RULES

40lines
deadline: 20th August 2009, 7:00pm
i'll set up a poll and other netcz will vote who they think is better.

WARNING

i put everything in my verses,
so if i hit you anyway you dont like,
you're welcome to do same to me.

Make una cut the lines from 40 to a more manageable 24. . . . the spambot might ban you if you post too many lines. . . . thats how I got banned yesterday trying to post my verse against Sauron. . .

here i go . . .


Prince ?. . . i bring an end to his madness
this retarded/ motherfucker'z about to vanish//
i tarnish/ images/ i kill with vileness
regardless/ what the fuckz yer business//
if i'm insane/ i'm Hussein/ Resurrected
terrorism re-birthed/ nairaland'z most demented//
here to perfect/ the ''unperfected''/ i'm elected
my demo/crazy/ album boils in the studio//
but yer lines/lazy/ this nigga fuckz wiv a Love Machine
through the asshole/ motherfucker'z a bimbo//
so he fuckz the old/ from 80 and above
he a sight to behold/ when he rockin them poles//
strip teasing/ his old popz thinks he appealing
so he[i] feel[/i] him/ ''suck my di.ck son/ i love the feeling''//
perversion/ is an addiction/ the family tradition
he is a product of his daddy's abomination//
a union/ between the father and the daughter
brought about the life of this motherfucker//
i'm sick in the head/ its why i murder
my lyrical disorder/ put ya life asunder//
i bust yer brains wiv my revolver
i'm a Legend/ John calls me the Evolver//
take you to Russia/ drown you in the Volga
wiv my mouth i'll still spit vulgar//
if yo' bitch'z my lover/ i'ma disfigure her vulva
nigga/ i got more Rhymes than Busta//
i'm a monsta/ the energy i muster
knockz you out/ like you gulped a bottle of vodka//
me your headache/ you won't cure me wiv a Boska
i'm a mountain/ live Everest/ i Everlast/ like we boxers//
and you can't move me/ with faith/ the seed of a mustard
you musta . . .heard of me/ i'm a hustler//
manickal'z a malefactor/ he got the x-factor
i the chiropractor/ your bones i'll fracture//
your life ends/ your soul ready for the rapture
you a prince/ so your motherfuckn crown/ i'll capture//

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i hope i didn't make sense.
that was the fuckn plan.

ibime.

thanks for the intel . . .

Prince. . .

i posted 36 verses, try to do same.

but if you cant, 30 will do fine 

holla back.

@manickal
i'm a holla back today{evening} or morrow.let me put things together

@ manickal


truth is I'm shining, from the top, my light expose u fakers/
Detail it after first line,like second page of sun news paper/
My bullet sprays rain off ur punchlines/
So why save'em for rainy days?shoulda known it's my lunch time/
My rhyme's sassy, whether in disses or in fashion/
I construct lines that moved u,he's like;this is contraption/
Had u whores 'catching' bullets from gats like 'fielders'/
easily how it [i]killed her[/i]/ just don't tempt this rap[i] builder[/i]/
I spit CO that jutted ur eyes and u staggered at a time/
had u dieing, friends taught ur looking daggers at my line/

How come manickal showed up when bars I needed was mykalis'/
My mistake left a gruesome picture here,[i]regardless[/i]/
I'm "Lil"' guy built with force of 'Rooney', call me 'wayne'/
Can't see me even if u girrafs with ur neck[i] craned[/i]/
'Eye lid' dope squad that add murder to my rhymes' 'make-up'/
watch ur spine brake-up/ once u swine wake-up/
Even at night,I know where ur face at,won't lotto-win this/
'Flash-gun',give u a head 'shot' to avoid any 'photo'-finish/
Can't find 'wande' at the 'coal'-face where I bring 'more heats'/
With the fire I spit on raw beats/ I'm a bleeping war kid/

I 'calculate' to win fair and 'square' with my almighty[i] 'formula'[/i]/
Cos youse my qoutient,lookin angular/ i grip ur jugular/
My proof is ocular/ choke ur throat with a spatula/
Hive of body stitches can't cure the ripped-off scapula/
Hip hop is ur worst hobby,sorry it was said bluntly/
snipers aim with gun,labels got money,they all[i] head hunt me[/i]/
My world's deep like the sea/ ur disses are like oil slick/
I'm sick to 100 degree C/ so my rhymes always boil quick/
Don't be deceived,if it's watery,then it's scarding/
Spit it 16 times on this daft, he died, I discard him/




To lame heads like sauron
FLASH-GUN is a kind of camera used at night

I think the above lines can possibly demote sauron to[i] koboland[/i]

@ IBIME

hey man! I mostly need ur analysis dawg. where u pick them mistakes, let me know,
I mean both on the arrangements etc.

@ y'all
u can start saying ur opinion and analysis. and the winner._{honestly i wanted to invite mykali, but the two names confuses me.no prob though.}

Nice one guys. . . . Ill be back on this later. . . .

hehehehehe. . . . . I give this to Prince. . . . . here's the reason why:

Even at night,I know where ur face at,won't lotto-win this/
'Flash-gun',give u a head 'shot' to avoid any 'photo'-finish/

snipers aim with gun,labels got money,they all head hunt me/


Those two lines caught me more than most. . .



Breaking it down. . . .


Manickal had the easier flow. . . but I am not a fan of vulgar lines. . . . although I liked this line:

i'm a mountain/ live Everest/ i Everlast/ like we boxers//


Princes verse was more witty, and more subliminal. . . also covered a wider range of topics and metaphors. . .and he used them to punch.

Vote goes to Prince.

mailmalc:

Ah! Who's Prince 82 Damn! he won this battle wiv a long margin. His lines almost got me finkin Ibime did ghost write it lol

@Ibime, u've rily done well on this thread . . . would be anticipatin a short battle wiv u probably after u must hav battled Malthuss, Hybrid X, Menike, Wordsmith nd Alexpissu These ar the best netcees hurr . includin u though nd myself. Y'all got ma respeckt! Prince 82 inclusive

you can say ibime ghost write it dawg.lol. the fact is that, i been silently following his posts and battles.
so i'm learning from him.I gbadu him pass. In my next battle,it's gonna be more interesting than this. and I'm hoping to make it an elite. until then,thanx for the recognition and GIVE IT UP TO IBIME.

you can say ibime ghost write it dawg.lol. the fact is that, i been silently following his posts and battles.

lol i tot as much. I also learnt from Gbade X (wordsmith) nd Jackal (now Sauron) The Wordsmith vs. Hybrid X Battle really taught me alot too . . and then came Naijafan lol

shit.
i knew i shouldnt have been that evil with those lines.
but that's how my fuckin mind works.
okay, i'll put the poll up now.
let the votes begin

@prince
seriously, i was thinkin you'se one of them newbies
that were lookin for a challenge
didnt expect you to bring isht this dope
how 'bout a second round?
hmmm?

VOTING ENDS JULY 27TH.

mykali:

Manick . . .

if someone told me you could string 36lines together i would murder the person. you were never able to spit 10bars let alone 18 against me. this shows you are improving.

okay, even Cobhams will agree with Ibime, Malc and i that Prince's verses were better.
i dont think i had a chance against him either.
he drilled holes, a lot of them, in your verse.
i liked some of your lines man. i've always known you to be explicit. so i aint surprised.
but my vote goes to Prince.
maybe you'd do better on ya 2nd verse.

I think y'all should do the voting on the availlable verse. we don't need going extra lenght trying to prove shit.hence spiting watery rhymes. may be if u think u got shit locked,then we can lock heads.