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Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 10:41pm On May 30, 2016 |
bummybummy:Will try my best, thank you. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 10:43pm On May 30, 2016 |
Annstar:Thank you dear. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 10:44pm On May 30, 2016 |
Harmonyemerald:Maybe, but I don't think she is. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 10:20am On Jun 02, 2016 |
* 1 Like |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Peterdrumz(m): 9:28am On Jun 03, 2016 |
Nice one but ur updates are slow |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by CuteChiluv: 11:27am On Jun 03, 2016 |
Nice one, |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by queenDD(f): 7:49pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
A wonderful story.. I'm definitely following. Nice one Queenxstar |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Divepen1(m): 8:09pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
Seriously. She's yet to learn her lesson.. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:45pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
Peterdrumz:How fast do you want it to be? |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:46pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
CuteChiluv:Thank you dear. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:47pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
queenDD:I'm grateful Queen. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:49pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
Divepen1:I couldn't agree less with you. 1 Like |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:50pm On Jun 03, 2016 |
Do invite your friends to join the family. Remember to criticize the story, thank you. 1 Like |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Peterdrumz(m): 7:05pm On Jun 05, 2016 |
Queenxstar:at list once per day |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:50pm On Jun 06, 2016 |
Peterdrumz:I have a life , responsibility and profession outside writing so I can't indulge you. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 3:16pm On Jun 08, 2016 |
CHAPTER FIVE She pattered across the mini corridor adjoining the sitting room and froze at sudden sight of him. Relief washed over her momentarily making her forget the four meetings she had been in back to back, how her bones were crying, how she drove back home bare footed and almost walked into her home same way. He lay fast asleep on the four-seater sectional white and purple sofa looking so innocent, adorable and peaceful like a baby. Even today, she couldn’t help the thought of what their children would look like, as she always did every time she watched him sleep and hoped they looked more like her husband. She could have reached out, kissed, embraced him and even shed tears of joy coupled with relief but the anger bubbling within her took the upper hand. How could he be asleep so peacefully when all she had done was worry over him? Her forehead creased and her heart beats quickened. Casting her handbag on the sofa and pulling off her shoes, she marched decisively in her skirt suit to the kitchen. She returned with the sharpest among her collection of knives in right hand, her eyes fierce, and blood vehemently coursing through her veins with same brisk steps she had left with. Her anger fueled at his still-sleeping form. Without pausing to think, she lowered the sharp and cold edge of the knife to his neck and slit. Scrambling off the sofa at the sharp pain, sleep flew far from him and his eyes widened at the blood spurting from his neck. “Jesus…Jesus ” He muttered after he grabbed his neck just for his palm to be soiled with blood. When she advanced him once more like who was possessed with an evil spirit, he used his left arm to bare the attack. The knife fell off her hand to the rug soundless at the sight of so much blood. Panic surged through her; she made to run upstairs but barely halfway, ran back down, picked her bag and fled barefooted. *** Gnashing teeth in pain, he mustered strength, pulled off his T-shirt and wrapped it around his neck. Bent over, he placed his bleeding arm on his thigh and applied pressure. With shaky right palm, he reached for phone which was partially stained with drops of blood and hit speed dial button. “Eni…” He began breathless with blur vision. “Come now. Lillian…stab…stab…” The phone slipped off his hand as he laid sprawled, pain numbing his senses. His right palm applying pressure on the already soaked T-shirt with his eyes closed and breaths laboured. Don't leave without commenting. 4 Likes
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Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by vonn(f): 4:02pm On Jun 08, 2016 |
jeez, what kind of a woman is this? |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by missuniverse(f): 4:57pm On Jun 08, 2016 |
Incredible! |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by lenmafon: 9:23pm On Jun 08, 2016 |
wow! glad to have u back queenstar *gives her an e-hug* how has life been and how was ur program? welcome back. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 9:40am On Jun 09, 2016 |
lenmafon:*Return e-hug* Life has been challenging but I thank God for grace. Program was splendid, I'm working once more. Thank you so much dearest. How have you been? Miss you lots. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 9:43am On Jun 09, 2016 |
missuniverse:You can say that again, as in ehen! How are you dear? |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 9:45am On Jun 09, 2016 |
vonn:A kind of woman we tend to meet or see on daily basis. Hope you are doing well. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by CuteChiluv: 9:52am On Jun 09, 2016 |
This woman s blood the boil oooo,, chaiii, biko come and continue ooo, |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by bummybummy(f): 10:20am On Jun 09, 2016 |
haaaaaaaa!!! Wat kind of woman z dis? |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by missuniverse(f): 10:44am On Jun 09, 2016 |
Queenxstar:very well,thank you Good morning royalty |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Divepen1(m): 12:34pm On Jun 09, 2016 |
SMU for her |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Nobody: 1:14pm On Jun 09, 2016 |
This is serious.. Just have to drop a comment.. Nice work you've gat here. Waiting for more updates |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Nobody: 1:17pm On Jun 09, 2016 |
The is a work of fiction but based on facts... Seem and heard of similar occurrences between couples before, even worse.. Queen, where are you @?? Need to knw how the story unfolds Nice work once again |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:37pm On Jun 09, 2016 |
CuteChiluv:An update comes up tomorrow dear. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:38pm On Jun 09, 2016 |
bummybummy:I tire o. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by Queenxstar(f): 8:40pm On Jun 09, 2016 |
pastorpussy:Appreciate your comment, we'll definitely get to end of it all together. An update comes up tomorrow by God's grace. |
Re: A HOLD FROM THE PAST- Women fiction by queenDD(f): 9:13am On Jun 10, 2016 |
Queen, thanks for the update. The woman has a serious anger problem she really has to deal with asap |
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