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Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by slap1(m): 8:13pm On Dec 30, 2015 |
Dedicated to kizzykeziah |
Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by slap1(m): 8:14pm On Dec 30, 2015 |
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Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by Nobody: 8:35pm On Dec 30, 2015 |
Aside the little typos, I found the piece beautiful. Good work op (sorry I'm a little too enthusiastic cos flash fiction is my forte) |
Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by slap1(m): 9:16pm On Dec 30, 2015 |
Suigeneris93: Thanks. Could you highlight the typos? I didn't go through it properly. |
Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by kizzykeziah: 9:35pm On Dec 30, 2015 |
slap1: Awwn, I'm touched. Fhank you feli much (lol). So in my opinion, I'd rather you had the first two paragraphs in past tense. More like a reminisce of what had led her there. BTW, I hope she walked out alive. There's much more to a foetus than a mixture of blood clot and water. Ending the foetus does more harm than good, biologically, emotionally and psychologically. |
Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by Nobody: 9:37pm On Dec 30, 2015 |
slap1: |
Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by slap1(m): 8:22pm On Jan 02, 2016 |
^ Thanks |
Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by slap1(m): 9:46pm On Apr 30, 2016 |
Lalasticlala, Mynd44, please do me a favour and delete this thread. I submitted a modified version of it for a competition and forgot I've posted it here. The plagiarism software might detect it and do me in. Please, abeg. Thanks in anticipation. |
Re: Breaking Loose (a Flash Fiction) by slap1(m): 7:36pm On May 18, 2016 |
Mynd44, Lalasticlala, Seun...kindly delete this thread for me, please. I have stated my reasons above. Thanks. |
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