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Silence by mused: 12:15pm On Mar 19, 2016
I am sorry mom,
I never believed your words.
I left that night,you locked my door.

I thought you were wrong,
You said it,
Many atimes,yet I got you all wrong.

I regretted my actions,
You need not to ask how,
I was fooled by my thought,here I am now,

Like a rainsoaked puppy,
Who abscond from home,
Here I am,back on my own.

Sobs!
He did it,
No,I won't say it.

I have to mama,yes I have to.
He killed ...
He killed dad...he killed him..

Mama I was there,
No! I won't say it !
No! Mama ! No! I musnt .

Sobs!
Please forgive me,
I would rather stay in silence.

No!
No!
Mama listen,I killed him,

I was scared,
I was ashamed of myself,
Just let me die!

I did,
But it was alao!
I saw him strangle him to death .

I never knew he was a criminal,
The man I loved,
He... Killed me too mama.

Just let me die,
I have brought shame to our home,
Am 6months pregnant,let me just go.

Mama!
Please open your ears,
Listen to my heart !

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Re: Silence by joseph1832(m): 12:23pm On Mar 19, 2016
Lovely. Nicely written tercet. However, I noticed you didn't use any particular feet or metre structure.

Tell me, what's the theme of the poem, I seem to notice two: despair and regret. Am I wrong?
Re: Silence by mused: 12:32pm On Mar 19, 2016
Both joseph
Re: Silence by joseph1832(m): 2:09pm On Mar 19, 2016
mused:
Both joseph
I don't understand.
Re: Silence by mused: 4:59pm On Mar 19, 2016
The themes for this write are regret and despair. Because as of the time,I was muttering those silence speeches,I had totally lost the hope of moving on,and was as well regretting all that have been caused through me.

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Re: Silence by joseph1832(m): 7:38pm On Mar 19, 2016
mused:
The themes for this write are regret and despair. Because as of the time,I was muttering those silence speeches,I had totally lost the hope of moving on,and was as well regretting all that have been caused through me.
Okay bro. Thumbs up again...
Re: Silence by mused: 5:17am On Mar 22, 2016
Am a gurl not a guy !
Re: Silence by mused: 5:36am On Mar 22, 2016
Silence:
I wander my thought everynight,
I skip meals too,
pretence a friend of mine.
Yet, but I have to live too.

When I lost him,
Nothing else could have been burdensome as this,
Here I am with his twin in my womb.

Who can tell,if he has got his father's gut?
Who can say,maybe mine ?
But I don't want to raise him,
And its too late for me to be a murderer .

I ....
I am sorry.

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Re: Silence by OptimumADE(m): 1:10pm On Mar 22, 2016
Nicely written poems. Mr joseph and miss mused. What a muse musing me even when i refused to be mused. She is mused. I am mused too
Re: Silence by OptimumADE(m): 1:10pm On Mar 22, 2016
Nicely written poems. Mr joseph and miss mused. What a muse musing me even when i refused to be mused. She is mused. I am mused tooNicely written poems. Mr joseph and miss mused. What a muse musing me even when i refused to be mused. She is mused. I am mused tooNicely written poems. Mr joseph and miss mused. What a muse musing me even when i refused to be mused. She is mused. I am mused too
Re: Silence by OptimumADE(m): 1:11pm On Mar 22, 2016
[/color]Nicely written poems. Mr joseph and miss mused. What a muse musing me even when i refused to be mused. She is mused. I am mused too[color=#006600]Nicely written poems. Mr joseph and miss mused. What a muse musing me even when i refused to be mused. She is mused. I am mused tooNicely written poems. Mr joseph and miss mused. What a muse musing me even when i refused to be mused. She is mused. I am mused too
Re: Silence by mused: 8:20pm On Mar 22, 2016
Daddy,oh you are such a darling! Thanks !@optimum

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