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Misplaced Priority... by joseph1832(m): 8:05pm On Dec 30, 2015
She's in the arms of the man
Who charms and scams
Her of her virtue and stature



She was in the arms of the man
Who honor and adores
Her for her virtue and stature



She chose the man
Who charmed and scammed
Her of her virtue and stature



Cos he was a smooth talker
Who was a good stalker
Stalked her till he conquered her



Now she wants the man
Who honors and adores
Her for her virtue and stature



For she realized he's a man
With honor and stature
A gentleman extra ordinaire...

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Re: Misplaced Priority... by emaculate99: 8:12pm On Dec 30, 2015
joseph1832:


She's in the arms of the man Who charms and scams Her of her virtue and stature


She was in the arms of the man Who honor and adores Her for her virtue and stature


She chose the man Who charmed and scammed Her of her virtue and stature


Cos he was a smooth talker Who was a good stalker Stalked her till he conquered her


Now she wants the man Who honors and adores Her for her virtue and stature


For she realized he's a man With honor and stature A gentleman extra ordinaire...
A true description of some human beings
Re: Misplaced Priority... by joseph1832(m): 8:16pm On Dec 30, 2015
emaculate99:
A true description of some human beings
I'd rather say some women. LOL.
Re: Misplaced Priority... by whitecloth: 8:25pm On Dec 30, 2015
I understand the concept of your poem, but you have to work on it.
Re: Misplaced Priority... by emaculate99: 9:46pm On Dec 30, 2015
joseph1832:
I'd rather say some women. LOL.
I am scared of the feminists that's why I changed it Lol....
Re: Misplaced Priority... by joseph1832(m): 10:26pm On Dec 30, 2015
emaculate99:
I am scared of the feminists that's why I changed it Lol....

Let em come. I aint scared of em. LOL.
Re: Misplaced Priority... by joseph1832(m): 10:29pm On Dec 30, 2015
whitecloth:
I understand the concept of your poem, but you have to work on it.
Poems don't have concept mister, themes or mood is what poems have, may be that's why you don't understand it.
Re: Misplaced Priority... by whitecloth: 7:16am On Dec 31, 2015
joseph1832:
Poems don't have concept mister, themes or mood is what poems have, may be that's why you don't understand it.
Thanks a lot.

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