, its a beautiful poem cheesy
It is "mien" ,it ain't a typo .

"Plastic smile " is just to say the smile is a fake one.
"Made of rubber" is to say the smile is flexible and of any rubber attribute . Also it's seductive, so could rob a man's heart .


What do you think ?
Re: Ladies Of Babylon by Nobody: 4:13am On Nov 08, 2015
gracile:

7th & 8th line, methinks is tautology
13th line(mien) is a typo ryt?
aside that and the fact that its very encoded, its a beautiful poem cheesy
Thanks ...by the way, I started writing it about 10AM and got to finish it before 11AM yesterday.
Re: Ladies Of Babylon by Nobody: 8:59am On Nov 20, 2015
TheAgba I'm following you. I like your poetry.
Re: Ladies Of Babylon by Nobody: 10:19am On Nov 20, 2015
miclez:
TheAgba I'm following you. I like your poetry.
Wow !
Thanks
Re: Ladies Of Babylon by gracile(f): 5:23pm On Nov 20, 2015
TheAgba:

It is "mien" ,it ain't a typo .

"Plastic smile " is just to say the smile is a fake one.
"Made of rubber" is to say the smile is flexible and of any rubber attribute . Also it's seductive, so could rob a man's heart .


What do you think ?
ok then, i think its impressive!
by d way, good day, been a while cheesy
Re: Ladies Of Babylon by Nobody: 5:42pm On Nov 20, 2015
gracile:

ok then, i think its impressive!
by d way, good day, been a while cheesy

Sure it has been . Hope you are cool ?
Re: Ladies Of Babylon by gracile(f): 5:44pm On Nov 20, 2015
TheAgba:

Sure it has been . Hope you are cool ?
yea, very well

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